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bluewhale9
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 4:40 pm


another manga script I'm working on but have been working on for months I'll release it atleast once a week and believe me its a long series I'm making it is written in script form or like rpg enjoy

Rei: oh crap I’m going to be late (running towards a school)
Shiro: so we’re here
Rei: I hope this goes well
Shiro: Don’t forget what he said
FLASH BACK
King Taiyo: Rei you must go to that school you are the one who has the Tsubasa
Rei: as you wish my king
END FLSH BACK
Rei: I guess this is my room
Ryu: What the Hell is an angel doing in my room?
Rei: I’m your room mate it says on the door the names
Ryu: But you’re an angel
Rei: Gee you think
Shiro: is this demon causing problems for you
Rei: I can handle it Shiro
Rei: I’m guessing your Ryu hi my name is Rei
Ryu: Just stay out of my way and I’m called Ryu
LATER THAT NIGHT
Rei: finally I can take the ring off since Ryu is gone
(Rei transforms back into a girl and uses a spell to change her clothes)
Rei: I think I’ll look around the campus seeing how Ryu won’t recognize me or bother me
Boy1: look at that girl. Hey doesn’t that look like Shiro’s sister
Boy 2: Yeah I saw a photo on his desk
Rei< changing my form is such a pain atleast I can be the reall me I hope no one recognizes me>
Kawa: Hey Rei
Rei: Hey why are you here
Kawa: King Taiyo sent me
Kawa: shouldn’t you be wearing the ring he gave you?
Rei: But once in a while I can be a girl right
Rei: besides I’ll just say I’m Rei’s sister Mizu
Kawa: But
Rei: you worry too much oh better get going and finish packing
Kawa: I’ll help you
(At the dorm)
Kawa: (lifting a box) who’s your room mate?
Rei: A guy named Ryu
Kawa: does Shiro know
Rei: Hey Kawa I’m gonna explore again by myself
Kawa: fine but don’t forget King Taiyo sent me here not just to go to school, but to protect you also
Rei: Relax later
Near a fountain outside school building
Ryu: are you lost
Rei: I’m not LOST I just made a wrong turn
Rei< Oh crap it Ryu>

to be continued
-what is Rei going to do
-will Ryu find out that Rei is a girl
-what does Ryu mean by angel

oh and um everything will be expalined later
PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 2:13 pm


o and please pm me any comments

bluewhale9
Captain


bluewhale9
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 1:56 pm


Rei: I’m not LOST I just made a wrong turn
Ryu: you know you are kind of cute for an angel
Rei: I’m Mizu I’m Rie and Shiro’s sister (sweatdrop)
Ryu: oh so you’re an angel well doesn’t matter to me
Ryu: if you’re looking for Rie’s room I’ll show you to his room
At dorms
Rei: thanks
Ryu: guess he’s not here
Rei: then I should get going
In the hall
Kawa: you should transform into a more boyish like form
Rei: well I should get going to bed
In the room
Ryu: what are you doing here?
Rei: this isn’t just your room its mine too
Ryu: your sister came earlier
In the room in the morning
Rei: yawn
Shiro: yo you’re going to be late for class
Rei: sorry
(Rei transforms her clothes and her clothes change)
Shiro: oh by the way here is some money for lunch
Shiro: starting tomorrow you have to cook for yourself
Rei: yeah I know
Class room
Kawa: hey Rie
Rei: your in class A-1 too
Kawa: yeah but Ryu is also
Rei :< He’s so rude>
Tanjun: Students please calm down today we have a new student
Rei: My name is Rei
Tanjun: Rei please sit there next to Ryu and Kawa
Tanjun: now Kawa would you please show Rie around campus
Kawa: yes Tanjun sensei

to be continued
-Will Ryu find out that Rei is a girl
-how doe Rei know king Taiyo
PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 8:29 am


Kawa: You’re going to be 17 soon
Rie: yes (eating pocky)
Rie: At least today is over
Rie: Kawa do you know where the school kitchen is
Kawa: Yeah it’s on each floor of the dorms
Rie: thanks bye
Kawa: wait let me show you where it is exactly
Rie (chopping something)
Rie: (mixing something)
Rie: (baking something)
Kawa: wow that looks really good
Rie: thanks
Sonkei: Kawa who made all the food
Kawa: this is Rie he made the food
Sonkei: Let me have some
Zaiaku: What about me
Rie: you can both have some
Shibo: I want some too
Kawa: We can’t eat all of it save some for him
Rie: its ok there’s enough for everyone
Kawa: this is Shibo and Zaiaku both are demons but they’re fun to be around
Kawa: Sonkei: is an angel
Rie: nice to meet you
Shibo: he’s so cute glomp (hugging Rie)
Rie: could you get off of me
Shibo: but you’re so cute
Rie: I said get off of me

to be continued

bluewhale9
Captain


bluewhale9
Captain

PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 6:00 pm


Zaiaku: Hey Ryu why don’t you eat
Ryu: why eat with angels
Rie: You don’t have to be so rude
Ryu what did you say
Rie: I said you are rude
Ryu: why you
Kawa: cut it out you two
Ryu: why should I listen to an angel like you?
Shibo: don’t you think you too are being a bit harsh
Ryu: I’m leaving
Rie: you are such a coward
Shibo: Rie is so cute when he is mad
Rie: Get off of me you moron
Sonkei: why is Ryu so mad?
Shibo: I don’t know Zaiaku you’re the closest to him
Zaiaku: He doesn’t like his new room mate
Shibo: Rie what’s the matter
Rie: that b*****d who does he think he is
Sonkei: Well he is the prince of the demons and he always has a new girl friend
Rie: what
Shibo: you didn’t know Rie
Kawa: thanks for the food
Zaiaku: Ryu isn’t a bad person make a peace offering
In the room
Rie: I brought you some dinner
Ryu: who said I wanted anything from you
Rie: You don’t have to be such a jerk
Ryu: anyway I’m going out for a walk

to be continued
PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 5:30 pm


Rie< A least I can change back>
Zaiaku: hey is anyone there
Rie (I’ll just use my fake name) Yes come in
Shibo: Um who are you
Rie: my name is Mizu
Shibo: Rie never told us he had a sister
Rie: have you seen Shiro
Zaiaku: how do you know Shiro?
Rie: I’m his younger sister
Shibo: Kawa how come you didn’t tell us Rie had a sister?
Kawa: You didn’t ask
Shibo: oh you wanted her all to yourself
Kawa (blushes) what are you talking about Shibo
Rie: Kawa do you have a fever
Kawa: no I’m not sick (blushes more)
In a palace
Shoka: You have to master the Tsubasa before you return
Seika: You can not disgrace your family
Rie: Noooo
Rie: it was a dream

to be continued

bluewhale9
Captain


bluewhale9
Captain

PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 1:05 pm


In class
Shibo: Do you have any other siblings other then Mizu
Rie: yeah I have a younger sister and brother
Rie: But I also have an older brother
Shibo: you’re so cute glomp
Kawa: Get off him before sensei comes
Shibo: oh you want a hug too glomp
Kawa: get off me
Zaiaku: Don’t forget to practice for battle class
In the hall
Rie: well better get going and start making a weapon
Rie: do you have some iron and steel
Kawa: yeah why
Rie: I need it to forge a weapon
Kawa: ok here are the materials
Rie: thanks
Kawa: what is that?
Rie: It’s a drawing of what it should look like
Kawa: impressive
Rie (looking at two swords, two guns, and a staff that she made appear)
Kawa: why’d you make extra weapons?
Rie: so I can be able to use different weapons
Shibo: what have we here?
Kawa: I was helping him make weapons
Shibo: you two are very close
Rie: Why were just two guys helping each other out.
Anyway I should get back to my room we’ll go with you
In the dorm
Ryu: Why are you hanging out with those angels?
Zaiaku: they aren’t as bad as you think Ryu
Shibo: Hey what are you two doing?
Shibo: you two must be on a date
Ryu: You are a disgrace to demons
Ryu: you act more like an angel
Rie: You shouldn’t talk that way to your friends
Ryu: Who needs friends like him?
Girl: yeah
Ryu: when you can have a girl like her
Rie (smack Ryu): how dare you say that about one of my friends?
Ryu: I’m going out for tonight

to be continued
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