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The Original Yaoi Fanboy

PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 9:37 am


Love in my heart,
Burning like flame,
Out of the game…
Ripped out onto the floor,
Loving no more,
Gone! Out the door…
Trampled upon by the past,
Torn by the present,
And extinguished by the future…
It was you!
Who tore out my heart,
And left me bleeding…
It was you!
Who led my emotions astray…
It was you!
Who, when I turned, to trust…
Found was betrayed by the most,
With every drop,
Of my heart’s blood spilled,
Remember,
I trusted!
I loved!
I cherished!
I hoped!
I dreamed!
I cried…
I slept…
I awoke,
To the sound of your voice,
But in the arms of another…
You betrayed me!
When I proclaimed love to you…
You turned away…
My intentions,
Unnoticed…
Faded in this world,
Where only things that shine matter!!
But where did it go?
This feeling…
That you call…
Love?
PostPosted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 6:22 am


The form really makes you notice the emphasis on the words. Nice.

Again, please comment on other peoples work.

Queeny
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Numikea

PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 8:13 pm


I liked this poem in particuar because a lot of people ( myself included ) can
relate to it, I'm sure. I think it was great.
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