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Staraya

PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 5:52 am


Well, hey, as I said in the title, I require a beta tester (or person to check through) for a story of mine. I would post it up but to be honest, I would prefer a private sort of critique and besides it’s already 43 pages long *shrug* I really hope someone here is interested as I really like people to read my stuff and to comment, especially as detailed as a beta tester. If you are, then please PM me.
Right, for those interested, about the story.

It’s a story in a similar style to Steampunk but has many fantasy and sci-fi elements too. It’s just a huge blend of styles and genres (except chick-fic gonk ), but that’s the point. As a basic overview, it’s set in world where there are Factions, or civilisations of people from different time periods, but all in one world, i.e. Renaissance, WWII etc. It follows several characters as they discover they are not only fighting for their own lives and the preservation of their Faction, but also the balance of their world.


I know it doesn’t sound like much on here, but trust me I am not only very proud of this but immensely protective. If you would like to be the beta tester, or one if a few of you reply (which I hope you do because you all seem so lovely!), then you must promise not to claim as your own, plagarise or steal my ideas >.< *paranoid*

Also, I would like a beta tester who is thorough. Not only do you highlight typos, errors, misspellings or occasionally the odd malapropism, but you comment on parts that don’t work or don’t make sense, suggest how to make them better or just say what you like. 3nodding
As I say, if you are interested, PM me or post here. Thank you for your time. Love you!


EDIT: Still looking for more betas. The more the merrier and all that. Also, please don't post here; just PM me. I don't hang around here enough to notice when someone posts. sweatdrop

EDIT 2: I should also probably mention some stuff in warning about this. This story includes several topics that some may find... vulgar? I assure you that any such controversies are deliberately portrayed in a negative manner, as I do not agree with them and do not wish offense. I think that this warning is unnecessary as there are far worse books out there, but I don't want people being all "Ergh, you pervert/[blank]ist/weirdo etc" or Holier-than-thou at me.
PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 5:28 pm


Sounds interesting... I'm probably not the best grammar and spell checker... but I can do my best. I will give you my honest opinion or I'll just read your story if you don't want me to critique it... all up to... if you feel like you need someone I'm here. mrgreen

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