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PostPosted: Fri May 25, 2007 2:27 pm


What do you think?

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THE MEDDLING MONKEY
(A Poem)

There once was a Meddling Monkey,
Who wanted to go for a spin.
He longed to see things of adventure,
and go places he'd never been.
Then one day he made a discovery,
He found a new flying machine!
In a moment he had an idea,
He got in cockpit, unseen.

He looked for a good way to start it.
(The password, he found, was nineteen.)
And soon he was actually flying!
He had finally accomplished his dream!

But suddenly there was a problem!
A disaster ! A rotten surprise!
The monkey was thrown from the cabin!
And BARELY avoided demise!
A moral is gleaned from this story.
Don't mess with stuff that you don't own!
This monkey did, now look what happened!
Up into the sky he was blown!

He wanted to fly
but his trip went awry
if you don't vote a ten
I believe I might cry!

biggrin ... I mean :'(


I just wrote that spur of the moment, improvements?

and I'm leaving on Thursday for a ten day cruise to Hawii!
so should I enter it for next week or wait till I can be here for a whole week to advertise it?
PostPosted: Fri May 25, 2007 3:10 pm


Very Cute! I'll vote!

I would wait until you get back to put it in, so you can advertise it. I'll put it in my sig, too.

ZeDancingFlame


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PostPosted: Fri May 25, 2007 5:44 pm


hey! Awesome! I'll let you all know when I put it up!

Any improvements I can make on the poem?
PostPosted: Fri May 25, 2007 6:57 pm


I love it.

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PostPosted: Sat May 26, 2007 3:52 am


That is the best poem i have EVER read. O_O_O_O_O
PostPosted: Sat May 26, 2007 11:11 am


Hey, I'm still messing around with avatars what do you think about this one?
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PostPosted: Sat May 26, 2007 2:53 pm


i like it, the only problem i see, is that you may get low rates, for total mc avi

and most of them will say it's been done before
PostPosted: Sat May 26, 2007 8:41 pm


You think so? I havn't seen anything like it yet. have you?

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PostPosted: Sat May 26, 2007 11:21 pm


I haven't.
PostPosted: Sun May 27, 2007 4:38 am


I am sure I have seen that avi in the arena before- it had a different discription though.

woolie

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PostPosted: Sun May 27, 2007 8:44 am


Dang, what a bummer
PostPosted: Sun May 27, 2007 5:56 pm


Layla Pathos
Dang, what a bummer
lol.

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PostPosted: Sun May 27, 2007 10:35 pm


10/10

my favorite, total winning material!
PostPosted: Wed May 30, 2007 5:55 pm


cool.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 5:27 pm


nice poem
but the avvie's already been done, I saw it.
you can try winning with it though.
goodluck
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