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 Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 11:11 am
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Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 11:16 am
This is a Story I made when I was younger. It may have bad grammar and spelling. It is a good story. I have the 2nd story but unfourtanatly it is unfinished. I hope you enjoy. Please vote the story. I mean tell em what you think and all that.
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Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 11:18 am
 Long long ago in a land of Fire, Ice, , Earth ,Water, Air, Illusion, Mist, Time Light ,and Darkness. Dragons lived with humans peacefully but dragons thought a council should be made as for some humans can be untrusting . Each dragon appointed a human from each elemental land and gave them each a elemental power but as time passed the lord of darkness thought he should be most powerful of all the council members. So they banished him to the farthest part of the Dark valley. Before he left, he said I’ll return and destroy you all! Several years later he came back just as he promised . Suddenly all the lands plunged into a war. Many died but in the end good won the war. The council did not kill the dark lord .Instead they put him in the dungeon of silence, but his family lived on. They couldn’t use dark magic any longer.
Decades later 9 young girls were born each girl got a tremendous amount of gifts. The 2 most precious were the gifts from the Dragon’s king. The first gift was an everlasting friend. A baby dragon. The second gift was a magical gift to control an element. Princess Eileene was given fire , Lady Leandrea was given Mist. Princess Estella was given power of time lady Marina was given the power of water, Lady Emma got the power of ice. Princess Naomi was given Earth. Princess Torie-lyn was given illusion. Lady Sara was given Air .There was one more that had a power but it didn’t come as a gift it came as a curse of anger and hate . This was the Dark lord’s daughter, Kiera . She was also given a dragon, but got the power of shadows.
Ten years have passed. So here is our tale. Eleven-year-old Eileene sat beside her dragon friend, Aurora . Suddenly her older brother came.
He said “I’ve got a few before Im of to the dragon ring. Wanna talk.
“Huh “sighed Eileene ‘Brother. Why do you have to go!?” “
Because this . . . is my chance! “ ”You’re chance?” Said Eileene “ Huh!! But..... but............. When will it be mine!” “Soon.” Said Jordan “ Ask ‘Dad’
Bye brother I’ll..... miss you..” Eileene sat there twirling her fingers suddenly a swirl of fire was floating in her hands .ahh .she closed her palms ,’Swishhhhh’ the fire went out. “ Oh, by the dragon`s fangs!”........ Leandrea walked to the ledge of the lily pond. “I wish this mist would disappear ‘ffffwwwsh.’ “Wow that was.........quick? o....k. “Oh my, a pansy pink lily!” Leandrea said to her friend the Mist the dragon.
“Don’t take another step.......look
.” Leandrea looked.“ Oh!” Her foot was barely to the very edge of the concrete. “Oh! Silly me!” Her blonde hair swayed and hazel eyes sparkled. “ I was almost in the water! Thank you, Misteria” .
“Your welcome!” Lea said “ Misty..............” “Huh! I want time to stop. To finish this last chapter.” Said Estella Crialla. She sat at the fire and said “ You never know you might get what you wish for. Tomorrow is the council party,”
“What a drag ! I wanted to start Ella Enchanted. Oh well! .Better get reading.” ‘Tick tock tick tock.....’
“Wow, I finished. ‘The Little Mermaid ‘!” “ Wow! It’s lunch time. But it felt like time stopped.” “‘Well..........” said Crialla aren’t you hungry.” Said Estella “ Yes, my princess.........................”
Lady Marina stood on Sapphire Lakes docks.”Titan ! Can we swim?”
“Yes.” Said Titan “Haaa. Nice and warm!” “Titan! This is awesome! Get on Marina. We’re going under!” ‘Splash!!!!’ “Wow! I love it down here! Wait how can I..” “Mmmm.........” ‘ Splash’ “Hahaahha!
What just happened? Are you ok, my lady?” said Titan
“I`m ok . I’m tired. Let`s go to bed..................................”
“Com’n in from the darkness.” “Mmmmmnnnn. Aaaaaaaaa........”. Boomed Tori-lin`s voice. She was practicing her magic mirror song.
“Shouldn’t you be getting ready?’”Said Mirage “Yes.” Said Tori . “Naomi should be here soon. Very soon.” “Should I wear...? “Whoa is that a...................... Never mmm-mind.”
At the council everyone was talking and active. Naomi saw the other daughters of the council as she sat on her own. There was Estella ,Emma. Eileene Tori-lyn, Marina, Leandra, and Sara .........................CRASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! “ Ahhhhhhhhhh!” Went the lady of Eleusine. She was the land illusion council member. Naomi looked up. There was a girl about 12. The same age as herself. She had purplish black hair with violet eyes and blood red lips. Suddenly her violet dragon shot a black lightning bolt at a wall. Suddenly Naomi saw the Fire King plunge to save his daughter. ..................................................... “DAAAAAADD!!!!!!!!!!!” screamed Eileene. Eileene fell to her feet crying. She looked up to see the figure who had hurt her father. “Eileene .........” said the king. Suddenly the daughter of the Earth kingdom came. She said “His arms are bleeding.” All the princess’s gathered. “Here!” Said the lady of Tinea Time City . She handed her a scarf rap. “ Place it around his arm.” Eileene did exactly that . “Don’t bother. “ ”Why?” “Because.....Never mind. “ Said the king. “Go to the Dragon King. I’ll miss you my Little Dragon.............” “FATHER! No!” Eileen grabbed her father`s hand. “DON’T GO !” Everyone sat there silent.............The next day at the funeral everyone was filled with sadness. But no ones heart was filled with more sadness and anger.... Not as much as Eileene............................... Kiera sat at the edge of demon rock meditating . “Kiera?” Said Shadow “ Yes.” “Why ................did I kill King Blaze?”
“You should know what happened 20 years ago! They put him there . I don’t even know if he is still .........alive. I killed him, to revenge my dear father, Demoniac!”
“ What’s happened to the happy little girl?”
“............I was never her ! I never met him. But I, still knew him. In a way. He’s apart of me and will always be........................................................”
Sara sat by the portal to the Dragon Zone . She now had everything that she needed. They’d be there a while . Suddenly she wished she could read every other person`s mind. A wind passed by her. As if it talked to her.It said “Everything is fine.” ‘Whoosh’ the portal opened. Everyone jumped in. “Oh, no, these things make me feel dizzy. “She said as she stepped in the portal. ‘Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa’. Bang. “Now just step through.” Said Sara “I knew that.” said Emma ‘fwishhh.’
Eileene sat at the Dragons Kings’ palace. “Hello, young ones.” Said the Dragon King. Then he looked at Eileene “You look....................Oh, you’re his daughter.” A teardrop fell down her face . “ He’s gone.....................” “Oh.” Said the Dragon King “He.... he said to come to you. It must be time.” “Time for what ?” asked Emma “ You’ll see ........................”
Emma sat there at the Dragon King`s castle.The king took out a box.”When you each were little, you each were given a dragon..............” “So what?”..............said “Emma, well you know.Youall have special abilities..................But when we gave them to you 9 girls. We gave you magic abilities too. Emma you have Ice, Leandra Mist, Torie -lyn Illusion, Naomi Earth, Sara Air, Estella Time ,Eileene Fire Marina water .......................” “ But you said there was 9 of us?” Said Emma . “Yes, there is 1 more. Kiera.The Shadow’ s gave her darkness. They reached her just in time .At that time she was filled with anger. So they got her on the dark side.” “Why? Why, at that time?” Asked Estella.
“Because King Blaze....” said the dragon king. “It was just after...He had put her father into sadness. Long ago the Dark Lord thought he should be the most powerful.So King Blaze banished him. But.............then.”
Estella stared at him and said “ But then he came back with more force. Which plunged all into war. In the end the guardians won. The king punished him with the dungeon of silence!” “Oh no!” said Emma...............................
“Wow! What was that?” “A vision.” Said the king. “Your parents were just like all of you.” “What? They were Guardians too.............?”
Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz ‘wuh’.........................................As I was saying.” Said the king. You are all Dragon Riders.” “What!?.................................................................”.
‘Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhha’ “OH ya, right!”
“It`s, true!” “ Mm-y..............” “Your father said that...because he wasn’t sure about it .Because he didn’t want you to end up like your mother.............. “M-m-my mom.”
“At least all of your parents were Dragon Riders. Lorraine was the greatest Fire Rider ever. All the evil feared her power .Your father loved her to death .Do you know why he stared at you every moment? Why he would not let you be a dragon rider? Because you’re just like your mother in every way! He was worried you’ll end up the way she did.” Said the Dragon King. “Oh daddy, didn’t have to worry...................but Im glad he did.”
“ Now these are for you.” The king took out a golden box .When he opened it inside were gems. A light blue, green, orange, yellow, sea blue, red, and light purple gems. Each with brown leather string at the end.All glowing.Except for one dark purple. Kiera whispered “Naomi ..................................................”
“Your highness.” “ Yes.” “ The dark witch has just been spotted.Near Unicorn Glades ...............” “Ok girls, summon your jewel power.” “ How do we..............” “Close your eyes, Emma.” ‘Wwhoosh’ suddenly Naomi felt a surge go through her. She opened her eyes. She looked absolutely brilliant! She wore an emerald green top that had long sleeves, and a long green pair of pants with a gold triangular pattern at the bottom of them. It allowed a little bit of her leg to show. “WOW!” said Emma looking nice in a fur trimmed outfit...................................
‘Ha’ “They think they can beat me. Ha! Yeah, right shadow !” “Yes, my lady!” “Tell General John to expect company!” ‘Hha h ha h hah .........................’ “ Soooooooooooooo, how are we going to get there? How are things with your dragons of course.”
“Whisper!”
“ Ya, so you better get going!” Sara jumped on Whisper. “Let`s ride!” Said Whisper. Suddenly Sara felt herself lift into the air.Than Sara heard Emma say “Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa .................” EILEENE`s mother watched from the heavens. Loraine, the old guardian of fire noticed the sorrow on her daughters face . “Oh, my dear daughter, you are always searching ...........................for answers .Believe me.You’re me ...............a reincarnation of me in a lot of ways.You shall learn that the past repeats itself.Your father knew that he cannot stop time............ I miss you with all my heart. If only you knew that .......................” John sat on top of a dragon waiting for the dragon riders. Just a few minutes ago he got a message to destroy them. A message from the Queen of Shadows. “So.” said the dragon A-krith. The dragon of souls. “ Who do you think the dragon riders are?”
“I`m not sure.” replied John...............
“Sir, the dragon riders have been spotted.” yelled one of the men.................. As they approached Unicorn Glades Tori suddenly felt a wave of anger cpme over her . “Hey, we don’t have any weapons..........” ‘Wow!” Said Emma. She held a spear that was engraved with ancient letters. “How did you?” “......I just said spear of ice I summon you!”
“O-k. Ill try . “ said Marina “Um. Ax of water. No.Um Triton of water ! Hey, look what I got!” said Marina.................. Eileen stared at her face with joy ............ “Hey, Eileen! Why so...............oh my... I see. “Jjj-ohn!” Eileen stared at her older brother with pure joy as she got off Aurora . “Jon !!!!!Cedric!!!!” Eileen ran to her brothers. “ I`m so happy...to suddenly.... Jon.” said Eileen
“You shouldn’t be here............”
“Yes. I should the Dark Queen is attacking”. Suddenly Jon”s eyes went dark. “No! i-t cant be brother! Your ........one of her men. Aren’t you?” A tear fell down her cheek .Jon reached for his sword. “...I don’t want to do this.......Men were leaving”
“ ...but ....”
“We’ll kill them another day!”But secretly in Jon’s head he didn’t want to fight his sister. .................... Estella stared after General John in amazement. “ Wow this must hurt” said Estella “Your own brother works for the dark sorceress.” Eileene started to cry.Suddenly Eileene cried “Ireci MAI sEbEl brother ............” “ Hmmmmmmmmm tougher than they look.These guys may just be a challenge..............”. And this is the beginning Dragon riders ..... E ileene L eandra E stella M arina E mma N aomi T ori -lyn S ara
.....they will encounter many things on there journey through Shadows. Things like love, anger, hurt, betrayal, and more.............................................. The End
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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 4:12 pm
On a dark and stormy night...   lovely story, touching
awesome work if you wrote it a long time ago
i wouldnt've been able to write anything like it :]~<3 A bunny came to my house! <3
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 8:58 pm
Great story! The grammar is a bit off, but that's the only flaw I can find with it. Why not have someone proofread it before you publish another story?
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