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Arnamentia

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:45 pm


I just took up poetry recently. Last night actually. So yeah...


Poison

Your gentle smile, honest words
Deceive me to no end
You've caught me in your web of lies
And I forgive you once again

Your torment slow and secretive
You're killing me inside
And yet you fool me with your words
And this torture you deny

Until this day I didn't think
That it was you to blame
Perhaps now I shall turn the tables
And take your life
In exchange?
PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:47 pm


This one's kind of silly. It's about a place I used to live in and what it's like living in America after having so much freedom in my previous home.


Behind Bars

Once my home was in a dream
An ocean my backyard
The neighbors toads and cats and mice
The city very far

Now I live within a cage
Watched, observed to no end
Everything I do is wrong
My life taken over by man

Perhaps, though - there is a way
To escape this prison cell?
To take my life shall make me free
And end my stay in this iron hell

Arnamentia


Arnamentia

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:48 pm


This is hard to explain so I just won't.


Cougar

I wear a mask - I'm in disguise
Behind my human face, a feline’s lies
Eyes shimmer green, smiling with delight
Waiting to unleash my cougar tonight

Fur like caramel with a belly of white
I stand atop my mountain with much pride and might
But alas, I rarely show my true face
If I did so in public, confusion I would face.

That I am a cougar is known only to friend
And to those I am positive can understand
So if you are curious, lend me your ear
And of the cougar inside I'll allow you to hear.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 10:10 pm


Unlike my other poems this poem doesn't have to do with me or my life. It's just something that I've been wanting to write all evening and finally got around to doing around midnight.

Incantation

Thunder crashes
Night sky flashes
Corpses come to life

Leaves torn from branches
A skeleton dances
This peaceful land now torn by strife

The black drape cloaking the clear blue sky
Set aflame by dragon’s breath
And through the inferno pierces Azrael’s cry
A vow to us all a fiery death

The wind tears plants and trees from the ground
Through all of this madness our chanting goes on
Digging into our flesh the fangs of hellhounds
Our chant never broken, we remain standing strong

Our spell comes to an end
The Earth torn apart
From the fissure creatures of Hell transcend
And upon the end of peace, eternal chaos now starts

Arnamentia


Arnamentia

PostPosted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 8:50 am


Countdown

I’ve wasted much time now
The timer’s almost done
Only a few hours before
This opportunity is gone

The clock’s been ticking, yet I never knew
That so much time I had already lost
All these days I’ve put to waste
Never knowing of waiting’s cost

Quickly, action I must take
There isn’t any time to stake
Before my chances disappear
For the time of departure is drawing near
PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 8:34 pm


NO GODDAMN TITLE

It’s funny how you never see
How much alike are you and me
We seem to get along so well
And my grief your presence quells

It’s funny how you never think
To speak to me, so I’ll make the link
And since I did I’ve called you friend
And my emptiness has reached its end

It’s funny how you never saw
How silence was a fatal flaw
And now our time together short,
No longer discussion may we consort

It’s funny how you never thought
That it was friendship that I sought
And now I’ve found someone like me
How unlucky that we must be

Arnamentia


Teh Purple Empress

PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 6:49 pm


I am published trice internationally at the age of 13, and I say that your poetry is amazing and that you should definately keep writing! wink heart
PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 7:41 pm


Thank you. ^^

Arnamentia


Arnamentia

PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 7:43 pm


It fades

Once we were all bright and lively,
Wouldn’t insult others, wouldn’t hurt one another.
We always talked, laughed, had fun.
But that faded.

She was my best friend, my only friend.
We spent every moment with each other, and we became sad when we weren’t together.
We understood each other, were able to forgive each other for things, but
She faded.

At one time I was happy, fair.
I could forgive people for their faults, I was generous.
People liked me for who I was, and cared about me.
All of that faded.

I met you - we had so much in common, and you were such a kind person.
You were my friend. It seemed like you were my only one - you were the only one who cared about me.
But then you left -
And I faded.
PostPosted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 2:47 pm


Angel In Disguise

Will you be my wings when mine are shattered,
Be my guide when I am blind?
Be the one who knows when I‘m upset,
Even if I say I’m fine?

Be the one to only view my soul,
And see straight past my face,
And love me though I have flaws and faults
And am easy to replace.

Lend a helping hand when I face a problem,
And a shoulder when I’m down,
And cure my sorrow easily
Whenever I might frown.

Be the perfect friend, my wingless angel,
On which my life relies,
And the one who makes me feel complete: You are
An angel in disguise.

Arnamentia

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