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 Posted: Tue May 01, 2007 1:31 pm
i am writing a fanfic about Genma and an oc.... and i really need help......
info: the Oc's Name is Bella Donna white (B.D. for short)
she is a cop who was teleported into Naruto's world by a jutsu gone wrong... at she was to be married to the cheif of her station and she has one child... justin white... she meets Genma and Kakashi when she and a criminal was transfered to kohona (Arggg.... i forgot is dat da rite spelling?!?) she chased him down the un familiar streets until Kakashi grabbed the criminal and genma grabbed B.D. then she shot his foot (i just had to add that) thats all i have so far... PLEASE HELP!!!
thank you...
....XOXO Super Nova
ps for the poll i spelled quit wrong... sorry
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2007 4:41 pm
I think Bella should visit Genma in the hospital while his foot is geting treat and *poof* the Hokage announces that the two shall be living together. They'd both be like...
Genma/Bella: WTF?
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2007 10:08 am
i like that idea... ill try to fit that in to the story....
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2007 12:54 pm
should i post the ff in this guild? cool
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Broken Voice Alchemist Captain
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Posted: Thu May 03, 2007 2:44 am
Sure! Just make sure it goes in the Ninja Files- Members Fanfiction sub froum.
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 12:02 pm
HEY PPL, ONCE AGAIN I WOULD LIKE TO SAY THAT I REALLY NEED HELP... SO FAR I'M TO THE POINT WHERE B.D. MEETS TOMO (A ORPHAN BOY WHO LOOKS LIKE HER SON) AND SHE HAS BEEN HIDING HIM IN GENMA'S HOME FOR THREE DAYS, GENMA IS GOING TO FIND OUT SOON, AND HE WILL BE OUTRAGED (HE WILL LOOK LIKE THIS scream ) AND I DON'T KNOW IF NARUTO SHOULD HAVE A BIG OR LITTLE PART IN THE STORY... AND I NEED HELP CHOOSING A TITLE... SO IF YA'LL HAVE ANY IDEAS... PLEASE SHARE THEM... heart heart heart
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 12:57 pm
*cries* no one is helping... i'm stuck at chapter 5 and fans are getting mad... i'm sooooooo brain dead; i have writer's block *cries some more*
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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 3:26 pm
Sounds interesting. However, as a rule, I am generally opposed to fics that involve teleporting people from our world to Naruto's. Maybe there are some good fics out there that include this, I just haven't found any. As for helping...what kind of advice do you need?
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 9:34 pm
oh well i'm sorry... i just really wanted to do this but anyway i'm not that good of a writer so now i need help finding out how they fall for eachother and how shes getting home (and yes she will go home)
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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 8:18 am
what's the link to the story... to help i would need to read it first mrgreen and then after i read it i could more likely then not help rofl ninja
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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 8:21 am
if you still need it ^.^ rofl ninja rofl
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 12:24 pm
i took it down fo a while. i'm gonna finish it then put it up... little by little. heart
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