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IndieIce

PostPosted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 2:48 pm


Tabby slammed her hand onto the bedside table, her hand fumbling for the switch that would stop that infernal beeping that had interrupted her sleep. Finally finding the button she forced it down. Her hands were weak, as most peoples’ hands were after just waking up. She ran her hand through her hair before embracing the early morning cold and getting up. The light switch flicked on as she pressed her hand against it; Tabby squinted at the sudden burst of light. She wandered down the corridor and into the bathroom. As like the rest of the house it was pristine. With white tiles and walls, of course with matching towels and mats, it was crisp and clean, as her mother said. The early morning sunshine was enough light already, since it bounced off all the gleaming tiles and nearly blinded anyone that walked in. Tabby pulled the cord for the shower and let the water warm her.


After 10 minutes Tabby had finished. She had pulled on a pair of lazy blue jeans and a plain, red t-shirt. This was partly to annoy her parents; they had an obsession with white and minimalism. They seemed to have a phobia of colour! Tabby ruffled her freshly dried, mid-length brown hair before walking down the stairs slowly. Like the bathroom, the rest of the house was white, although it had dots of peach and light beige colours. In total it looked less like a house, and more like a floor of a spaceship. A few paintings hung in random positions on the wall; even these added no colour to the walls. Most were watered down pictures of strange objects. Much like Tabby’s parents. They too were pristine at all times, only smart suits and ‘sensible’ clothes ever came into contact with their skin. Both office workers and both equally bland…in personality and appearance.


Tabby took as long as humanly possible on the stairs before having to face her ‘nit-picking’ parents. She feebly walked into the kitchen where both were sitting. Saying nothing as usual she wandered to the cupboards and began to rummage for something normal to eat. After a few minutes she gave up; after all the cupboard was full of the gunk that her ‘alien’ parents ate. She morally refused to site at the table with them, since they would pick some sort of fault with her from close quarters. Tabby hoisted herself up onto a counter and began to sift through her bag. As usual her parents where engrossed in an article in ‘Business Weekly’, of course too busy to notice their 14 year old daughter! After a while her father finally looked up.


“Oh…good morning dear!” He said unemotionally. The same tone he used for everything he said. Her father, Marcus Bailey, was a tall fellow. He had hardly any hair and small slits for eyes. Her mother on the other hand…was…hard to describe. Still weird but she looked like a walking, talking Barbie doll. She had bright, almost luminous yellow hair that never moved from its position on her head. She never wore the bright clothes that Tabby’s dolls wore; oh no, her mother (Stephanie Bailey) wore only the dullest of colours. Grey suits to work, grey clothes for casual. Maybe even white or black, or maybe she would go crazy and wear peach! Even her eyes were a dull grey colour; matched her personality.
PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 8:54 am


I can't finish it right now cause I have to go but the first coupe paragraphs were really good. You use really good imagry and woodchoice. Those are things I have some problems with. In other words you're great with detail and I can't wait to read more =]

FenderSkaface
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FenderSkaface
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 1:28 pm


No actually I hate it. Everything I said was a lie.



JK.
April fools. *who cares if I'm a bit late?*

Rawr. I need to post more stuff but I hate typing up stories cause usually I write them down first....
PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 10:11 am


RIGHT This is some more that Ive been writing, its still nowhere near finished but heres just some more to read lol.

IndieIce


IndieIce

PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 10:12 am


Tabby smiled sourly and went back to looking through her small yellow bag. She had picked it herself, she loved annoying her parents with bright colours. Inside she had sneaked an apple, pear and a chocolate bar for later. She covered the food up with her papers and then zipped it up. The papers were doodles and stories she wrote when an idea came to mind. She looked at her parents and jumped off the counter. On the way to the door she mumbled a goodbye and swung the door to the outside world shut. It was like closing off the alien nation and entering the normal world! Tabby breathed heavily and sighed happily. As usual she saw Max leaning against a wall along the street. He waited for her there everyday. He wore the same bright colours as Tabby herself and had dark hair, soft features and a great figure. As he saw Tabby approach him, his face broadened into a wide grin and he enveloped her in a hug as she leaned up to his cheek. She gave him a quick peck on the cheek then slipped her hand into his. They began to walk down the familiar cobbled streets and into the town.

“So how’s the mothership this morning?” Max understood Tabby’s ‘position’ and he had a similar situation himself
“Oh fine, just fine. Their latest issue of Business Weekly arrived this morning so they both had their noses right in it.” Tabby laughed and gratefully accepted the headphone Max had handed to her.
“Don’t I know that?!” Max laughed and scrolled through his ipod directory and selected their favourite song pushing it back into his pocket.
“Why did UFO magazine come?” Tabby laughed although she knew that was what they received. Max nodded and mimed the fight that went on between his parents to win who would read it first. Tabby smiled and moved up to him a bit more as Max wrapped his arm round her waist. She stuck her tongue out at the people who were looking at them like they were freaks (the miming) and then sighed happily.
Max’s parents were both alien obsessed. They were science mad and worked from home…in the lab they built in the garden shed. They also had 3 telescopes and sat on them all night, sleeping most of the day. They wore bland science outfits with sweaters and checked trousers. That was his mother too. They had both met at some sort of science convention 18 years ago.
As they both passed a corner Tabby stopped immediately, noticing a advert on a shop window. It said-


Journalists & Photographers WANTED

The Loom is looking for budding journalists and photographers to bring a teenage perspective of some stories.

They will be roving reporters.

INDEPENDENT!!!

Apply at-

The Loom
3 Freeman Street

Reply ASAP-Limited Spaces!



Tabby’s eyes lit up as she read it. It was the break she and Max were waiting for. He was an amazing photographer and always wanted to do it publicly, if not professionally. Max grabbed her shoulders and looked at her, sharing his excitement. Tabby grabbed his hand as they turned and began to flee down the street towards Freeman Street. They skidded round corners and tripped several times. It didn’t faze them though; they were way too exited. As they reached The Loom’s HQ they stopped to straighten up. First appearances and all! They caught their breath before walking in calmly. Max held onto Tabby’s hand as they walked side by side to the main desk at the back. She could feel how nervous he was but it didn’t bother her…she was sweating as much as him…! The receptionist looked up with that permanent cheesy-ear-to-ear smile they always had.
“Yes…? Can I help you?” The Receptionist spoke in a fake happy voice, you could tell the forced cheerfulness in her tone. Tabby looked at Max and then leaned onto the desk.
“Yeah, we are here about the advert you have going for journalists and photographers?” Tabby smiled, trying to make the best impression possible.
“Oh yes! Have you got any examples to show me?” The receptionist swatted Tabby’s hands off the desk so she had to stand up.
“Oh sure…” Tabby immediately swung her bag off her shoulder and began rifling through it for her writing. Max mumbled another yes. Tabby looked up and noticed that Max had done the same, only he had a black backpack full of more stuff than Tabby’s. There was a brief moment of silence, only rustling papers for a while until Tabby and Max both handed their work over. The smiling lady sat at the desk quietly until Tabby dropped her heavy, filled jotter pad onto the lady’s desk. She jumped up in fright and then noticed the photo album and jotter pad sitting on her desk, longing to be read and looked at. She smiled at the pair standing impatiently on the other side of her desk and picked the two collections of work up into her arms.
“Well, looking at these, it’s going to take me a while to read. So if you come back tomorrow we will give you the verdict” She smiled then swiftly disappeared into another office closing the door behind her.
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