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Kitsu Hamika

PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 8:27 pm
I can't explain my self at all
And all they want, and all they need's
all I don't want to need at all.


Okay so for language arts, we are writing poems differently. I showed them to my mom, and she started crying because they were so emotional. Then we had a moment there.. I loved it whee heart But anyways, Ilse also liked them, and my dad, and my friend XD So I figured I should post them here and see how people like my talent. Here they are!


I do not want them to....
Know who I am.
To know every single thing about myself and more.
To not wonder why I am the way I am, or why I am not this or that.
I don't want to be a dictionary, where someone could just look me up and know exactly who and what I am.

I do not want them to know who I am.
I want to keep secrets from them.
I want to know more about myself than they do.
I don't want to be able to not tell them about myself and them knowing already.

I do not want them to know who I am...

Alyssa F.




And heres my other poem that my mom found extremely emotional XD



Stages of Life

Listen my child and you shall hear
Of all the things that you have not to fear.
Through and through as life goes by,
It may seem slow, but oh how it flies.
Through life you'll find the stages in three,
Younglings, adults, and the old you see.

Such as when you were a little boy,
Playing with all your gadgets and toys.
In the world it seemed as if you had no care,
All that you wanted was a teddy bear.

And then you were an adult, or teenager as to say,
You still didn't care all that much as love started to sway.
You then got married and moved from home,
For you and your wife to have a life of your own.

And now you are a man, getting older and older.
Your grandkids are off to college as your days get even colder.
Your family will weep for you life is almost at an end,
But at least before you die, you will have those hearts to mend.

That is life, my darling son,
So keep this advice for years to come...



I hope you like my poems! Once I write more, I shall post them here!


The walls start breathing
My mind's unweaving
Maybe it's best you leave me
 
PostPosted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 4:30 am
I like the second one. But I still dislike poems. <<  

AkiraFujita


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PostPosted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 9:58 am
Theyre both cool! domokun  
PostPosted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 12:23 pm
grrr akira. why do you dislike poems? and thanks : P

hehe thanks. i liked them both too XP  

Kitsu Hamika


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PostPosted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 4:27 pm
crying so beautiful crying  
PostPosted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 4:28 pm
awww *huggles*  

Kitsu Hamika


ybyxk

PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 5:36 pm
0_o~
I loved it~
I try to sing it out with pretty musics..........but I'm having cold, so couldn;t do it............
I wish my speaker would work, and then I'll record it down or something...........

(I'm not a good singer, but I'm a good melody-making person........I don't have the instruments so even when I did sing it out....it might sound not as good.............but I think a nice poem should always go with some sort of beautiful music..........................)

P.S.is actually really hard to make the musics for the second poem......  
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