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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 6:45 pm


Okay, I'm bored, so I just wrote this in less than two minutes! lol

So yeah, here's the new poem! ^.^

Friends

My friends say I'm too stuborn,
To watch them when they fall.
My friends say I'm too stuborn,
To even care at all,

But they don't know the truth,
Even if it hit them in the eye.
They won't know the truth,
They think I'm way too shy.

But it's not fair the way they think.
I care for them, I really do.
Maybe it's they, who are too stuborn,
To even see the truth.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 9:00 am


It was very good. I'm surprised no one commented on it. It's well written for
a two-minute poem! I wonder what you could write in twenty minutes, if
your short ones are good...try it!!! heart

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