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Murakami Suigun

PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2007 3:59 am


Ok. I started a ToA RP with my friend Via PM. Im not sure If I'm 100% accurate with my Knowledge to ToA in this RP. Anyways, Rate the Prologue and my Character Bio or Comment for suggestions/tweaks.


Thank you!


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Prologue


It is the Year ND 3450. Fonon, as we knew it, began to slowly fade away. As many Cities Rose up higher than the heavens, more and More Fonon was being slowly Sapped away from it's very existence. Without Fonon, There is no Life. Without life, there is no prosperity. As the Kingdoms of Kimlasca and Malkuth began to see the harsh reality, efforts were stepped up higher to help conserve HumanKind.

But it soon became too late.

Too large and too many where the Metropolis that existed in the land. Soon, Fonon became slowly exhausted, and the energy soon dwindled. A Massive hosts of Plagues, Diseases and Pestilence engulfed the once Prosperous lands of Auldrant. With the Life-Force of those who did survive were simply killed off by their Neighbors, Friends, Even Family members who were so desperate to find a away to survive. The whole land was in Turmoil. It was common to see large piles of nameless Corpses who were simply dumped in piles and Starving children in the Corner of the Street. Desperate for answers, the two kingdoms began to search even harder than before to find out a way. Although there was one person who did come up with an idea.

Professor Soren Nebilim, a prodigy and predecessor of Saphir Neis, ,developed a machine that could create Fonic Energy, enough to sustain Lives for Years and years, yet it came with a terrible price. It required Human lives for the translation of sustainable Fonon. Although it was turned down by the Kimlascan Empire, it was rumored that the Malkuth Kingdom kept the Prototype for experimentation.

Desperate for survival, the General public, in a state of Panic and mass disorder, turned to the "Score" for answers. With the leadership of Grand Maestro Fon, the score was revealed to the general Public under the eyes of the two empires. Fon stated that it was the fault of the Kimlascan Nobles who disdained the Score and the Malkuth Empire for co-operating in the most "Holy War" inscribed by the Score.

Eventually, the Plebiscite masses began to rally against their Target: the nobility in both kingdoms. A Brutal Campaign of Massive insurrections tore the World of Auldrant apart, where even Family members were pitted against one another after a Long, Bloody struggle that lasted almost 2 Decades. In the End, the Empire of Malkuth fell to the hands of the "People" and had all those with noble Blood Executed, even to the last Child.Their Leader, Theodoro the Butcher, became the leader of the Empire. A firm gripped dictator, he demanded absolute Obedience to the head of State and the Score. He ruled relentlessly and ruthlessly for about 45 Years, guided by Grand Maestro Fon until his death. His Son, Joshua of the Sword took his place.

Meanwhile, the Kimlascan Kingdom held off the insurrection and it's Nobility Class was preserved. Although their Survival meant no reason, it became evident that in the bloody years ahead.Soon, that Kimlasca-Lanvaldear and Malkuth will be embroiled in another Large scale war. The Fragile peace became almost like a thin dam: the Water would burst in at any moment.But for the time being,peacetime was in the Atmosphere.


Yet, as the Small reserves of Fonon dwindled and dwindled further down, lawlessness and drought mercilessly pelted the people of Auldrant , who were desperate with an answer from their Messiah...


It is the Year ND 3520. The story of the Auldrant starts here...
PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2007 4:33 am


Now, For my Main Char Bio.

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Name: Joshua
Gender: Male
Age: 17

Appearance: He is 6'4. A tall and courteous young man with an excessive obsession to gambling and dating Women (Although he was turned down all the times he Tried). He has Fiery Red Eyes, as well as Red Hair that appears like Dancing Flames. He wears a Green Yukata with a sword Sheath on his right. A man known for his timidness and perverse comments, Joshua is the Heir to the Malkuth Empire.

History: The son of the dreaded Theodoro the Butcher, Joshua lived in a seemingly perfect world. Whenever his father took him around, people would smile and praise them. Yet, under such fake impressions, they desired to kill Theodoro and his son. Little by Little he soon realized his father's tainted history, although he did not take it into heart until one day. He was playing with a little girl named Elena, until she pulled out a knife and tried to assassinate him. Shocked and bewildered, the Young Joshua could not move a single muscle to save him from this sudden attempt. Elena openly declared that Theodoro dismembered her father before her mother's horrified eyes. Then, her father was hung with metal hooks to further his pain. Her mother was then raped by soldiers while Theodoro named the event "Justice" in front of the Masses. Then, he slit her mother's throat in front of young Elena, forcing her to bathe in the blood her mother has shed. After these words, Joshua was truly opened his eyes towards the horrible truth.

Although Elena planned to end his life with a swift stroke, Joshua was a very different person to her. He was sort of brash, perverse and a bit of a wise-crack, but he was also very kind and respectable. Due to her untimely admiration of Joshua, it led to her sparing him from that fateful day. Then, the Imperial soldiers arrested Elena and sentenced her to be Executed, even though she was at the age of 12. Joshua pleaded as much to his father, but he simply struck him back in the face. His father wanted Elena to pay dearly for what she has done. She was ordered to be cruelly tortured and hung by her neck until half dead, then she was to be tested for the prototype machine invented by Soren.

Joshua, in a state of confusion and regret, undertook a daring all-out daytime rescue to help save Elena. He succeeded and helped Elena to get across the Malkuth border. With teary eyes Elena apologized for her actions and asked him why he would risk losing his royalty and life to save her. Joshua simply replied 'Because I loved you." After that fateful time, Elena left to find refuge within the Kimlascan border. Joshua, knowing to the full what punishment awaits him for dis-obeying his father. He wandered about as a lonely drifter through the Desert-regions for years and years. Eventually, he was taken in by a famous swordsman, Karel Fortuna, a wandering SwordMaster whose age is slowly impairing him of his incredible mastery of the Sword. Through rigorous training, Joshua soon became his right hand, eventually succeeding him.

After the departure of his Teacher, Joshua trailed and journeyed until he reached Castle Malkuth. There, he was acquainted by Grand Maestro Fon, who stated that his disappearance was predicted in "The Score" and he was to rightfully take his throne. Although Joshua refused to take the Malkuth empire Throne, which to him was tainted with the blood of many, he took the Empiric oath and became the Absolute Emperor of Malkuth due to his unfailing belief to "The Score". Shortly after his Succession, he walked through the guidance of the Grand Maestro, who told him to patiently wait until the Time was right to take the Kimlascan Empire...

Weapon: Joshua preferably uses many kinds of blades, Especially ones made in the Shello Desert, the place he was trained under Karel Fortuna. Such weapons include Killing Edges and Wo Dao made in the Region's Rich Mineral reserves. Trained under the "Killing Strokes of Heaven" swordsmanship, he was regarded to be a Myrmidon, a breed of fast Swordfigthers thought to have disappeared from the land.

Fonic Artes: Joshua does show mastery of the Fonic Element Fire and Wind, with the help of the Goddess "Auldhuma". His mastery of the Fonic artes of Wind and Fire are unknown, but to a certain degree it is rumored he can create Volcanic eruptions and Gusts strong enough to level Vast cities.

Murakami Suigun

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