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Reikage-Sanshi
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2007 6:44 pm


Alright this is for anyone who's doing banners and the Naruto Shippuuden ARTwork Contest...

If there are some of you who are not sure about their artwork and want feedback on their artwork to improvement it.

Or if you just want some comments about your artwork.

4laugh Feel free to post them here 4laugh

And anyone commenting on people's artwork.. please be nice about it.. there will be no bad mouthing about people's artwork!!!

Constructive Feebacks welcomed on helping others improve their artwork...

P.S. You can also post any other artwork you're doing for another guild here or just for the heck of it...
PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2007 7:33 pm


Eh this isn't Naruto Shippuuden Artwork.. but I just wanted to post an artwork I worked really hard on for a class project...

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Reikage-Sanshi
Vice Captain


Le Trumpeteer

PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2007 10:56 pm


YOSH!
I think I've fixed my banner quite well with your youthful advice, Reikage-sama! Hehe, I'm just excited for the roleplay, that's all. Here it is:
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Is it any better now? Is it worse than before? I was puzzled though, because Naruto kind of looks like he has a bit of a blur around the edges of him, but I didn't put one. Weird. Oh well!
By the way, awesome drawing! I couldn't draw anything like that even if my life depended on it. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Fri May 25, 2007 8:12 pm


First off I have to give you a grand applause for how much better your banner looks... I had to honestly do a double take... that's how good it is!!

As for the blur... sometimes that happens when you resize an image.. oh I'll give you a little key code hint..when you got to hand resize it.. hold the shift key as you go to enlarge or shrink the image.. this way you don't have to worry about the size looking off.. like too narrow or too wide.. Just something to keep in mind.. heck I found that out from my graphic class..

But overal your banner has made a dramatic improvement!!!

Oh I actually think how the blur came to be... if you look closely at Naruto's hair to the background and faded out Naruto in the background it somehow blends together and causes a blur effect.... but it actally gives a nice added element.

I also like how you use the gradient tool and centered it behind Naruto text.. makes it POP out more..


Alright my drawing took me awhile to do.. like two weeks and that was an assignment.. the hard part was doing the three side views of her body.. and it was getting close to me handing this in.. that I took the shortcut and used the body outline of Kagome and InuYasha mixed together for her three body point of views.. and just filled in the information there..

I enjoyed doing it but hated the fact that I choose to do this as my final assignment... bc it took up so much time to get done while I had a lot of demanding homework from my other college classes besides working...

But my professor ended up loving it and said it was amazing and well done. So pretty much its a bunch of separate drawings put together...

Eventually I'll do some more of this... when I get the time...

Reikage-Sanshi
Vice Captain


Le Trumpeteer

PostPosted: Fri May 25, 2007 8:25 pm


Fooling around with the banner a bit, I added a drop shadow. I was hoping it would make Sakura and Naruto stand out a but more than they did. Although I'm not quite sure if it was a good addition...

It sounds like that your drawing must of taken a loong time! I admire your will to keep going. For me, I would've been very frustrated with that sweatdrop .
PostPosted: Sun May 27, 2007 12:51 pm


-chuckles- Well the only reason why it takes me soo long is that I'm precise on how I want my drawing to appear. There are times I'll take too long just working on one section or tiny detail area before it looks good.

though it helps me make good drawings.. its also a curse by how long it takes to finish it.

Reikage-Sanshi
Vice Captain


Hikari Hunny

PostPosted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 5:42 am


cool
PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:56 pm


i don't know... i think the artwork is pretty sick as it is... I know that some may want an improvement, but i think if anyone made artwork in the first place that they did a great job. I admire people with art skill!

elena6375


Reikage-Sanshi
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 5:16 pm


Well its always good to know even after something is done... just something for peeps to know for next time when they do a drawing similar... or something else to focus on.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 10:41 pm


Needs more "Fuzaz" to it.

-Meijin Mayonaka Hisui-


Le Trumpeteer

PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 9:36 pm


Rawr, very frustrated right now. I'm trying to draw my Naruto Shippuuden character, but I'm having much difficulty with a 3/4 view of the head. Even using shapes as guides isn't helping very much. Any tips?
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