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Shy.Blue.Butterfly.

PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2007 5:17 pm


Title: Love is Blossoms...

Love is very confusing
and also very unique
it's like a plant
the vines never stop expanding
it's a transformation everyday
love's spry changes give me a heart ache.

Love is like a valuable jewel
have it lost and it will be gone forever
my romance for him is vibrant
I sheepishy reach out for his hand
but I end up hindering away
I feel very shy
as I paint the world with shades of grey

Love is like a treasure chest
you need to search hard for it
the chest contains secrets and truths
lies and stories of fake
this has never happened before
but someday
that one special person
will have quarried my love for him
from the bottom of my heart
and when he does that
the grey creations I made
will turn into lively blossoms of pure happiness.


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PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2007 9:00 pm


Won't you die tonight for love

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Free verse, I like it. 3nodding

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Baby join me in death

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antihippiesoldier
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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2007 6:30 pm


yup, same here!
PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2007 11:23 pm


oh...prettyy.

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Shy.Blue.Butterfly.

PostPosted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 7:40 am


Thank u everybody! 4laugh I'm not an expert at poems through, it's not really my thing. I had to make this in english class. It was fun!
PostPosted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 8:23 pm


i like it too

Necroxe

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