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Posted: Sun May 27, 2007 1:43 am
This is just to talk about the story and critic in here. This is so the story will not get spammed on biggrin Critic comment suggestion is loved! ^_^
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 7:20 am
(ahh! You read my mind!!!)
I was reading it, but some times when its squashed together, its vary hard to read if you get my point. I'm not done, but when I finish I'll add more to this...
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 2:25 am
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