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RadicalFox

PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 11:33 pm


Yes the title is correct. Get Cerealistic. This is a fanfic that I wrote a while back for the pairing RikuxSora from Kingdom Hearts. The word Cerealistic is something that I made as a mix of meanings. Cereal sounds like Surreal (out of the ordinary) and there's also "Realistic" in there. and it's called Cerealistic because the chapter titles sound like cereal ads. get it? lol I thought it was clever and lame at the same time. Uh, because I wrote this before I got in Dozier's class, the level of writing is ok-ish. I'm keeping it in original format until I get to Ch. 2 cuz that's where I stopped and make it better.

I yet again state that this is a YAOI! Well it's actually shounen-ai right now cuz well, it is. but maybe, one day, it'll be a yaoi. lol

Disclaimer: I do not in anyway own the Kingdom Hearts series! If I did, Kairi would have burned in an everlasting fire, and Riku and Sora would have been making out on that beach!

Get Cerealistic

Chapter 1 part a: Cu-cu for Riku's Puffs

Riku's POV

"Okay then, let's go. Fish!"

"Taco..." I drawled out.

"*weird stare* Uh, Riku, what does a fish have to do with tacos?" Sora asked.

"I'm hungry, so sue me. Haven't you ever heard of fish tacos Sora? You need to get our more." I chuckled.

"You're one to talk Mr. Tall-Dark-and Isolated. Anyways, on with the game! Palm tree."

"Paupu fruit."

"Ocean."

"Fish..." I yawned and laughed at the brunette's glaring expression.

"Surfing!"

"Radical..."

Sora and I would always play this game. We sat on the beach in the evening about an hour before sunset, the tropical sun lighting our figures from above the horizon. He would say a word and I would say the first thing that came to my mind. I always thought it was fun and stupid at the same time. I only enjoyed it for the sake of spending some time with Sora. The game itself was pretty stupid. I always knew how to stop the game when I got annoyed with it. I always won.

Always... right?

Sora stood up with that determined look in his facial eyes.

"Sand!"

"Beach." I sighed.

"Shore!"

"Sky..."

And I smiled up at him, his eyes softening with realization of what the last round meant. Sora sat next to me once again staring at the sun slowly fall below our sight. He turned towards me. What was this look in his cerulean eyes?

"Riku?"

I stood up and offered him a hand.

"Sora."

He reached up to take my hand and before his hand came in contact with mine I blacked out.

TBC...

sorry, I got lazy, lol it's almost 1:30 in the morning and I'm sleepy so this chapter is getting divide in two. There's a lot of dialogue in chapter one as a whole. Gomen! but whaddya think so far? lol oh and as a note! when Riku and Sora said Shore and Sky, Sora only reacted that way because Riku means shore, and Sora means Sky for those who didn't know. ok bai bai!
PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 3:23 pm


hey hey no blackin out! You know you never finish your fanfics XD

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