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Story Continuation of the Elaboration Sensation

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the_ilse_witch
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PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 5:53 pm


Ok so I had an idea! *gasp* I've been thinking of this for a while but AP's sub-story kind of got me back on track.

"So whats the idea, oh great ilse *prod prod*"
Im getting to it! D<

Anyways, so here's the plan. AP's story is the base of another story that the we (the guild) will continue. AP made the first part of the story, then someone else will add on and make a second part. Then someone else will add on to that and make a third part, so on and so forth till either it just keeps going on and on untill someone finally puts it out of its misery.

If you have story prompts, send them my way or (better yet) I'll make a thread in the art subforum and people can add their prompts and I'll just pick and choose from that. Yes, that sounds like a better idea actually. When this story is finished, then I'll lock this and put it in the art or RP sub forum (still deciding on that) and start again with a new prompt!


Rules? Yes, my dear there are (:

  • Post something decent sized in length. 1-3 lines is not enough, sorry, this is a story mind you.
  • Be smart about this and dont be a jerk about posting your part of the story.
  • People may post more then just one part
  • NEW RULE: If you have a question, please PM Ilse or me, AP. That way, you won't take up the thread with POINTLESS conversation. heart
  • I'll add more rules if need be


Oh and to help with people who post all at the same time, where one person doesnt know that another person is adding on to the story, claim your post. "Next" and post that. Then edit it without worry of someone else adding on before you finish. I do NOT want a bunch of posts saying "next". If someone has already claimed the Next spot then no posting there shall be done till they are finished.

Also, you must edit your post from "next" to your actual add-on. If I see that this isnt done, then you will be sent a PM. If a long time has gone by and you have not edited it or replied to the PM saying that your still working on it, then your post shall be deleted and the "next" spot is up for grabs.

Yay? Nay? I hope you all like this idea and it turns out well (:


Prompt 1-- by Alabastor Pianostring
Fanged teeth pressed against her neck, softly and barely felt. She barely reacted to the pale, greasy man who's hands had wrapped around her shoulders. She raised her scotch to her lips and took another sip. A smile washed across her face at another wise crack that erupted through the smoky den of her boyfriend's flat.

The fangs had retreated from their goal in fear that her moving would apply more contact between her shoulders had his hands. They hovered an inch above her skin, hungry and waiting. They slid into a gentle caress and enveloped her once again. This time, his spell took a larger hold.

Her brain began to fog and suddenly time became unnecessary. She had faint recollection of how hot her blood felt before everything became dark.


Days later, after some half-hearted searches led by her so loyal friends, her body was tramped upon by a small group of young children who were on a field trip with their local elementary school. A shrill panciked scream announced the discovery and sirens wailed to the destination.

Her blood had been drained, and barely any could be found on her or anywhere near her. There weren't any fingerprints, not foreign fluids or tissue, but there were two tin pricks below her ear that were spaced as far wide to each other as the eye teeth are in an adult male.
PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 2:40 pm


I am going to delete any post that does not pertain to the story. Just so you know. :] This is a thread for stories and a new rule has been added saying that if you have a question, or if you want to have a conversation, please PM the person and not confuse and jumble the thread with outside posts. Kay?

Forewarning. You aren't under risk of ban, but of annoying me.

Alabastor Pianostring


x[Sarika]x

PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 6:10 pm


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A woman around twenty sat in her small, cramped office. There were several stacks of paper, all neatly clipped together. There was only one window through which the sunlight poured in. One wooden desk sat in the middle of her office. In front of her was a slightly outdated computer, its humming one of the only sounds in the room.

She sighed and ran her fingers in her long dark hair. There had been a murder - at least, that's what her boss had been calling it. He always wanted things to sound interesting, even if it wasn't totally true. "Jacky, Jacky. You're so naive," he would say. "The media likes things when they're juicy and interesting. Sometimes you have to add in a couple details to spice things up." Jaqueline, also known as Jacky, scowled at the thought. As much as she loved reporting and writing for the newspaper, she didn't think telling people lies was something to be happy about. Especially when you made money that way.

The "murder" was still a large mystery. A woman a bit older than Jacky was found dead. There were two puncture wounds on her neck. But her blood had been completely drained. Even stranger, there had been a look of peace on her face. It was if the woman didn't even know she was dying. The sight of her cold, eerie body had probably scared the kids who found her out of their wits.

Suddenly, her computer beeped. Blinking in surprise, Jacky opened up her email and saw that she had a message. But I never get messages from anyone... She thought. She curiously clicked on the message to open it.

"I know how she was killed. Your brother was killed the same way. Meet me at K. Park in an hour.
-A."


Her eyes widened. She read the message over again. How did he know her brother died? She never spoke to anyone about him! And she certainly didn't talk about the strange wounds on his neck...or how his blood was completely drained. She glanced at her watch. It was 6:45 PM. She had until 7:45. She grabbed her leather purse and shut down the computer.

Jacky jogged to her car, slamming all the doors shut on her way out. She had never felt very weak and vulnerable. But for some reason, the mystery of the note had made her feel like there was something she didn't know about. It made her feel like she was a small piece of a much larger puzzle. But still, there was some doubt in her mind. Can I really trust him? I don't even know who I'm going to meet! Curiosity soon overcame her doubt. I'll be on my guard. It's probably just some prank...stupid, stupid Jacky. Why do you want to meet this person so badly?



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PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 7:18 pm


Kelly Park was only a half an hour drive from her office. She did, however, want to dash to her apartment and change. She didn't know what was to happen, and didn't want to confront a stranger in a business suit and heels.

She shifted her car rapidly onto the interstate and madly dashed the 15 minute drive (which Jacky completed in a record 8 minutes). The elevator, her usual mode of making her floor, was ignored and removing her heels, she clambered the 6 floors to her apartment door, slammed the door open and hastened to her room. Throwing her clothes around, she changed into jean shorts, a loose fitting, but shaply T and tied boots around her feet. Her boots were steel-toed and made her more comfortable.

7 minutes later, she was in her car again, heading (at a slower pace) to Kelly Park. With 10 minutes left, she parked on the outer, western fringe of the park. Her hands gripped her steering wheel, white knuckles tight. She was going to find out what happened to her brother. Maybe she'll know the truth, instead of reaching the same conclusions... Maybe this time she'll get a time of death, instead of only a cause.

7:45 clicked around on her dashboard clock. She barely noticed. Her hands still gripped the wheel and she stared straight out through her windshield. A grimy hand rapped against her car window...

Alabastor Pianostring


the_ilse_witch
Captain

PostPosted: Thu May 31, 2007 1:41 pm


Startled, she let out a small gasp as her hear sang to a beat twice as fast as normal and looked out side her window. Covered in shadow, she saw not a face but the dark outline of a tall slim male figure. Im going to die, oh God how could I fall for this? she thought to herself.

The man outside rapped once more on her window, this time softer as if to realize her terror. Taking a breath she steadied herself and stepped outside the car and into the dark open where she was left somewhat vulnerable with a stranger who knew more then he probably should.

Looking at the man and now out of the car she could see more detail in his face. He looked about in his late 20s or early 30s and had a serious look in his eyes. Stepping up to her he extended his hand out for her.

"Im quite pleased you could make it on such short notice but I just heard about the accident of what happened to the poor girl and realized that I'd better talk to you soon. But oh, where are my manners, I am Antonio Ortega and you must be Jaqueline. I've been wanting to meet you for quite a while but not under these circumstances Im afraid." said the man with a slight spanish accent to his voice.
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