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jake the fox
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 7:17 am

The place where you talk about it point out mistakes and write what you think about my story 3nodding

did you like it? Did you hate it? Do you see errors? Do I need to fix a sentence or more? did the third chapter need to be brought down in rate or up?

Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 5:46 pm

Obviously you do have a a few mistakes and more but if you finish the story first you can always read back over it. xd

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jake the fox
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 9:55 pm

yes but I can never bloody see them sweatdrop my head automatically makes it right xd

Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 7:39 am

jake the fox

yes but I can never bloody see them sweatdrop my head automatically make it right xd

Use the bold like I do. lalala

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jake the fox
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Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 4:29 pm

I still don't see how that helps I make it 72 size and only then can I see them....but head hurts afterwards. sad

Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 2:08 pm

jake the fox

I still don't see how that helps I make it 72 size and only then can I see them....but head hurts afterwards. sad

Bold actually lessens the stress on eyes because it isn't big or unseeable :3

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