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The Worst Mistake

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LadyKyaThePure

PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 5:35 am


The Worst Mistake

I am the boy
Who was robbed of all his joy
I was treated like a toy
To now that I’m sad and coy;

I’ll tell you how it began
I thought I was the man
Having fun and being a fan
To her I’d thought she’d not ban;

I loved her to the fullest
I thought she was the best
She was one of a kind for zest
Although she wasn’t perfect I lest;

She departed to be nothing more
She just went and left me sore
I fear I shall never soar
To great heights of ultimate restore;

~~~~~~~~~~~~

I am the girl
Who was treated like a pearl
Who always liked being a lil’ rural
But now I just want to hurl;

I’ll tell you my side
I won’t let time bide
I regret now my pride
Cause our lips will not collide;

I tell you now
Don’t follow and bow
For you’ll regret and plow
Your life with scars and a heavy brow;

Ruined is his mind
I felt I’d release the bind
But apparently I was blind
Because of me our love declined;

He is now gone from me
From my life and won’t let me see
Please God! Hear my plea!
This is not how I want things to be;

~~~~~~~~~~~~

We talk of what was at stake
Now being friends will not be cake
If we begin again, we will not make this mistake
For this is the worst to ever make.
PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2007 2:01 pm


good.. but it seems you forced the rhymes... You know what I mean? but its still good work.. biggrin

RedDwarffer
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Prisnor Of My Life

PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2007 10:11 am


NikkouTheNinetales
The Worst Mistake

I am the boy
Who was robbed of all his joy
I was treated like a toy
To now that I’m sad and coy;

I’ll tell you how it began
I thought I was the man
Having fun and being a fan
To her I’d thought she’d not ban;

I loved her to the fullest
I thought she was the best
She was one of a kind for zest
Although she wasn’t perfect I lest;

She departed to be nothing more
She just went and left me sore
I fear I shall never soar
To great heights of ultimate restore;

~~~~~~~~~~~~

I am the girl
Who was treated like a pearl
Who always liked being a lil’ rural
But now I just want to hurl;

I’ll tell you my side
I won’t let time bide
I regret now my pride
Cause our lips will not collide;

I tell you now
Don’t follow and bow
For you’ll regret and plow
Your life with scars and a heavy brow;

Ruined is his mind
I felt I’d release the bind
But apparently I was blind
Because of me our love declined;

He is now gone from me
From my life and won’t let me see
Please God! Hear my plea!
This is not how I want things to be;

~~~~~~~~~~~~

We talk of what was at stake
Now being friends will not be cake
If we begin again, we will not make this mistake
For this is the worst to ever make.


Its good, but the rhyming could have seemed less forced
PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 10:46 am


i love it. it's really great, good job heart

demonicprinces

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