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Angela_Christine
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:13 pm


yeh i know it sux and it doesnt have much of an ending but still wat do you guys think?



The Pain of Two Children
How could someone do this

To an innocent child

Especially when they were good

And calm, not wild



They never really did anything wrong

Just were dealt a hard life

The cruel words they were told

Were like the pain of a knife



They were told they were stupid

Useless, ugly, and more

These words ripped them up

Like a flesh-eating bore



But thats not the worst of it

Theres more to this you see

There were horribly abused

For another ones glee



They took their anger out on them

Using belt, their own fists and more

Not even pausing

When the tears began to pour



Then they locked then in showers

Of ice cold water

No matter how much they begged

It would never get hotter



There were times they weren't fed

And they would have to find anything they could

They would quietly rifle through rooms

If they found a cough drop the day was good



The worst part is

All they seeked for was love

And every little bit of it they got

Made them feel like they could fly like a dove



Growing up all they had

Was one another

To hold and cry with

In place of their missing mother



They grew strong together

And grew up hating the world

And hating those who hurt them

And let them suffer through wat life hurrled



They loathed the people

Who had the perfect life

Had money, love and happiness

And never felt their pain and strife



How is this fair to them some question

But they didnt care as long as it wasnt some other

They'd endure all the pain again

Just to prevent the pain for another
PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 7:26 pm


it reminds me of that poem from As Told by Ginger....lol the one where she wrote about the girl dissappearing and they thought it ws about her but it wasn't or something like that lol

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Angela_Christine
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 7:45 pm


i never saw that one haha
PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 7:48 pm


there i go being senseless again sweatdrop in english, i liked it lol

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Angela_Christine
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 7:50 pm


thanxy haha and yeh its a true story
PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 9:04 pm


man i feel a little bad for the children makes a feeling of hope but loast in hopelsness if i could sayit like that thers hope and then its gone

GOING_WILD


Angela_Christine
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 9:14 pm


wait huh? and that was bout me and my sis
PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 9:17 pm


well to me it seem you have hope but you lost it at one time but now you got it back does that clear it up i mean like you dont want to put someone through what you bent through and that s waht give you hope is to help others

GOING_WILD


Angela_Christine
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 9:20 pm


yeah that makes sense..........i think its more the fact that i was raised by those people that i wasnt as good as everyone else and that i dont desearve to live and everyone is just much better than me.......kinda like they treated cinderella ya know? so yeah its just written inside my brain that others alwayz come before me so i dono i actually like being this way
PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 9:23 pm


angie-4-u
yeah that makes sense..........i think its more the fact that i was raised by those people that i wasnt as good as everyone else and that i dont desearve to live and everyone is just much better than me.......kinda like they treated cinderella ya know? so yeah its just written inside my brain that others alwayz come before me so i dono i actually like being this way

no sorry no ones better then someone to me i just see a world that is a round and round you die you get another life and you die you get another life and soo on so if iam stupid now how do you know iam not going to be a liveing legend my next time around so do you get this

GOING_WILD


Angela_Christine
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 9:24 pm


huh?
PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 9:35 pm


angie-4-u
huh?

nm this one would be hard to tell you

GOING_WILD


FarFromFlawless

PostPosted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 1:59 pm


kool poem!
PostPosted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 2:21 pm


sad That reminds me of me now here's mine I call it Nothing but death

There are cemeteries that are lonely,
graves full of bones that do not make a sound,
the heart moving through a tunnel,
in it darkness, darkness, darkness,
like a shipwreck we die going into ourselves,
as though we were drowning inside our hearts,
as though we lived falling out of the skin into the soul.

And there are corpses,
feet made of cold and sticky clay,
death is inside the bones,
like a barking where there are no dogs,
coming out from bells somewhere, from graves somewhere,
growing in the damp air like tears of rain.

Sometimes I see alone
coffins under sail,
embarking with the pale dead, with women that have dead hair,
with bakers who are as white as angels,
and pensive young girls married to notary publics,
caskets sailing up the vertical river of the dead,
the river of dark purple,
moving upstream with sails filled out by the sound of death,
filled by the sound of death which is silence.

Death arrives among all that sound
like a shoe with no foot in it, like a suit with no man in it,
comes and knocks, using a ring with no stone in it, with no
finger in it,
comes and shouts with no mouth, with no tongue, with no
throat.
Nevertheless its steps can be heard
and its clothing makes a hushed sound, like a tree.

I'm not sure, I understand only a little, I can hardly see,
but it seems to me that its singing has the color of damp violets,
of violets that are at home in the earth,
because the face of death is green,
and the look death gives is green,
with the penetrating dampness of a violet leaf
and the somber color of embittered winter.

But death also goes through the world dressed as a broom,
lapping the floor, looking for dead bodies,
death is inside the broom,
the broom is the tongue of death looking for corpses,
it is the needle of death looking for thread.

Death is inside the folding cots:
it spends its life sleeping on the slow mattresses,
in the black blankets, and suddenly breathes out:
it blows out a mournful sound that swells the sheets,
and the beds go sailing toward a port
where death is waiting, dressed like an admiral.

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Angela_Christine
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 7:37 pm


wow ur good = )
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