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I need help with a 2-3 page essay. The issue is..."What is wrong with our world?"
I chose "Negative People."

Here is the layout:

Introduction- Begin with some type of attention-grabber. We discussed various ptions in class. Remember that this paragraph should move from general to specific. Your thesis statement should come at the end of this paragraph.

Concession- This paragraph where you will admit that there is a lot of problems facing the world. Make sure that you starrt with an appropiate transition. Make sure that you honestly assess these other problems, but make sure that you aren't too convincing. This paragraph should end with an explanation of why your thesis problem is more serious/immediate/problematic(or something similiar) than all other problems you have mentioned.

Body Paragraphs- These paragraphs will be dedicated to explaining why your thesis problem is so serious. Make sure that each body paragraph focuses on only one dimension of the problem. Each of these paragraphs should begin with a topic sentence.

Conclusion- Begin by rewording your thesis. Then, propose a solution to your problem. Explain the specific results of this proposed solution. Also, explain the significance of solving this problem. How will the world benefit from your solution?

Requirements
2-3 pages handwritten.
Organization including a strong thesis, topic sentences, and transitions.
Correct grammar throughout including but not limited to:
-Avoiding 2nd person
-Using 1st person only when appropriate
-Avoiding fragments and run ons
-Correct spelling (including homonyms)
-Correct punctuation

That is it. ._. I haven't started the essay yet. I would like to have some help on it please. I'm really asking for everyone's help on this. I want to get at least almost a perfect score! It's out of 200 points and I really want to keep my A in English so I can be exempt from the exam. Please and thank you. I'll keep everyone updated on my progress. Sorry if I posted this in the wrong place.

-Pats your head- You don't have to worry about it now. I finished it and got an A.