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Da_Black_Knight

PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 11:49 am


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Alright, this is DBK speaking. I'm a senior in high school, and I'm on a mission to bring better grammar, spelling, and writing style to the world of Gaia, and failing that, to this Guild.

See, we're in a writing guild, right? So let's play the part! Here, I'll be making "house calls" for your grammar needs, as will anyone else who chooses to help me. Simply state what you want to grab more info on, and I'll be glad to search the web until I find what you're looking for.

I will also be giving general info on things that seem to be pandemic in Gaia: commonly misspelled words, improving personal writing style, and generally making writing on Gaia better.

As I've said before, if you want to help me, or think you can do a better job at this than i can, please let me know. I'm going to need all the aid I can get, believe me!

Thanks for your time;
-Da_Black_Knight; DBK
PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 5:13 pm


I support this movement and encourage you to continue. A suggestion I can give you is make this an actual sub form with other forms inside of it such as a grammar class or a spelling class where you earn grades. You could have to type a paragraph or something and post it then whomever is allowed to edit ((A teacher)), can say what mistakes they found or illuminate what they found somehow, change color or something, and for each mistake, make them do something. Be it kiss someone or embarrass themselves some other way.
Maybe have a No Word Allowed section where you have to go to type an exam or something and you can't use Word to correct errors. Granted this would make a trust issue because you cannot check to see if word was used but if it's obvious like they have the wrong two or something, they could have to go back threw the classes maybe.
Another fun class would be "How to RP" where you get the basics on what's a Mary Sue, what god modding really is, and what to avoid when making a character. I know that we should all know said topics but I think most of gaia still creates Mary Sues and godmodding people because it's what everyone else does and if they don't, they'll get swamped.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 7:35 pm


Maybe you could do what we did in my English class this year: make a list of words not to use. For example, my teacher said she saw that 'a lot' was used tons of times in essays that she read. So she said that she didn't want to see us using it in our papers and to try to use a synonym (sp?) for 'a lot' instead. So maybe you can do the same and make a list of words that are used too many times and that we should try to replace with a different word. You probably couldn't force us not to use the words, but you could challenge us to.
PostPosted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 5:28 pm


many good ideas (and i was beginning to worry that gaia was giving me the cold shoulder on this one!)

if i had the time (30 mins +) id do this, but time is precious to me right now: ill find the time to do it later. ty for ideas!

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 11:00 am


So... what are you going to do? You just have this subforum sitting here you have to decide on what to do sometime.
PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2007 12:37 pm


Perhaps not a school with grades so much. (heaven knows I can't stand more grades...)

Perhaps more of a school with a tutorial that shows what is the mistake and what is correct.
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PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2007 7:53 am


I think his idea is, but i am not sure, to give examples of the things most commenly done and why its wrong and what it should be. And if there is anything anyone wants to know put it here and someone will help you find it. I think that is his idea but I cannot be sure because I am not in his mind.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 11:22 am


I think this is a great idea. I know I am not perfect at the grammar and spelling (especially spelling) thing but I see people on Gaia that are much worse. THe things that bother me the most though, are txt tlk or whatever you want to call it. >.< I'm not sure the classes with grades would be such a good idea. I know I don't want to be graded over the summer. I agree that we could just have people mark what was wrong and then we fix it.

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 10:29 am


Idea - each student has their own thread. Than Professor BK can give each a lesson acording to their learning style's, pace, and levels.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 10:49 pm


I like that idea!

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 12:47 pm


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Idea - each student has their own thread. Than Professor BK can give each a lesson acording to their learning style's, pace, and levels.

It shall be done! (that requires knowledge of who is actually here....)
PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 9:33 am


lol, Yes it does, and it lets you know who is interested in learning.

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frdee

PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 3:34 pm


I'm here! And I am interested in learning!
PostPosted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 5:19 pm


I have a few ideas!

1) Commonly used words and synnonyms((sp?)) to help with better writing
2) Comonly misspelled words to help with spelling
3) Run-on sentences and phrases

And maybe it it is to help writing styles: . There is so much in writing that it people understood it would be awesome!

Vignettes
Similies/metephores
hyphinated modifiers
TITLES (very fun but very hard)
Symbolism
Ways to develop characters
What makes a good story

I don't know. I get carried away...I don't know if all that is possible but that is stuff I want to work on. I don't know if I spelled those words right or not... >.< But yeah. Fun stuff. ^_^

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 6:42 am


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