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Sayuri_Tsukiko
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 1:22 pm


Just some random story I conjured up! Enjoy!!


She clasped the I-pod in her hand, well aware she was being followed. She really should have taken the I-pod off, but she kept thinking, after this song, after this song. It wasn’t turned up that high, she could hear couldn’t she, after this song, she’d take it off. But then another song would come, and it would be another faivrioute of hers, listening more to the songs on her Mp3. But then it got to the end of the play list. Silence. It was raining too, if water got in the contact it would break the Mp3, so she covers it in her hand and then looks behind her. Nothing. Maybe if I run, she thinks, run home I’ll be safe, it won’t get in, nothing will get in, and I’ll be safe. She should have started running then, but it was raining, and she had no coat or umbrella, there’s a bus stop so she hides beneath its gloom to take cover. Examines the graffiti on the red brick wall. She hears something, like footsteps, but not quite like footsteps. Something large. Something not human. Her heart begins to thump wildly, and a she feels a rush of adrenaline. She closes her eyes, not willing to see what it is, what it looks like. I’m going to die, I’m going to die. “HULLO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”



“FOR THE LOVE OF LASGANA PETER!!!!!!!I WAS TRYING TO TELL A GHOST STORY!!!DAMM YOU!!!!”

Peter winks at his sister and says “ Really? Don’t sound scary to me, besides, why were ya talking to ya self, that don’t make no sense!”

“YOU MORON! CAN’T YOU SPEAK PROPERLY!!!! You should have said that DIDN’T sound scary to me, and why are YOU talking to YOURself, that DOESN’T make ANY sense”

“Jeez no needs to shout Jess, Gawd, get a life!”

“RIGHT THAT’S IT” Jess then began to wallop her brother over the head with a giant inflatable hammer (awww sibling rivalry)
PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 2:40 pm


It's cute, but you switched from past to present tense in the first part of the story.

Cebelrai


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PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 7:16 pm


Strange XD
PostPosted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 8:40 am


Yes very strange....I guess I was kinda of hyper when I wrote it

Sayuri_Tsukiko
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Meth Labs
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 9:49 am


Interesting... sweatdrop
PostPosted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 11:01 am


You are an EEEEEEVIL LITTLE PIXIE!!

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Sayuri_Tsukiko
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 12:37 pm


Indeed, actually I don't like it, and I have no idea why I posted it in the first place redface sweatdrop
PostPosted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 2:04 am


There there, little girl. Do not cry. domokun

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Sayuri_Tsukiko
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PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2007 11:56 am


I DO NOT CRY!! EVIL PIXIES DO NOT CRY! HOW DARE YOU !!! rofl
PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2007 2:45 am


Technically you just 'cried' out in outrage, so yeah.... LIAR!!!

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