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 Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 3:52 pm
Sakura sat in front of her telivision Gamecube controller in hand trying to defeat the last boss in her favrote game before she left on her pokemon journey. Sakura was a pretty girl her long green hair just touched the small of her back and he r green eyes shone in the light of the tv screen, she wore a short green dress and a pair of black footless tights along with green sneakers. She smiled as she deliverd the final blow ending her game.
"Sakie Professor Birch is here" Sakuras mom shouted up the stairs, sakura quicly switched off her gamecube and telivision and slid down the railing down the stairs. her mother looked at her appauled by her apearance but sakura was 13 years old now and long overdue for her trainers leave so she was excited.
((will continue a bit later))
She stared at Professor Birch eagerly smileing big form ear to ear tugging on the bottom of her dress.
"hello sakura i see your all ready to leave on your journey but where is your bag?" He smiled and sakura suddenly realised she had left it upstares and ran to get it placing a potion form her pc inside as well.
"i'm ready now professor" She smiled and stood happily in front of him.
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 5:38 pm
Not bad for a beginning. Gamecube Games are a pain to beat near the end. xp
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 8:21 pm
not bad at all! if you need any help proofreading it let me know!
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 1:44 pm
no one commented mine.........
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 12:47 pm
I think it was really cool i liked it alot i cant wait for more ^_^
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 1:55 pm
Guillotine Of Deception I think it was really cool i liked it alot i cant wait for more ^_^ heh heh...................................... sad ........ crying ........ xp
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 11:35 pm
Sakurathecatgirl8787 Sakura sat in front of her telivision Gamecube controller in hand trying to defeat the last boss in her favrote game before she left on her pokemon journey. Sakura was a pretty girl her long green hair just touched the small of her back and he r green eyes shone in the light of the tv screen, she wore a short green dress and a pair of black footless tights along with green sneakers. She smiled as she deliverd the final blow ending her game. "Sakie Professor Birch is here" Sakuras mom shouted up the stairs, sakura quicly switched off her gamecube and telivision and slid down the railing down the stairs. her mother looked at her appauled by her apearance but sakura was 13 years old now and long overdue for her trainers leave so she was excited. ((will continue a bit later)) She stared at Professor Birch eagerly smileing big form ear to ear tugging on the bottom of her dress. "hello sakura i see your all ready to leave on your journey but where is your bag?" He smiled and sakura suddenly realised she had left it upstares and ran to get it placing a potion form her pc inside as well. "i'm ready now professor" She smiled and stood happily in front of him. ya same here really good start could i join you on your journey.
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