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Angela_Christine Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:13 pm
yeh i know it sux and it doesnt have much of an ending but still wat do you guys think?
The Pain of Two Children How could someone do this
To an innocent child
Especially when they were good
And calm, not wild
They never really did anything wrong
Just were dealt a hard life
The cruel words they were told
Were like the pain of a knife
They were told they were stupid
Useless, ugly, and more
These words ripped them up
Like a flesh-eating bore
But thats not the worst of it
Theres more to this you see
There were horribly abused
For another ones glee
They took their anger out on them
Using belt, their own fists and more
Not even pausing
When the tears began to pour
Then they locked then in showers
Of ice cold water
No matter how much they begged
It would never get hotter
There were times they weren't fed
And they would have to find anything they could
They would quietly rifle through rooms
If they found a cough drop the day was good
The worst part is
All they seeked for was love
And every little bit of it they got
Made them feel like they could fly like a dove
Growing up all they had
Was one another
To hold and cry with
In place of their missing mother
They grew strong together
And grew up hating the world
And hating those who hurt them
And let them suffer through wat life hurrled
They loathed the people
Who had the perfect life
Had money, love and happiness
And never felt their pain and strife
How is this fair to them some question
But they didnt care as long as it wasnt some other
They'd endure all the pain again
Just to prevent the pain for another
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 7:26 pm
it reminds me of that poem from As Told by Ginger....lol the one where she wrote about the girl dissappearing and they thought it ws about her but it wasn't or something like that lol
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Angela_Christine Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 7:45 pm
i never saw that one haha
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 7:48 pm
there i go being senseless again sweatdrop in english, i liked it lol
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Angela_Christine Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 7:50 pm
thanxy haha and yeh its a true story
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 9:04 pm
man i feel a little bad for the children makes a feeling of hope but loast in hopelsness if i could sayit like that thers hope and then its gone
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Angela_Christine Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 9:14 pm
wait huh? and that was bout me and my sis
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 9:17 pm
well to me it seem you have hope but you lost it at one time but now you got it back does that clear it up i mean like you dont want to put someone through what you bent through and that s waht give you hope is to help others
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Angela_Christine Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 9:20 pm
yeah that makes sense..........i think its more the fact that i was raised by those people that i wasnt as good as everyone else and that i dont desearve to live and everyone is just much better than me.......kinda like they treated cinderella ya know? so yeah its just written inside my brain that others alwayz come before me so i dono i actually like being this way
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 9:23 pm
angie-4-u yeah that makes sense..........i think its more the fact that i was raised by those people that i wasnt as good as everyone else and that i dont desearve to live and everyone is just much better than me.......kinda like they treated cinderella ya know? so yeah its just written inside my brain that others alwayz come before me so i dono i actually like being this way no sorry no ones better then someone to me i just see a world that is a round and round you die you get another life and you die you get another life and soo on so if iam stupid now how do you know iam not going to be a liveing legend my next time around so do you get this
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Angela_Christine Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 9:24 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 9:35 pm
nm this one would be hard to tell you
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 1:59 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 2:21 pm
sad That reminds me of me now here's mine I call it Nothing but death
There are cemeteries that are lonely, graves full of bones that do not make a sound, the heart moving through a tunnel, in it darkness, darkness, darkness, like a shipwreck we die going into ourselves, as though we were drowning inside our hearts, as though we lived falling out of the skin into the soul.
And there are corpses, feet made of cold and sticky clay, death is inside the bones, like a barking where there are no dogs, coming out from bells somewhere, from graves somewhere, growing in the damp air like tears of rain.
Sometimes I see alone coffins under sail, embarking with the pale dead, with women that have dead hair, with bakers who are as white as angels, and pensive young girls married to notary publics, caskets sailing up the vertical river of the dead, the river of dark purple, moving upstream with sails filled out by the sound of death, filled by the sound of death which is silence.
Death arrives among all that sound like a shoe with no foot in it, like a suit with no man in it, comes and knocks, using a ring with no stone in it, with no finger in it, comes and shouts with no mouth, with no tongue, with no throat. Nevertheless its steps can be heard and its clothing makes a hushed sound, like a tree.
I'm not sure, I understand only a little, I can hardly see, but it seems to me that its singing has the color of damp violets, of violets that are at home in the earth, because the face of death is green, and the look death gives is green, with the penetrating dampness of a violet leaf and the somber color of embittered winter.
But death also goes through the world dressed as a broom, lapping the floor, looking for dead bodies, death is inside the broom, the broom is the tongue of death looking for corpses, it is the needle of death looking for thread.
Death is inside the folding cots: it spends its life sleeping on the slow mattresses, in the black blankets, and suddenly breathes out: it blows out a mournful sound that swells the sheets, and the beds go sailing toward a port where death is waiting, dressed like an admiral.
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Angela_Christine Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 7:37 pm
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