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PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 5:51 pm


Hey, here you can post stories, poetry, art tell us about your day or whats on your mind that you want to speak out. If you want to rant or vent here thats fine too.




And when it comes to posting art and stories, please be sure that the material is your own original creation, don't steal from what others worked on



And if have that musical vibe going through you and you want to write a song here that's fine as well. You can also post the lyrics to a song that you're feeling for the moment, just name the band/artist/group and the song and post a link to the video if you want to as well.


smile heart Have fun writing here PM if you have any questions or if you just wanna talk, we're all friends here. smile heart
PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 5:59 pm


Just to kick things off, this a little something I'm extracting from my journal that I wrote today, its a poem and a story that relates to it. Enjoy, and feel free to tell me what you think....



The Story of Love



Love came from the sky and settled in our hearts
For some it will soon depart
And when its gone
The days will seem long
And we'll wish that it would have never come at all


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ o ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Once upon a time, when the Earth was young and few people lived there, a goddess looked down from her heavenly home. She noticed the people of Earth and how the people there lacked a certain feeling. The people of Earth lacked the feeling of love. And so this goddess thought that their lives seemed bland and boring without it. The people were always sad or hateful towards each other so she decided to help change the mood.
So one night when the sky way dark and the moon was a bright cresent smile upon the Earth, she planted love in the brightest stars in the sky and sent them down to Earth. They came down as everyone was asleep and deep into there dreams and the love stars settled into there hearts.
When the people of Earth woke up the next day they all felt newly reborn with feelings they have never felt before. Man looked at his wife and Woman to her husband with a new feeling, love. And friends grew closer and brother and sister were nicer to one another, these days were filled with happiness because love came into their lives.
But along with love came deceit, betrayal and misery, which was known and the heartbrake trio. They snuck into the falling love stars and were also settled into the hearts of the people of Earth. They lie dormant in their hearts, but they are aroused when father anger comes into their hearts. And so one day when young lovers were frolicking in a valley of flowers, they layed back and looked at the clouds and started talking to each other. One thing led to another and someone said something that offended the other. This got the other angry, which made farther anger come into that person's heart. the other retorted equally offensive words back at the other and soon father anger was awakened in both their hearts. And after much arguing and terrible words said, the young lovers broke apart. The heartbreak trio had arisen from being dormant for so long.
Their lives were never the same. The thing about the heartbreak trio is that they cannot be spread around, even when alive in the heart of someone no one knows what that person is truly feeling. Their love has run away from the heartbreak trio and gone back into the sky to be with the goddess, its creator.
When the heartbreak trio becan to thrive in more and more in peoples hearts, the old days began to come back. Some were lucky and love came back with forgiveness. Although those who did not know forgiveness were doomed to never love again and die with a miserable, dceitful and betraying heart.
The goddess was very much saddened by this effect that the feeling of love had caused, but there was nothing she could do about it for it had settled its roots inside and could not be removed. And to this day the goddess has watched the people of Earth go through this cycle. It is said that the goddess sheds a tear everytime a heart is broken by the heartbrake trio and love retreats into that tear and forms a new star. And to this day people are given the gift of love, but they make their own fate and when the choose to go down the path that awakens father anger and he brings the heartbreak trio.
Love is a gift and yet it is a curse that has befallen the people of Earth.

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Renton Noah

PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2007 9:02 pm


Once more we have a perfect example of what is human race, “a bird-brain semi-develop, sex-destruction addicted junkies.”- Zealot
I much enjoy you’re writing is good, a little fast pasted but very good. There a lot of nice detail added on.
PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2007 2:45 pm


Renton Noah
Once more we have a perfect example of what is human race, “a bird-brain semi-develop, sex-destruction addicted junkies.”- Zealot
I much enjoy you’re writing is good, a little fast pasted but very good. There a lot of nice detail added on.

thank you very much for those words smile

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PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2007 3:10 pm


I guess this would be a song I'm feeling at the moment

Disturbed - Remember


Sensation washes over me

I can't describe it

Pain I felt so long ago

I don't remember

Tear a hole so I can see

My devastation

Feelings from so long ago

I don't remember



Holding on, to let them know

What's given to me, givin to me

To hide behind

The mask this time

And try to believe


Blind your eyes to what you see

You can't embrace it

Leave it well enough alone

And don't remember

Cut your pride and watch it bleed

You can't deny it

Pain you know you can't ignore

I don't remember


Holding on, to let them know

What's given to me, given to me

To hide behind

The mask this time

And try to believe


If I can

Remember

To know this will

Conquer me

If I can

Just walk alone

And try to escape

Into me



(Sensation washes over me

I can't describe it

Pain I felt so long ago

I don't remember)


I'm just

Holding on, to let them know

What's given to me, givin to me

To hide behind

The mask this time

And try to believe


If I can

Remember

To know this will

Conquer me

If I can

Just walk alone

And try to escape
Into me
PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2007 8:15 pm


God, I LOVE that song!!

*puts on Disturbed*
xd

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PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 6:22 am


xdemonicax
Just to kick things off, this a little something I'm extracting from my journal that I wrote today, its a poem and a story that relates to it. Enjoy, and feel free to tell me what you think....



The Story of Love



Love came from the sky and settled in our hearts
For some it will soon depart
And when its gone
The days will seem long
And we'll wish that it would have never come at all


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ o ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Once upon a time, when the Earth was young and few people lived there, a goddess looked down from her heavenly home. She noticed the people of Earth and how the people there lacked a certain feeling. The people of Earth lacked the feeling of love. And so this goddess thought that their lives seemed bland and boring without it. The people were always sad or hateful towards each other so she decided to help change the mood.
So one night when the sky way dark and the moon was a bright cresent smile upon the Earth, she planted love in the brightest stars in the sky and sent them down to Earth. They came down as everyone was asleep and deep into there dreams and the love stars settled into there hearts.
When the people of Earth woke up the next day they all felt newly reborn with feelings they have never felt before. Man looked at his wife and Woman to her husband with a new feeling, love. And friends grew closer and brother and sister were nicer to one another, these days were filled with happiness because love came into their lives.
But along with love came deceit, betrayal and misery, which was known and the heartbrake trio. They snuck into the falling love stars and were also settled into the hearts of the people of Earth. They lie dormant in their hearts, but they are aroused when father anger comes into their hearts. And so one day when young lovers were frolicking in a valley of flowers, they layed back and looked at the clouds and started talking to each other. One thing led to another and someone said something that offended the other. This got the other angry, which made farther anger come into that person's heart. the other retorted equally offensive words back at the other and soon father anger was awakened in both their hearts. And after much arguing and terrible words said, the young lovers broke apart. The heartbreak trio had arisen from being dormant for so long.
Their lives were never the same. The thing about the heartbreak trio is that they cannot be spread around, even when alive in the heart of someone no one knows what that person is truly feeling. Their love has run away from the heartbreak trio and gone back into the sky to be with the goddess, its creator.
When the heartbreak trio becan to thrive in more and more in peoples hearts, the old days began to come back. Some were lucky and love came back with forgiveness. Although those who did not know forgiveness were doomed to never love again and die with a miserable, dceitful and betraying heart.
The goddess was very much saddened by this effect that the feeling of love had caused, but there was nothing she could do about it for it had settled its roots inside and could not be removed. And to this day the goddess has watched the people of Earth go through this cycle. It is said that the goddess sheds a tear everytime a heart is broken by the heartbrake trio and love retreats into that tear and forms a new star. And to this day people are given the gift of love, but they make their own fate and when the choose to go down the path that awakens father anger and he brings the heartbreak trio.
Love is a gift and yet it is a curse that has befallen the people of Earth.


As always my sista, you've got me hooked on your style. 3nodding heart
PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 6:29 am


This Life

It happens everywhere, at all times, never slowing down, flying past without ever really being ours for more than a moment or a slow second; slipping through our fingers constantly and faithfully, belonging to no one yet belonging to us all, this life, borrowed, stolen, shared, won, lost, changed forever and always coming back.

This life, it happens, a life that we live for all the days of our lives.
cs

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PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 10:45 am


I have a ton of artwork, but that could take up pages. ^ ^;;
PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 11:01 am


Dawn Arrow
I have a ton of artwork, but that could take up pages. ^ ^;;
heh, its no problem
just post what you like
fill this thread with beutiful art xd

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PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 7:46 pm


I have to say, these words are powerful, and Lily Allen can really sing. And if it wasn't for a friend that i would not know this song that has helped me out with some "issues."

Lily Allen - Smile

When you first left me
I was wanting more
But you were ******** that girl next door
What'cha do that for? (What'cha do that for?)

When you first left me
I didnt know what to say
I've never been on my own that way
Just sat by myself all day

I was so lost back then
But with a little help from my friends
I found the light in the tunnel at the end

Now you're calling me up on the phone
So you can have a little whine and a moan

And it's only because you are feeling alone

At first when I see you cry
Yeah It makes me smile
Yeah it makes me smile
At worst I feel bad for a while
But then I just smile
I go ahead and smile

Whenever you see me
You say that you want me back (Want me back)
And I tell you it don't mean jack (it don't mean jack)


I couldn't stop laughing
No I just couldn't help myself
See you messed up my mental health
I was quite unwell

I was so lost back then
But with a little help from my friends
I found the light in the tunnel at the end

Now you're calling me up on the phone
so you can have a little whine and a moan
And it's only because you're feeling alone

At first when I see you cry
It makes me smile
Yeah it makes me smile
At worst I feel bad for a while
But then I just smile
I go ahead and smile
lalala(x13)

At first when I see you cry (When I see you cry)
It makes me smile (It makes me smile)
Yeah it makes me smile (Yeah it makes me smile)
At worst I feel bad for a while (I feel bad for a while)
But then I just smile (But then I just smile)
I go ahead and smile (I go ahead and smile)

At first when I see you cry (When I see you cry)
It makes me smile (It makes me smile)
Yeah it makes me smile (Yeah it makes me smile)
At worst I feel bad for a while (I feel bad for a while)
But then I just smile (But then I just smile)
I go ahead and smile (I go ahead and smile)

At first when I see you cry (When I see you cry)
It makes me smile (It makes me smile)
Yeah it makes me smile (Yeah it makes me smile)
At worst I feel bad for a while (I feel bad for a while)
But then I just smile (But then I just smile)
I go ahead and smille (I go ahead and smile)



and this is the video that goes with the song. Hope you all enjoy xd

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HZyTOROlo9E
PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2007 8:24 am


jus a grrl from the hood
This Life

It happens everywhere, at all times, never slowing down, flying past without ever really being ours for more than a moment or a slow second; slipping through our fingers constantly and faithfully, belonging to no one yet belonging to us all, this life, borrowed, stolen, shared, won, lost, changed forever and always coming back.

This life, it happens, a life that we live for all the days of our lives.
cs
My homie knows how to let them words flow
I'm sorry i didn't respond to this one, I thought I did
but really it doen't mean that i don't its good
it really is
much love to you and your words heart heart

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PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2007 9:18 am


xdemonicax
jus a grrl from the hood
This Life

It happens everywhere, at all times, never slowing down, flying past without ever really being ours for more than a moment or a slow second; slipping through our fingers constantly and faithfully, belonging to no one yet belonging to us all, this life, borrowed, stolen, shared, won, lost, changed forever and always coming back.

This life, it happens, a life that we live for all the days of our lives.
cs
My homie knows how to let them words flow
I'm sorry i didn't respond to this one, I thought I did
but really it doen't mean that i don't its good
it really is
much love to you and your words heart heart


i am confused now. that was last night and i just remembered you probably already saw this in that bunch last week. *le oops* lmao rofl
PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2007 7:38 am


Gossip
My name is gossip
I flutter around
Before you know it
I'm all through town

People hate me
They love me as well
I put my topic through
There own personal hell

I can be vicious
I can be mean
But you'll never catch me
On the in-between

I spin my web
To entrap all I see
They can't help it
Cause I'm just being me

My name is gossip



-by me, I wrote this for my little sister when she was going through some rough times.. you know how kids can be ^_^

Selene Luna


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PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2007 9:29 am


Selene Luna
Gossip
My name is gossip
I flutter around
Before you know it
I'm all through town

People hate me
They love me as well
I put my topic through
There own personal hell

I can be vicious
I can be mean
But you'll never catch me
On the in-between

I spin my web
To entrap all I see
They can't help it
Cause I'm just being me

My name is gossip



-by me, I wrote this for my little sister when she was going through some rough times.. you know how kids can be ^_^


that is a nice poem 3nodding
hehe there's kind of a gossip thing going around my school ninja
but i hope its nothing bad about me ninja xp
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