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In the mountains of the Dragon’s Land rested a spread out city called Agon. It was a city of at least only maybe 600 people spread out very thinly. The trees grew in abundance and in many varieties but the sun still would shine through very brightly. Every once and a while you would come across an area where about 5 houses would be grouped together where the hills weren’t as steep and from that area a path of dirt and decaying leaves would start out to some where else. The somewhere else was the heart of Agon where the people would meet at times when called. The people of this used to be “human” as they were called but something happened hundreds of years ago.

Once when they lived by the shore with the other humans but a witch of power rose up against the dragons the allowed all them to live there. She was convinced that the dragons had killed her father and her husband and was going to proclaim an unceasing war against them. A family with the last name of Zenfo stood against her saying truth that the dragons not only let them live on the continent but protected them as well. She was angered with this so she cursed the Zenfo family and any who agreed with them regardless of age or status. All the cursed were intended to look exactly like young dragons but all of them cursed weren’t fully affected. After all of them had been cursed she told her followers that they were the beginnings of an army raised by dragons magic to fight against them, and that they should attack before it was too late.

Much the city they all lived in was destroyed while vicious hunters and angered fools burned houses and frightened even those who were still full blood, demanded to know where the cursed were. Many humans both normal and cursed were killed that day, but many more of the cursed suffered more loss. Few of the cursed escaped many of them still young children with strangers to rely on. They fled into the forest hoping that all attacks would cease there but unfortunately mankind was not so kind.
Even years after this hords of angry men would chase them farther into woods until they finally reached the mountains. This time the mobs seemed to stop coming once and for all but to keep it that way they continued to progress into the mountains. Finally they believed they could be safe so they took up the land great fully and made it their own. After all this in time they called it Agon, but more importantly they called it home, but they still continued to hope it could stay that way.

nothing else? anything I could possibly change to make it better? question ninja

you mean "crutigue"?

I've been trying to work out the plot and everything and what not how everything will be introduced in the story so some things more may change. you'll see.
Still the same basic idea though.