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 Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 4:43 pm
Looking at you,
So dark, so tough.
Looknig at your eyes,
a piercing red blood.
Looking at us,
we smile, just faintly,
Looking at my eyes,
A sweet dark black.
I recognize your smile,
you recognize my glare.
A twinkle in your eyes,
And in mine, a flare.
We haven't seen each other,
For a LONG LONG time.
I thought you've fallen for another,
But you've returned still mine.
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 2:04 pm
I love your imagry. your choice of words really brings out the story of your piece. It remindes me of all my x's hahaha. keep up the great work.
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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 8:57 am
I liked it. Very powerful for such a short piece. It shadowed an imagry of
what the person was feeling. Great job!! -chu!
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