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PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2007 9:10 pm


This is part of a much longer book I'm working on... I'll post more if people seem interested, and I would really appreciate any input.



Twilight kept floating in and out of reality. The questions were blurring together. At first he thought he heard Amen’s voice, then he was sure that it was Morning’s. The light burned his eyes and his vision was blurred by tears, but he fought them open anyway. His vision fooled him as much as his hearing. He thought that he saw Morning’s face, his coffee-with-to-much-creme skin, but the next instant it seemed to glow green, and his face was replaced with their father’s chissled features.
“Where is she?” Morning asked, the same question he had asked every day for seven years.
“I don’t know.” Twilight gave the same reply, “Father believe me, I don’t know!” he screamed as he felt the fire rush through him again and again. His organs were exposed, but his limbs were bound; there was nothing he could do to stop the pain. His vision flashed again, the image torn between Morning and Amen, and he was amazed by how similar they looked- they had the same exact build.
“I don’t know!” he screamed again, unable to look at what was dripping down his exposed back from above, scortching fur and dissolving flesh as it fell, “Please, father! I don’t know! He didn’t tell me!”
Morning twitched involuntarily. He was never sure what those screams were about, but he hated it when Twilight compared him to their father. He had done it on the day he had died, and it seemed that he had never stopped doing it. He knew that it would only make his torture worse, so why he continued to do it completely escaped Morning. He supposed that Twilight was still not ready to talk, and was still trying to hurt him, trying to argue with him.
“Oh stop it Sek!” he bellowed, and a few of the minor demons fell back into the shadows involuntarily at the sound of his voice, “Aren’t you tired of this game yet, kitten? Just tell me where they are, and what they’re planning, and I’ll let you go.”
“I don’t know!” Twilight screamed in agony as the liquid above him tipped and fell, scortching his flesh and pooling up in the small of his back. He tried to flail, but he was held tight by steaks that hooked through his wrists and ankles, he only succeeded in tearing his flesh and adding a new coat of the bright red lubricant on top of the magenta stain that had already formed. He slipped a few inches further down and the liquid that had collected splashed and took tiny pieces of flesh with it. He screamed again, “I don’t know!” and a light flashed on in his eyes, “Please Morning,” he begged, “my brother… Please, don’t hurt me anymore… You know that I would tell you, if I knew. I haven’t seen them. It’s been so long… Why?”
“I don’t believe you.” Morning said simply, without inflection or changing the expression on his face, “Release the bees.”
“Please!” Twilight screamed, “No!”
They fell into the sticky pool that had once been his skin and fur. It was malable now, after the burns he had received, and moved like playdough. The bees were, of course, upset by this, because they became instantly stuck, and unable to fly away. Twilight squirmed as the hell-bees fought for their lives before giving up and sending their venom through his battered, broken veigns. They pulled at his burnt flesh, but to no avail- their carcases would rot there until the flesh healed and popped them out. It always healed.
“You bring it on yourself.” Morning knelt, so as to be level with Twilight’s face, “If you would only tell me what I want to hear… Use your brain, kitten. Tell me what I want to hear, even if it’s a lie.”
“I never meant to hurt you.” Twilight meant to murmer, but it came out as a scream. “Never.”
“Then why, kitten?” Morning asked, taking Twilight’s face in his hands and smoothing the skin there, the skin that had been below the splatter, the perfect, flawless, iridecent skin under a thin layer of their mother’s fur, “Why did you help Amen? Why did you try so hard to keep me from my son? You knew he was my only request. You knew that he was all it took to keep me happy. Why did you try so hard to separate us?”
“Mom said,” Twilight began after taking a deep breath, but Morning cut him off.
“I don’t care what mommy said!” he bellowed, and raked his hands down Twilight’s face, in the same manner that he had been caressing, only exerting significantly more pressure, so that when he pulled away, he had to clean the flesh out from under his fingernails. Twilight hadn’t screamed when he had pulled it off. “I’m so sick of ‘mommy said’ and ‘mommy wants’. ‘Mommy didn’t want me to tell you!’ You’re going to talk, Sekra. You’re going to say what mommy didn’t want you to say if it takes a billion more years of this! You think that you’ve seen it all by now, don’t you? I’m able to light half my house with the candles I’ve made from your severed flesh! You’ll keep healing, and I’ll keep thinking of new ways to hurt you! It’s my realm, I’ll think of lots of new pain, and lots of new senses to feel it with! You’re going to talk!”
“You give this speech every night, super sadist.” Twilight hissed and jerked his head up, killing several of the bees who had been squirming there as the skin on his neck was healing, “I think you get off listening to yourself. You’re one of those guys who keep a mirror over your bed, aren’t you? I’m sure Lil appreciates it, after all, you still have all of your angelic beauty.”
“You’re quite possibly the stupidest person I’ve ever met!” Morning bellowed so that they entire room shook, “Do you like pain?”
“Please master,” Twilight spoke in his most mocking of voices, “more more more! There’s nothing you can do to me that I can’t heal from, and after all this time, I’m starting to get a taste for-“
He had fallen silent because Morning had produced two objects. One was a small, round mirror, the other was a dagger with a golden hilt. Twilight’s eyes grew larger and rounder as he stared upon the two items. Morning sat the mirror down and covered it with a cloth. As he did, Twilight lowered his head and whimpered, in the pitiful way that only a kitten can whimper.
“Now, Sekra,” Morning hissed, “Would you like me to cut you where it doesn’t grow back?” Twilight whimpered again. “Then why don’t you tell me what it is that mommy is doing?”
“She didn’t want you to know.” Twilight sobbed, the tears running down his face where Morning had scratched him and stinging, “Please Morning, I’m begging you… Begging…”
“I do love it when you beg.” Morning stood, “But you know what it means.” Slowly, Twilight nodded, “You get a time out. In the mirror, until I take you out tomarrow. You’ve been in there seven years now, kitten. How long will it take?”
“Please, don’t put me back in there, Morning.” Twilight looked up at him, tears streaking freely down his face, “Please! I’m your brother! How can you hate me so much? I gave him back! I did everything right! Please! Please don’t put me back in there…”
“Your body heals, Sek. This is the only way to get your mind to crack. If you would just talk…” Morning faultered for a mere second, as his eyes caught those of his brother, and grew round and moist with sympathy, “Just talk, Sek. Please?”
“I can’t.” Twilight forgot about raising his head, “She doesn’t want you to know.”
 
PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2007 5:55 pm


Wow... that bad, huh?

Also... story contains cusing, adult-esc situations (like torture, this warning is a little late, I know), ect.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 1:46 pm


I LOVE IT!! This is by far one of the best stories I've ever read! (No offense
to other stories I've read, of course!) I love it! It is so well written, although I
was a bit confused in the beginning. Keep posting!! heart 3nodding
PostPosted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 1:07 pm


* * *

“He’ll come back,” Damian whispered to himself, and pulled his wrist slightly, so that the crystal he held on a string would wind itself back up before he caught it. “He always comes back.”
An obviously human servant had been rubbing his shoulders since the disturbing vision had disappeared. She scooted back and farther away as Damian stood from his bed and flung the bowl that had contained the scrying liquid. It broke into a thousand tiny pieces and he let them lay. A scream of frustration built its way up through his lungs, and it escaped without hesitancy as he reached for his hair. He was sick of this dimension, and he was tired of trying to hide his fascination with the same girl who had captured his heart before he had left Earth. By the time he had calmed enough to breath normally, his slave had picked up the scraps of the bowl and tossed them into the roaring fire.
“Why do you watch those mortals, master?” he asked, “Why this girl? You don’t need her.”
“Because I need to be punished,” he said, repeating Twilight’s lament without realizing it, “And I’m in the same hell you are.”
“I’ve gotten used to the way things are here, master.” The slave replied, almost happily, and her humanity lifted for a fraction of a second to revile her aura, and Damian pushed it from his mind.
“Yeah, well, eternity is a long ******** time.”
“Don’t worry about things so much,” the slave smiled, “If you’re that worried about her, simply remember that no one lives forever. You always take your pick of the new arrivals. She will eventually be yours.”
“I don’t ******** need her.” Damian hissed, “I want to be human again. And I don’t need you anymore either- I’m sending you back.”
“But…” the slave stammered, “I thought that once you picked someone…”
“Why would you think that?” Damian laughed, “You were getting comfortable. This is hell and I’m the ******** antichrist, so what did you really think was going to happen?”
“But I…” the slave trailed off, “Everything I did, everything you said. I only did those things so I wouldn’t have to go back! This isn’t fair, you said that-“
“Hell!” Damian bellowed, as if it explained everything, and dramatically stormed away.
The slave fell back as the heavy doors swung shut, though her intention had originally been to follow him. She felt something tightening around her neck, and tried to pry it away, only to find that whatever it was could not be seen or touched. She tried to scream, but any air left in her lungs was cut off by the invisible rope. Slowly, her world brightened with all the colors of the rainbow, then darkened to a velvety violet, before fading to black. Damian hadn’t even looked back after he had closed the doors.
He was weary of going anywhere near his parent’s bedroom. He was the only other person allowed in their wing of the house, unless you count the children who were allowed anywhere, but for some reason never seemed to make it as far up as the bedrooms. The door to their room was always locked, and Lilith was almost always inside. She was weary of the outside world.
Damian had never seen her, and she had never shown him the level of affection so characteristic of his father. He had spoken to her, and seen her general shape, but whenever she appeared outside of her darkened room, she always kept every inch of her body covered by a long robe that she wore. These robes were so long and draping that he couldn’t even make out the shape of her body, though Morning had often spoken of her great beauty. Her robes always ended in a long train, and when he had eventually asked her why, she had replied that it reminded her of her wedding gown. Her face was always hidden behind her bride’s veil; not even her eyes could be seen. Frankly, she creeped him out.
So it was that he made his way to one of the many towers that lined the castle walls. The building, like everything else in the worldlett, was under Morning’s command, and could be changed by his whims. Damian climbed the winding stairwell without a sound or a sweat, something that he never could have done in his mortal form, but something that came as naturally now as breathing. When he reached the top, he paused at the single, simple, wooden door and knocked.
No one answered. He knocked again. There was no reply. He attempted to turn the handle. Locked.
He looked around, and back down the long stairway he had climbed. Everything seemed to be empty, but he had learned that trust was a foolish characteristic. He couldn’t understand where Lilith could have gone, and in this realm, there were servants of his father’s, visable and invisible, everywhere.
On the other hand, what would it matter if he were caught? He was allowed in this part of the house; he was their son, after all, and he could see no reason why he wouldn’t be allowed in the room. He could tell them that he was looking for something, or that he had gotten lost-
After seven years, he thought, and then pushed it from his mind. He took a deep breath of the warm air, and disappeared. He had timed everything perfectly, and found himself on the other side of the door.
The room, like everything else in the house, spoke of excess and debauchery; Morning’s taste. It was huge, the size of a house itself, with a strange array of furniture, and Morning’s firey decorating spirit. The colors were taken from a very warm pallet, with red and orange accenting everything. There were no windows or lights, but a fire was burning brilliantly in one corner, its mantle lined with bookshelves, in front of a rug made from the skin of a creature he had seen during his stay in hell, but he had never witnessed on Earth.
He started toward the burning flame, when something out of place caught his attention. He moved farther and farther away from the flame, into the dark recesses of the shadows, his eyes straining to see the shapes of familiar and unfamiliar objects, his senses alert to any slight differentiation in the atmosphere.
He picked up the object that had caught his attention; a piece of cloth. It was green, a cooling color to all the other warmth. It was tiny, knitted together with great skill, and obvious signs of wear dotted the freyed edges. Something caught his attention during his studies as he found himself wondering why his father would keep something so strange, so out of place; a series of maroon stains lumped together above the green. He studied it for some time before he put it back, misty eyed for reasons that he could not explain, and headed back toward the fire. He ignored the books completely as he produced from one of the many pouches on his belt a handful of sand. He spoke quietly in the language of his ancestors and tossed it into the flame, which began to glow a brilliant blue-white. It hurt his eyes and he swayed ever so slightly, but he quickly caught himself and stepped through the threshold. He could feel his clothes start to burn, but the sensation that hit him made his gasp- it was cold.


Randomly; here's a pic that I drew of Twilight & Morning; give you an idea of what they look like. User Image

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