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 Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 5:42 pm
Mmm. heart
Weakness, pulchitrudous
Stuck in imagination.
Hope, intelligence
Dreams imprison me
so that I will never be joyful
Never filled with happy..
Crazy, secluded
That's what I am
Yearning for more than to see the flower
Oh, so much more. Can I
run? Should I run? I do not know..
Can I hide? Should I hide?
Indecisiveness runs me so..
Never filled with knowledge..
Twisting and turning
Bleeding and screaming
My eternal melody deep inside
lurks with confusion and hate
Hate to not know the truth
Hate to know that I'm good
Hate to know that I am not in your eyes.
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 5:43 pm
Oooh.... nice.... for some reason I see it as a song by like Evanescense or something.... hope you don't take that as an insult o_o...
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Clouds_Lover Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 5:48 pm
OMFG WTF THAT'S SO MEAN. biggrin OMO:
kidding. I love Evanescence. Actually, the song Crazy, that it's the muse of, is by Kidney Thieves. It's really by someone else, but I forgot.
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 5:56 pm
hehehe its just that my eng teacher, omg her again, says that good poety can be heard as a song ^_^ and yeah I see your poem as a song x_x lol too much english!
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Clouds_Lover Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 6:06 pm
Aww, thanks! I'm thinking of writing an anger one so that I don't feel angry before I sleep.
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 2:15 pm
Strong? Would strong be an appropriate word to use to describe your poem? I quite like it though it does make me a bit sad to see the sadness in all of your poems.
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Inorganic Lord Rosiel Captain
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 6:25 pm
Maybe that emotion is the driving force behind her poems, you know? Somethings gotta spark it so mebbe a hint of sadness does it. I dunno o.o throwin out an idea heee thats all I do XD
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 6:28 pm
Well yes I know that's the emotion driving it and that is why I felt a bit sad.
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Inorganic Lord Rosiel Captain
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 4:41 pm
Writing is my stress reliever. I've been having a lot of stress lately by many things, and yeah. It's sort of being fleshed out through literature, if you know what I mean. Ahh, so much to do this weekend, so little time.. It's okay though.
I have an audience, at the very least. x: I love writing. It's the best thing to do for me when I'm ultimately farther down than just crappy. But, I'm glad you see the sadness that I push through it all.
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