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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 6:52 pm

Oh my goodness, another quick poem! lol
Okay, please don't hate me for posting two quick poems, I won't post anymore tonight!

Hate

Hate, hate, hate.
It's a rather silly word,
The H, the A
The T, the E,
All so little,
Yet, all so strong.
But how come,
Since we have destroyed
Things that came before,
We can't defeat this word,
We can't get rid of this word...

Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 1:23 pm

Thought provoking? Definitely! It's true- four little letters can mean so much. Same's true with love, I suppose...
A few of the lines seem a little incomplete.
'Since we have destroyed
Things that came before,'
That flows a little better, right? (someone please say it does!)
Just a thought...

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hospitalflowers

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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 11:21 am

Eclipse Bloodmoon

Thought provoking? Definitely! It's true- four little letters can mean so much. Same's true with love, I suppose...
A few of the lines seem a little incomplete.
'Since we have destroyed
Things that came before,'
That flows a little better, right? (someone please say it does!)
Just a thought...

Hmm.. you're right, I'll change that right now! ^.^

Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 12:24 pm

Thought provoking. I like the first few lines where it's like you're pondering over the word and then come to the comclusion that its a silly word. Nice.

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Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2007 6:32 am

Another good poem. It can be very powerful. You have a real talent!!!

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