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halfmike
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 6:28 pm


Dignity and a Movie (title pending, but i think it sounds cool!)
Chapter One

In case you didn't get the memo, here's whats going down...
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I thought maybe he'd start out whining about the project and about how hard the requirements are, so we meet the character and maybe he goes out to a party and meets the clinger. He starts filming and his character is revealed though what he films and writes. We also see this in the relationship he has with the clinger. The movie starts to take all his time and he gets sucked into it, as the girl runs after him as he becomes even more involved with the movie. Finally, we see the girl give up; however, the main character realizes his love for her. He runs after her unsuccessfully and become depressed. Finally, we see the main character in his room watching the movie and the girl comes in, and they realize that they both need to change for each other (and subsequently make out). Fade to black and roll credits.

Chapter one is basically the exposition... and I'm sure you all know what that means lol... We introduce the characters.

The outline goes as follows:
- Guy (name pending) is a freshman at UCLA and for his final project, he has two months to make a movie.
- That night, he goes out to a bar and drinks a bit, and meets a girl (sort of punk if not sort of emo, we call her the clinger). After a few rounds, she gets his number and he leaves, but she follows him outside and gets him to take her home with him. In his room, he explains a bit about his life and she glosses over the reason why she is so clingy, not directly. (She's an art/photography student btw.) He also glosses over his problem of getting close to people (his father was in and out of his life and whatever else we can come up with). She is afraid of being alone, so she sleeps in the hall.

A lot of it will have to be made up on the fly and edited I guess.

We're also going to need editors:

(the names would be here if we had any)

So this is how it's going to go down:...
Someone/multiple people write a section of it, we discuss it I guess, and that repeats until we agree that the chapter seems good, and the glaring plot holes are fixed. Then we could maybe get an editor (I wish... lol) to... edit our work, and it is compiled and posted somewhere (pending).

Any questions or should we start?
PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 9:39 pm


The words rang in Doug's head like a mantra or a repeating bass line in a catchy song. "Fifteen Minutes," it repeated. Fifteen minutes was the length of the movie he had to create in two months for his final project. This made it impossible to tape random events in the street as a movie and pass it off is avant-garde. No, what this meant to the crowd of freshmen, was that they had to write and direct an actual plot.

In Doug's class, the word "plot" was like a terrible disease, because when you started to write substance, you sell out, and lose the impression of being an art-tiest. So, it was normal for a freshman to hit the bar, face down, the night after the news hit.

The freshman movie was a tradition for young UCLA students. Nobody thought of it as a big deal. In fact, it was customary to suck it up and accept your fate, a C+ and a long list of suggestions.

He had never been into the same things the other kids were in to, at least most of them. Black sweatshirt, listening to Death Cab for Cutie, making plans to see the world, he was so young and naive. His head hit the bar as he took it all in. All the scenery, all the time he would spend here instead of working, the whole procrastination complex filled his mind.

A voice rang through his ears unexpectedly. "You look sort of young," it said. Doug's head slothfully rotated to its left. The voice had come from a girl, about Doug's age. Her black hair was back in a ponytail and a tight pink hoodie hugged her body and led down to her black studded jeans. Her converses made her a perfect cliche.

Something about her made Doug think. He didn't know if it was the fact that he saw some of him in her, immature and adolescent or that he was lonely, even since high school. However, he didn't want to get involved with anyone. He didn't really know why, maybe it was his last girlfriend he had in high school. There was a reason he tried to escape.

halfmike
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