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 Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 9:04 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:52 pm
 Non compos mentis, indeed! A contrary, conflicted scent, bubbling with merry madness. Contains apple, rose, and lemon.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 11:01 pm
Name of Scent: Eidolon Gender: Female Scent: DELIRIUM Physical description for each stage: Strange even when just a swirling mass of oil, Delirium seems to be swirls of bright apple red, pale pink, and lemon yellow....
Much the same, and even the smoke is multi-colored! Wait...isn't oil incense supposed to NOT smoke...
The insane bundle of joy has arrived! Eidolon's hair combines all three colors of her oil: a wild and tousled mass of waist-length hair that's alternating streaks of red and yellow, with her equally wild pale pink bangs hanging in her eyes. One wonders how she can see through the mass...Her eyes themselves are seemingly normal, until you notice the pupils are pale pink and the iris is bright yellow. Her skin is quite pale, with apple red, lemon yellow, and pale pink streaks scattered about, like someone took a paintbrush to her. Eidolon is skinny, gangly, and non-too-graceful looking...and there's that insane grin that's plastered on her face...Her clothing is just as wild, and she always seems to have dirt, mud, or some sort of 'childhood injury' somewhere on her person. She's also likely to run around topless...O.o;
And you thought she couldn't look any crazier. Nope. WRONG! Eidolon's hair is still wild and zany, but now she's taken to braiding random things in it...like those feathers you get from the craft store, shiny beads of a Mardi Gras sort, and any fake flowers she can get her hands on that won't weigh her head down. The wild tresses are still quite tousled, and are now mid-thigh length, since she seems terrified of scissors. Her skin isn't quite so...streak-covered, but her clothes make up for it. Long swishy skirts and tank tops and flip-flops (otherwise she'd be shoe-less) are the mode of dress, in bright colors that clash, though pale pink, neon yellow, and bright red are her favorite colors. Lots of costume jewelry of a shiny variety is abundant on her person.
Eidolon has calmed down a bit. Yes, her hair is still red and yellow streaked, with pale pink bangs...but she's allowed it to be cut and tamed. So now, it's chin-length and wavy, with the occasional stray strand. Even her bangs have been trimmed so they don't get in her eyes anymore. Her eyes aren't quite so...insane...but are still the same color. Her pale skin only has a few streaks of color on it, mostly covered by clothing. She wears something much tamer...in a way...than her previous outfits. She wears a 3/4 length sleeved, bright yellow shirt that shows her belly button, a pale pink and yellow striped scarf, bright red jeans with the right knee cut out, a pale pink belt, and bright red sandals. She still wears a lot of shiny costume jewelry, and loves cute barrettes and hair pins! Outfit reference Note: the outfit is just a reference...The scarf is longer, and the cut-out isn't so large for Eidolon.
Personality: Eidolon is a bit on the nutty side. She's hyper, always running around, seems to be on a constant sugar high, and has been known to babble to herself in some language no one has heard before; considering she seems to have made it up. The few times she is actually 'calm', she's out of it and doesn't seem to notice anyone unless they fit in her 'world'. She has no scruples, and seems to see things that aren't there. Her 'best friend' is supposedly a seven foot dragon named 'Tommy' that lives in her pillow.
Wings: -shrug-
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 7:50 am
 Name: Deirdre Miw-sher Age: 10 Occupation: Elementary Student Deirdre is the resident kid of the Miw-sher household. She's outgoing, outspoken, stubborn, short-tempered, and well...O.o; A kid. A very active one at that. She's always running about doing something; from trying to turn Ranth's house into a field for hide-and-seek, to playing basketball or jumping in puddles outside. To find she's suddenly being called 'Mommy'...that's a thought beyond disturbing. Finding a name for a Scent, the ten-year-old way: look at name of incense, open thesaurus, run finger down list of synonyms next to name, pick one that looks cool, and yell at Ranth to come pronounce it for her. Then watch Ranth blink and go 'WTF?!' Deirdre is a cute kid. Well tanned skin, boy-short platinum blond hair, big brown eyes. The lean build of an active ten year old, who is slightly lanky. She wears 'boy' clothes normally: jeans, t-shirts, shorts, sneakers, jackets a size too big. Even sleeps in a t-shirt three sizes too big. Deirdre was an orphan Ranth picked up in her travels. She's been with Ranth for about three years now, and can't call her 'Mom'. So, instead, she calls her 'Ran-ma'am'. 
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 7:54 am
Funds
Uh...not enough...
-grin-
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 7:57 am
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 7:26 pm
CREDITS! (c) Shouko
perfume oil (c) Black Phoenix Alchemy Lab
Eidolon & Deridre (c) Amaranthine Miwshir
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:14 pm
She sounds really interesting, especially her colours. Black and gold/amber are so lovely together. She sounds like she'll be pretty hot to trot when she gets older surprised All the guys are going to be fawning over her!
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:30 pm
Oh yeah! And any of the more dominant males will definitely have fun with the fact she'd be at their beck and call if Ranth doesn't keep an eye on her.
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:51 pm
ooba ooba~
Whilst you do have good writing, the scent itself does not match with its actual fragrance at all~ Your "about the smell" post makes it sound like it's something you'd wear before having sex, but her personality contradicts that and her appearance. She's a "sweet, submissive girl," yet she enjoys wearing bondage? I don't think a doormat would be secure enough to wear such clothes. I'm assuming you're going for a "sexy maid/servant" kind of thing, but to be honest, I don't see any correlation between her scent "perversion" and personality. (Only that she dresses like a hooker, but you'd never know because she acts like a sheltered priest's daughter) How is she perverted? I see no signs, aside from appearance.
Appearance =/= character
Also, I think there's -waaaay- too many "OMG SEXY" scents. We have Keiko, who's seductive; Vanyel, who has large breasts when she's older; and Arius, who lives up to the name Mad Love. (To say the least, lmao) It seems like you just combined vanyel's curves, changed mad love's scent name, mixed a little bit of alelisa in, and voila, you got Umi~ You always seem to follow the same formula when making a scent concept. You either make them TOO similar to an already existing scent, or you try to mix several of them together. Put some thought into it~!
Also, this is totally off topic, but I don't think memoirs of a geisha and all those other earth stories don't exist on Midori. (Although I'm not one to talk, haha, Alelisa likes several earth ballet stories~ Need to fix that~)
Why do you keep changing all your concepts, 'Poi? ; 3; Your Gyokuro idea was by far my favorite, but it seems like you make a new concept every week. I'm assuming this is T'Poi, since y'all type the same and have the same concept thread formats~
P.S. -- If this didn't make sense it's because it's 12:50am and I'm super tired. I'll elaborate more once I'm not so exhausted. x0x;;
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:57 pm
I'll address the rest of your stuff in abit...but..I'm not Poi. Poi and I are classmates, same with Grif. That's why our styles are similar; we RPed a lot together during class.
I'll work on responding to the rest of your points now. -starts going through stuff-
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 11:01 pm
Oh, lmao~ xDD
My bad on that part, than. I was assuming 'cause Poi's last post was on March 16th in SS, and your first post (that's on the list, that is) is in SS on March 18th.
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 11:12 pm
Poi actually bugged me to get back on Gaia. I took a hiatus because of problems with someone on Gaia and the mods couldn't really do anything about gross jack-a**-ness. She gave me a few places to go on Gaia that would be good places to get back into the swing, and SS was one of them. Unfortunately, Poi's still trying to get unswamped. I'm hoping she can get back on before end of the month. And Grif...She's still grounded.
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Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 9:41 pm
Despite the obvious non-finished-ness of the thread...WE ARE OPEN AGAIN!
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 8:23 pm
Critiques from anyone on my new idea?
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