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PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 9:54 pm


I've been doing this for, ooh, say, about a year? I'm happy to say I've wasted a ton of time on it. But it's still very fun, and can help develop characters.

Well, so, here's the activity. They're called 'Song fics' on Fanfiction.net, but I've been doing them for original fiction. You take a song that you like or that fits your character, assign roles, and mess with the lyrics. It can be sad, up-beat, or just really funny - simply the character who sings a particular line can be hilarious.

The best one I've done so far was for a fanfic, so I won't post it, but it was a version of Meatloaf's Paradise By The Dashboard Light, retitled 'Paradise by the Cold Dawn Light' for the sake of night elves. It also runs several pages, so we won't go into that one.

Instead, here's a Foxglove version of D-Techno Life by UVERworld, better known as the third opening song for the anime Bleach. You can listen to it here - yes, it's not the best quality, but it was the first one at hand...
I'd do a better known song, but I want a quick and fully-changed lyric one as an example. I don't totally like this one... but it'll do as an example. So:

Ooare

D-TECHNOLIFE - FOXGLOVE MAIN STRING VERSION
[Yogan]
I never would have dared to think that this would ever go this far,
Do you think it’s all right? Do you think we can?
Keep fighting on our way to freedom?

[Spoken]
I somehow feel that this is ending…

[Ike]
What if we lose our grip on this power?
Do you think that they will come back and hold us closely once again?
I’ll try my best, but can we really make his insane plan work?
I get the strange feeling that we’re finally falling through…

[Yogan]
Don’t give it up yet!

[Ike]
I saw you fall through a haze of blood, but thank God, it was just a dream.
My friend, don’t give up yet! Don’t leave us here!
And each time we will save you!

[Yogan]
If you feel like me, that you are falling through,
Hold out a hand and we will catch you!

[Ike]
And we won’t let go, forever,
Just hold tight,
We won’t forsake you!

[Yogan]
Stand up tall, we can’t be shaken.

[Both]
And with time we’ll find ourselves there!


Ta da. Looks like I've got some explaining to do... 'he' or 'you' that they refer to is Shigure. They're kind of like his minions. The 'thank god it was just a dream' refers to the fact that Ike tends to have very, very scary dreams of this nature.

And finally, to make our entries a bit more uniform:
A name in [square brackets] denotes the character singing it.
'Chorus' just means a random back-up chorus.
[name (other name)] means that, in this passage, name sings things without brackets, and (other name) sings things in brackets, but is mainly providing a backup. For example:

Quote:
EXCERPT FROM 'BUTTONS' (THE PUSSYCAT DOLLS), FANFICTION VERSION
[Drisana (Hellbourne)]
Come on baby loosen up my buttons babe!
(Loosen up your buttons girl?)
Baby won’t you loosen up my buttons babe?
(Why can’t you leave me alone?)
Come on baby loosen up my buttons babe!
(Is this some sort of joke on me?)
Baby won’t you loosen up my buttons babe?
(Get the grack out of my Elune-damn life.)


Without another name in brackets, lyrics in brackets just mean that they're said 'aside'.
And finally, another word in square brackets, like [spoken] means that the previous speaker is singing it in a different way. For example [heavy metal scream], [whispered] and the like.

So... I hope you have fun. I did. ^.^ Maybe I'll put a few more up here some time.
PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 1:26 pm


Are you aware of the Ky-ky's fascination with Meatloaf, in particular the song "Paradise by the Dashboard Light"? Actually, I just now listened to it... twice. xd

jestingly.yours


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PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2007 7:18 pm


Quote:
"Go Home, Girl!" - Gaelic Storm
[Vitae]
Don't say that you're in love with me,
listen to what I say!
You're too young to care for me,
we wouldn't last a day.
So stop your silly crying, now!
How can I make you see?
I'm very antisocial, Yin,
you mustn't come with me.

Go home, girl, go home!
Go home!

Well, I met you in the catacombs,
when we both thought I was dead;
You liked my long black tresses
and my bandanna of red.
And although I'm somewhat fond of you,
you nearly got us killed!
I'm very antisocial, Yin;
of you I've had my fill!

Go home, girl, go home!
Go home!

Now, your uncle is a landlord,
and he...really wouldn't care
if he knew I was a sniper
and my killings weren't that rare.
Well, your family's full of madmen--
your cousin most of all!
I'm very antisocial, Yin;
this won't work out at all.

Go home, girl, go home!
Go home!

Now our time is up, you foolish girl;
why won't you let me be?
I plan to travel far from here,
and you'll not come with me.
And let's forget this folly, Yin,
with you I can't be seen--
for I am twenty-three years old
and you are but sixteen!

Go home, girl, go home!
Go home!

Go home, girl, go home!
Go home!

*waits for the gods of Gaelic Storm to strike her dead*
PostPosted: Sat May 26, 2007 10:30 pm


Quote:
DANCE FLOOR ANTHEM - Good Charlotte

[Aka]
So his girl went out and forgot they were together.
All that time he was waiting for a wonder.
She wants to see,
If there’s more,
Than he had, she’s looking for.
He chases her up; he’s tripping on his tongue now.
He doesn’t want her out there all alone now.
He knows she’s losing it, knows she’s abusing him.
Now he’s losing it,
And she don’t care.


[Akai]
Everybody!
Put up your hands, sing:

[Shigure]
“I don’t wanna be alone, I don’t wanna be alone!”
[Akai]
Feel your heart now!
If you got nothing left, sing:

[Shigure]
“I don’t wanna be alone, I don’t wanna be alone!”
[Akai]
Show the world now!
You got a reason to live, sing:

[Shigure]
“I don’t wanna be alone, I don’t wanna be alone!”
[Akai]
Take her hand now!
Don’t be afraid to get close, sing:

[Shigure]
“I don’t wanna be alone, I don’t wanna be alone?”

[Aka]
He was always giving her attention,
Working hard to be everything she mentioned.
He was dedicated,
But most foxes hated.
That girl was fine, but she wasn’t a kitsune.
She drifted off; she’s standing on the edge now,
He has to catch her but he ain’t feeling well now,
He’s trying to save her, but he couldn’t keep her,
When he first met her, they knew it wasn’t forever.


[Akai]
Everybody!
Let out your pain, sing:

[Fubuki]
“I don’t wanna be alone, I don’t wanna be alone!”
[Akai]
Feel the cold now!
Have you got nothing left? Sing:

[Fubuki]
“I don’t wanna be alone, I don’t wanna be alone!”
[Akai]
Pack it up now!
[Aka]
(spoken)
You always knew she would die, sing:
[Fubuki]
“I don’t wanna be alone, I don’t wanna be alone!”
[Akai]
Feeling down now!
Don’t let your heart rule your mind, sing:

[Fubuki]
“I don’t wanna be alone, I don’t wanna be alone!”

[Akai]
To the beat…
To the beat…
To the beat…

[Aka]
You got nothing to lose,
Don’t be afraid to break down.


[Shin]
We break up; it’s somethin’ that we do now.
Everyone ‘as got to do it sometime.
It’s okay.
Let it go.
Get out there and find someone else.
It’s too late to be rippin’ at me ‘eart ‘ere,
Get away from me; yer know everythin’ is good ‘ere,
Stop what yer doin’, yer don’t want to ruin,
The chance that yer’ve got to… find a new one.


Everybody!
Feeling brain dead, scream:

[Shigure]
“I don’t wanna be alone, I don’t wanna be alone!”
(spoken)
See my blood now!
Is this all I have left? Wail:

[Fubuki]
“I don’t wanna be alone, I don’t wanna be alone!”
Choke it up now!
I didn’t know how it felt, cry:

[Shin]
“I don’t wanna be alone, I don’t wanna be alone!”
Falling down now!
‘Ow ‘as it come down to this? Sing:

[Akai and Aka]
“I don’t wanna be alone, I don’t wanna be alone!”

[Akai]
Lone!
Lone!

[Aka]
Now you know what you did, so good luck with the guilt…

Right, let's see here... the first verse refers to Shigure and Kokoro's relationship - she actually did forget he existed, turned herself into an avenging warrior for her family, and stabbed him. That's what the whole 'see my blood' thing is about.

The second verse is about Fubuki's second wife, who he dearly loved but outlived as naturally goes. Aka's comment - 'you always knew she would die' - is particularly cruel, and was originally spoken by Shigure.

The last verse is Shin breaking up with Hannah over Christmas after they have a row. Poor guy wanders out into the snow and discovers religion. He's one of very few religious characters in any of my stories, and one of only two Christians. You also get a free gawp at Shin's horrible, horrible accent - he even sings with it!

Incidentally, when I listen to this song, I still hear 'I don't wanna be alone' even through it's supposedly 'I don't wanna be in love'. Whatever. They need to sing clearer.

By the way, Raincrow? Love this bit:

Raincrow
if he knew I was a sniper
and my killings weren't that rare.


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Raincrow
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PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2007 3:33 pm


Ooare
By the way, Raincrow? Love this bit:

Raincrow
if he knew I was a sniper
and my killings weren't that rare.


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I pulled that one out of my a**; I don't actually know how often Vitae sniped anyone. sweatdrop But I'm glad you liked it! smile
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