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bluewhale9
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 1:44 pm


Flash back
Shuji: I’m sorry but I’m moving to America maybe one day we’ll meet again
Ai: I’ll be a great detective by then
Tetsu: Hey don’t forget I’ll be an actor by then and you’ll have to be my body guard
Sai: I’ll have married Shuji by then and be the wife of a photographer
Tetsu: Don’t get lovey-dovey in front of us
Ai: One day when you guys get back from America promise we’ll meet up again
Back to reality
Ai: I had that same dream again well its time to go to work
Ai< My name is Ai I have that same dream every night since Shuji and Tetsu left for America. A few years ago my best friend Sai left to live with Shuji now they have been married for 3 years. I don’t talk to them anymore I haven’t for 13 years>
Dog: bark
Ai: Alright Momo I’ll feed you now
Ai< This is Momo my dog I am now a famous detective in Japan just like I always wanted yet I am not happy….>
Momo brings leash over
Ai: alright you want to go for a walk
Ai< I have been living in this house since my grandparents died taking care of the last funeral arrangements it been five days since the funeral my grandfather died of cancer this year my grandmother died when I was very little>
Momo starts running up to a stranger Ai accidentally lets go of the leash
Shuji: Hey I wonder if she still lives here
Tetsu: well I read the papers I doubt she does cause I heard the people who lived here died
Shuji: Hey Momo
Ai: How do you know my dog?
Tetsu and Shuji hug Ai

-why are Tetsu and Shuji back
-why did leave 13 years ago
-what happened to Sai
PostPosted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 1:25 pm


Tetsu: It's us we came back
Ai: Tetsu Shuji you guys are back in Tokyo I’ve been reading the papers you guys have finally come home and you are famous
Shuji: Yeah but Ms Detective you are sooo much more famous in Japan then us so we came to beat your level of fame
Shuji flicks Ai in the head
Ai: come on in to the house its raining
In the house
Ai: I haven’t seen you guys in 13 years not even a postcard
Tetsu: what happened to the old guy?
Ai: He died last week right now I’m on break from work to close up the house
Shuji: There are so many memories here
Ai: Oh what happened to your wife Sai?
Shuji…
Tetsu whispers: we came to Tokyo to look for her
Ai: Any way unfortunately today is the day I leave to go back home
Tetsu: well we just wanted to check out the place for old time’s sake
Shuji: Why don’t we stay with you in Tokyo at least till we get an apartment
Tetsu: you have gotten better at cooking
Flashback
Kitchen explodes
End flashback
Ai: yes I now only stop explosions from happening not making them anymore
In Tokyo apartment
Ai: this is it I heard you guys are working in a big movie together
Shuji: Yeah the director says it has to be big he wants new meat on the set
Tetsu: So did you get a boy friend yet
Ai: No I haven’t dated not ever
Shuji: so the detective never had a boyfriend yet
Ai: shut up< that is because I’ve always been in love with you but when I introduced you to Sai you guys fell in love and she abandoned me>
Ren: Mommy I’m home
Shina: What is for dinner?
Tetsu: You said you never dated how you become a mom
Tetsu faints

bluewhale9
Captain


bluewhale9
Captain

PostPosted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 6:50 pm


Shuji: Let me guess you adopted them
Ren: Mommy who is this?
Ai: This is your uncle Tetsu and Shuji
Shina: Ren you have to stop calling her mom
Suzu: Just call her Onee-san
Ren: But isn’t a mommy somewhat that takes care of you?
Shina: Yes but…
Ren: Then she is my mommy
Shuji: How old are you three
Ren: I’m 8 years old
Shina: 15 years old
Suzu: 12 years old
Ai: can you guys stop arguing Ren you can call me mommy if you want but you know
Ren: No that lady isn’t my mommy
Ren: You are my mommy
Suzu: 26 years old with five kids that is our mom
Shina: Now you are calling her mom
Ai: Go to bed Ren so that you can wake up early so we can visit your sister at her job tomorrow
Shuji: have you talked to Sai recently
Shina: Don’t talk about that woman in this house
Suzu: Damn it Mister you are pissing us off
Ai: That is enough you two
Glares at them
Ai: I don’t talk to Sai anymore Shuji not for years and I would prefer you not discuss her in this house again
Next day
Shuji: you made breakfast
Tetsu: the house didn’t explode and it tastes good
Tetsu: Remind me to marry you
Tetsu glomps Ai
Ai: I’m cooking right now you’re making it difficult for me can you get off
Ai kicks Tetsu
Ren, Suzu and Shina walk in
Shina: Oh look the old farts are up

to be continued
PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 1:03 pm


Ren: Mommy are you ready to go
Ai: yes Tetsu and Shuji enjoy breakfast I have to spend time with my kids
Ai: Oh and later Go is coming over so you guys can have fun catching up
Shuji: we haven’t seen Go in along time
Ai leaves
At studio later
Ren: Nee-chan Nee-chan
Hina: It good to see you
Hina: Mom your back from the funeral
Ai: Yes and also we’ll have some guests staying with us for a while
Tetsu: What are you doing here Ai?
Hina: How dare you talk like that to my mother?
Shuji: SO she is also one of your daughters
Ai: Yes
Shuji: wait don’t you have five daughters where is the fifth daughter
Hina and Shina: Grab Shuji
Hina: don’t discuss things like that here
Shina: You will only cause more problems for yourself
Director: Ai I’m begging you please be in the movie you would be perfect please
Ai: Fine what character do you want me to be?
Director: We want you to be a young singer named Ritsu who is in love with Tetsu
Ai: All right but I refuse to have any interviews
Director: Alright
Ren: Mommy don’t forget Go sensei is coming later
Shuji: No way Go is a teacher now
Tetsu: You didn’t know didn’t S… I mean she tell you
Hina: Can I talk to you in private late
Shuji: fine
Later at the house
Ren: look someone broke into the house
Hina: It must be Sai again
Shuji: Why would my fiancé do that?
They walk in to see Sai holding a knife
At the studio
Ai: Where is Hina?
Shina: She went back home
Ai: director I need to leave early
Ai runs
Ai: taxi please
Guard: Yes right away mam
At home
Sai: Why couldn’t you have died?
Sai points knife at Ren

to be continued

bluewhale9
Captain

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