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Dark_truth

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PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2007 6:22 am


Here is something I wrote ^^ it was me scaring my best friend so much that she stopped cutting... it worked. I wrote it from her point of veiw, the bold is me.

The cold slick feeling of the knife makes me shiver
I pick it up.
I cant help it,I'm sorry
I run my finger over the silver side
Its sharp. Sharp enough to peirce my skin,
Sharp enought to draw blood.
I want to use it,
The sleeve of my shirt is pulled up to show my arm,
criss-crossed with so many scars.
I press down the knife, not hard,
not hard enought to cut.
I will know
No, she cant know. She wont know that I touched the knife
I can look just as deep into your eyes...
She can...
She but she cant know... how can she possibly know?!
Your choice... but I will know
But I'm worthless... I am so worthless... you dont smile anymore!
Because of me!
If you are worthless, then why am I still here???
No!! Leave me alone! get outta my head!
No, put it down
I cant... I just cant...
Then I will too... deeper...
NO!!!!
PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2007 9:07 am


i will have to pm you about this, i can't discuss it here

chessiejo


Dark_truth

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PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2007 6:46 am


chessiejo
i will have to pm you about this, i can't discuss it here

I cant reply... you have your messages set to friends only ^^
PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2007 1:58 pm


Dark_truth
chessiejo
i will have to pm you about this, i can't discuss it here

I cant reply... you have your messages set to friends only ^^


well, i know one way to correct that at least

chessiejo


Dark_truth

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PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2007 5:08 am


chessiejo
Dark_truth
chessiejo
i will have to pm you about this, i can't discuss it here

I cant reply... you have your messages set to friends only ^^


well, i know one way to correct that at least

lol, thanx ^^
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