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xXx_Onii-san_xXx Vice Captain
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 Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 7:11 am
Good morning/afternoon/evening my fellow guild members, and I hope that you all will love the poems that I will feed to you. All of my poems mean a ton to me, so don't steal them. Add as much comments as you want, and I look forward to making a bunch of new friends!
( I usually have a lot of poems, but I only wanted the best that I had to be featured here. As I write new poems, I'll be sure to post them for you all. )
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 7:15 am
"A Whisper in the Wind"
A soft whisper in the wind..
It sounded like you.
I ran in the direction it came from.
"Come to me." It said.
"Come to my loving arms."
I felt alone, discarded
amongst the soulless puppets.
We were played with, loved,
Then thrown into the toy chest,
Never to be seen again.
Your voice caressing my broken heart.
"Let me hold you for ever."
"Let me take away your pain."
You wanted to mend the cracks,
The holes in my heart.
You came to the toy chest,
And picked me up with utmost care.
Unlike heartless monsters who crave
To see a broken heart bleed.
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xXx_Onii-san_xXx Vice Captain
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xXx_Onii-san_xXx Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 7:16 am
"Life Fought Death"
A boy picked up a pen,
and wrote his mind.
A young girl grabed a pencil,
and made art.
A child opened it's mouth,
and spoke it's first word.
Life fought Death,
and Life won the battle.
A rain drop fell into the ocean,
never to be seen again.
A hunter found a deer,
and ate happily that night.
Life fought Death,
and Life won the war.
A body died, yet
the Soul lived forever.
Life fought Death.
In the end, Life won.
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 7:19 am
"Bleeding Hearts"
Our hearts, small, red, and fragile.
"Handle with care!"
For they can be easily broken,
at the drop of a hair.
Only time will decide how long
till it dissapears.
"Help! My heart as been broken!"
"What should I do?!"
"Young child, were the words she spoke
to you.. Were they true?"
Slowly bleeding, a heart starts to die.
An attempt to save it with tape and glue
Has left it alive, yet infinately broken.
A heart, torn apart by love.
It never stood a chance.
A heart, killed by the mysteries
of Love's confusing dance.
Now, a heart melts away slowly,
slowly with a sad glance.
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xXx_Onii-san_xXx Vice Captain
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xXx_Onii-san_xXx Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 7:22 am
"Empty Arms"
My Love, My Sweet,
Why did you have to go?
My Joy, My Happiness,
You know I miss you so.
My World, My Life,
Please, come back home to me.
My Wife, My Eternity,
My arms are now forever empty.
My heart is cold,
My hands are bleeding
My world is shattered,
and my body is left freezing.
So why did you go?
Please, come back to me.
You'll know I miss you so
With my arms, forever empty.
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 7:23 am
"I Love You"
As the tears were being shead,
and the blood was being bled,
you held me close, and said,
"I Love You."
As the snow began to fall,
I heard a voice begin to call.
It said, "No matter what,
I will always love you."
The darkness was gripping harder,
and the light was beginning to foder.
then your love caressed me and said,
"I love you. Don't give up."
now, ruled by light,
our love won the fight.
and as i now hold you in my arms, i say,
"I Love You."
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xXx_Onii-san_xXx Vice Captain
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xXx_Onii-san_xXx Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 7:25 am
"Seasons"
As I sat in the cool fall breeze
and watched the leaves gently fall,
I thought about you, amd smiled.
As I sat inside, and stared up into the sky,
I watched the snow fall gently to the ground.
I thought about you, and smiled.
As I looked up at the gentle spring rain,
I cried a little bit, because of how much i missed you.
then, i thought about you, and smiled.
As I slept, during the summer nights,
I dreamed of a future, consisting of you and me.
I smiled, and thought: "I'm glad i'm in love."
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 7:40 pm
The first three are absolutely fantastic! *huggles* Tragic romance.....shifting into love and hope XD (oh, how fun XD) They flow well, despite the lack of a ryhme scheme ^^ (but it's not quite free verse....what to call it?) The visual is great, too...weather...action...like a word-movie XD (sorry I'm such a spaz when I critique gonk )
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Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 12:45 pm
i'm a poet myself and i must say i loved the poems...there flowing even though they dont rime..the themes are great too tragic love but it all has a sort of symmetry to it, like it tells a story, a story of emotion and feeling rather than action.i hope to here more of your poems.keep on writing!!!!
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Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 8:34 pm
Richy-kun,
All your poems are so inspiring!
Your an amazing poet!
You should get your work published 3nodding
With every poem, I can feel all the emotion and feelings that most likely inspired them, it's a very beautiful way of expresion *shiny eyes*
From
-Miss l33t
(Remember, you gave me that nickname! It really stuck 4laugh )
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 12:43 pm
I like the first one. I feel almost as though it's unfinished, like it has a few more lines waiting somewhere....
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Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:41 pm
The poems are great they made me think and I liked that.
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xXx_Onii-san_xXx Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 5:49 pm
wow! I'm suprised!!
Don't think that those are the only ones i have, there is plenty more in my journal!
Thank you for those who love them, and for those who hate them, don't. It's not like i've got a natural god-given talent to write poetry. I'm just a normal person, who writes based on my feelings, which for the most part, are sad and somewhat depressing. but that's besides the point. I'm glad ya'll loved them, and if possible, be sure to check the rest of them in my journal.
Love,
Onii-san
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