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 Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 7:30 pm
I have a question, who here likes to read or write or both, poetry?
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 10:04 am
I do. :3
A lot of what I write is very cruel and to the point cause it's written mostly when I'm angry or fed up with something.
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 2:03 pm
Do you ever write much when your not angry?
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 5:32 pm
I work on one of my three in progress novels when i'm not angry.
And for some reason (maybe it's me), but my happy poetry is very contrite and cliche.
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 5:38 pm
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 5:41 pm
Here's one of them:
Shut the Door and Turn off the Lights
Perhaps it comes from a feeling inside
The darkness and the silence
This happy façade you wear just for me
Is starting to be dumb
I know these things
You don’t have to tell me
It’s not like I’m stupid
Just because I don’t talk
Doesn’t mean I don’t have anything to say
Whispers, whispers, whispers
You act like I can’t hear
Like it’s just for you
What’s left for me?
Just shut up and leave me alone
Cuteness is such a turn off
It’s like your showing off:
“Ha, ha. Look what I have that you don’t.”
Of that I am painfully aware.
So go be happy somewhere else
Get married and have your family
Just stop saying
It will eventually happen for me
The roses are black
Like the night outside
And the coffee in the pot
I need a break from you
Just for a little while
I find that
The most difficult kind of love
Is the kind of love
You have to hate
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 5:45 pm
*snaps fingers* why'd you write this one if you don't mind me askin?
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 5:53 pm
I was tired cause i felt like people were rubbing the fact that they had a significant other in my face and I didn't want to have to deal with it. That's the gist of it anyway...
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 6:00 pm
Yes, it seems this goes deeper, but I don't want to have you feel like I'm an intrusion in your personal life.
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 6:03 pm
There's more to it, but yeah. PDA kind of bothers me, particularly when it's only around you because you're 'comfortable with it' but really you just aren't saying anything cause you're too scared and you already said you didn't mind.
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 6:10 pm
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 6:11 pm
Public Displays of Affection, PDA. I'm just bitter cause I haven't had a boyfriend in a while and my roommate and her boyfriend liked to come up to my room and make out while i studied.
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 6:19 pm
So your in college? Then them making out bothers you when your trying to study and just in genarl right?
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 6:23 pm
not much personal space awakeness neutral
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 6:25 pm
yes, I'm in college. It bothers me whenever it happens, cause it happens when I'm not studying too. I talked to her about it and it stopped, which was good cause i got it off my chest. But when she talked to the boyfriend, he asserted that my reasons were stupid, which made me mad. It was bothering me cause I felt like a third party.
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