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hospitalflowers

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:01 am


I wrote this the other day in my English class as an assignment that we had to show part of our personalities.... well, I'm really odd, so here's what I did;

Me, Myself, and I.
Who else do we need?
Together we fly.
Just Me, Myself, and I.

But on Mondays,
Me can't play.
So I turn to Myself,
And I say;

"If Me can't play,
We are no longer three."

But Myself just smiles,
And laughs, "hee hee!"
She does not care,
She does not like Me.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Now, I know it's really lame, but I only had like five minutes to write it because my English teacher HATES poetry with a burning passion.... so yeah.... comment?
PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 4:24 pm


This was entertaining and funny. I love the take on "Me, Myself, and I" as three different characters. It's awesome.

Merenwen99
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hospitalflowers

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 9:33 am


Thanks! ^^ It would be better but I only had so little time to work on it... ><
PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:08 am


I remember having to write a poem like that.

I like the use of the words in the poem. I think the fact it breaks down the grammar rules it allows it to be an interesting read. Cool

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 3:23 pm


Thanks!
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 3:13 pm


haha skitsafrenia is fun. I loved it. it's short but it jsut the right length for the meaning. I loved it.

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 8:53 am


Lol, thanks! ^.^
PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 8:04 pm


That was cute! I liked how you described it as three people. My
family always say to me, "So, am I talking to Me, Myself, or I?" Because I
act like three different people. That was short, but perfect. LOVED IT!! ^_~
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