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this is just a poem i wrote for my english class (the topic was what motivates cruelty) and just want to post it and get some feed back thanks.



God is supposed to be watching over you
guarding his sheep like the Dog he is
but he always seems to back down in the face of danger
Where? I ask you. Where is your Dog now?

When Hitler gained the power to spread evil across the world
like my plagued blanket
killing millions of innocent people with his cruelty
where is your Dog?

senseless butchering of men, women, and children in Rwanda
I provoked millions to kill their own kind
everyday people die and all you can do is watch and feed
feed me with the power i need to wipe you all out
where is your Dog?

When life ceases to exist, the world as you know it is over
I will remain to point fingers
take the blame and point fingers at you
you gave me the power to obliterate existence
where is your Dog?

Who am I to say so much while you say so little?
I am the blackened heart, the shadowed overlooker
that whispers to your mythomaniac of a leader and controls them;
bend them to my will
I am the one holding your God on a leash
Who am I?
simple.
I am Hate. I cause cruelty.



Ryan Dunn (05/09/07)

Very nice expression biggrin and a very good point.
And yes, *also hands you cookie*

Yeah, i submitted one last year and ther kids accused me of stealing it of some Gothic Scripture site stare But after i explained what it meant they just shut up. Personnally i dont think it was that 'creepy' but i guess that's why i'm 'creepy'. Pics soon.