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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 4:39 pm
Hello everyone http://www.fanfiction.net/~sori000 This is actuall my mule account, but i like to use it anyway
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 4:52 pm
Currently i only have one major thing im working on.
The Three is my epic that i have made and re-made for the past maybe 3 years. My newest one is the best, you should see my old ones, they sucked.
Anyway The Three is based around many different games that i like to play: Themes and characters from such games as Threads of Fate, Kingdom Hearts, Musashi Samuri Legend, Sonic, and Altier Iris.
Thought while you read this always remember that I am a writing actor, so none of the charaters will have the same personality, I created and rehersed each new and unique personality. Everyone is different and easy to reconize.
-You will see that I used the 'dolls' from Threads of Fate, each of them is almost exactly like from the game.
-From Kingdom Hearts I raised heartless into my main conflict of the story, as you will read, Sora and her sisters want to control the heartless, and so on, this is the main reason of their jouney.
-My Musashi and his quest for the swords was brought in as well, though i used the swords for a new part of the story, most of the party members that join have the swords, and there is a story to the swords as well.
-Of course as soon as you hear "Chaos Emerald" you will know I stole this from Sonic, also Chao, I just love those little boogers.
-And finally, Atlier Iris, this is my second favorite game ever. I have taken a few things from here, being Iris, a few of the mana from the game, and just the fact that i liked alchemy went into my character Sora.
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 4:54 pm
This is the vocabulary list of The Three
1)star- second- every second each normal star moves it's size across the sky 'in the Jade Universe' (ex = one second "on earth") 2)element star-minute-' 'every minute the colored stars: red=fire, blue=water, yellow=air, and green=earth: all take one minute to move it's size in the sky 3)goddess star-hour-the star in the sky that always sit beside the moon, it takes and hour ' ' for the moon to move its size in the sky (not " " only ' ')
4)phase-day-the phase of the moon changes every day and the moon is visable through most of the day (same " ") 5)next phase-tomarrow 6l)ast phase-yesterday
7)cloud-week-' ' they study the water in clouds, it takes a week in earth time to turn the cloud in to a magic usable element (has nothing to do " ") (there is ten months in each year)
cool moon-month-every month the moon goes through its full cycle ' ' (each of the months are 14 days which is the time it takes to go through it's full cycle" ")
9)sun-year-' ' they study the heat from the sun, it takes a full year to harness the heat of the sun to a magic usable element (has nothing to do " ")
10)red star-to the north-the red star is towards the north (the stars in ' ' are always seen, during the day and night) 11)blue star-to the west-the blue star is towards the west (if someone was lost, they would follow the blue star, it always leads to the water temple, where all lost souls rest, so if they head that way, they will be found or find where they want to go) 12)yellow star-to the south-the yellow star is towards the south (all the temples are in the direction of its star) 13)green star-to the east-the green star is towards the east (all the gypsies pray facing the green star, it is the eye of the goddesses, when the goddesses visit the planets, this star doesn't move)
14)scythe-when it stabs the victim, it claws from the inside out as it was withdrawn again 15)katana-simple skinny sword carried in a tak skin sachtel diagonally on the back of the legs, under the Oar 16)Oar-large sword that is carried in a tak spandex string that fits around the sword as you withdraw it and hold the handle, held verticaly on the back 17)Clhow-a wand that needs study to use magic usable elements (this is not the only thing they study for, any one without a weapon, uses magical magic, anyone with a weapon uses phsyical magic. Also there are other magical items that people study elements to use with)
1 cool Tiheel-the 'hell' of the ' ', it is not like the one that we think " ", it is where Darks train and mostly live (the 'Devil' of Tiheel is Dante) 19)Tiheeva-the 'heaven' of the ' ', it is not like the one that we think " ", it is where Lights train and moslty live (it is where the goddesses live and good souls are then used to create a sorcery that the goddesses use to protect the Jade universe and to continuosly recreate the elements to recycle the universe resorces; the bad souls are left in Tiheel to to biddings for Dante. The goddesses are not myths, they visit the planets to check on the human actions towards the elements, as does Dante)
20)mallod_maload_-bendable wood-made from the trees called malle, which means bendy (as wieldly used as wood " ")
21)Vex-dog 22)Khats_Chats-enlarged cats, has a long neck, a very broad body, and huge legs and paws; used for transportation 23)Microbe- insect 24)Boar- pig 25)Browbeat- cow 26)Mare- horse 27)Surly_Shur'lie- crab 2 cool Marin_mahr'in'- sea animal (the sun ' ' dosen’t heat the planets, it heats the animals so that they heat the planets, then when the sun is not in the hemisphere of those animals, the cold conductors absorb the moon's coldness, so they keep the planets at a comfortable level) 29)Capon_capon- chicken 30)Tak-an enlarged rabbit- has the toughest hide, is used for sachtels and boat bottoms, and as a different species used as a spandex material (has no relation to the rabbit, there is no rabbits ' ')
31)deylines-currency
32)sword hand-left hand-you hold your sword in your left handwand/firestone 33)oar hand-right hand-you hold your oar in your right handstaff/amulent
34)Kivine-Plural Noun for Jade inhabitants/Kivane-name for humans ' ' instead of human " " 35)Entire-A belif that is neutral to Holy and Dark, they only belive in the 6 goddesses, and worship nymphs 36)Holy-A belif that sees the yellow star and air goddess star as the god and goddess of the universe, they believe that these stars keep the sun and moon in position, all Holy's are either air or light element 37)Dark-A belif that doesn't worship any god, they fuel power (meaning keeping Dark element balanced) for Dante, the ruler of Tiheel. They are very independent and sensitive about their belifs 3 cool Artists-A few people on Ansem's army, searching and fighting for him
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 4:57 pm
Some random notes for The Three (not finished, working on it as i work on the main story)
! Fairies' wand stars are made of firestone, which is also used as magic stones
! Adventures must be at least 11 and in a party of closest friends or pets
! If a party member's Poison is an attack of another party member, that member has power over that other member
! The one with the most power over the party is elected leader
! Lightning is a rare most powerful magic power, only chosen ones and monsters have lightning magic, it powers over all elements
! If an party meets one of the seven moon or sun creatures they are killed and brought back with a forth amount of each of The Seven Powers' power, and their weapon grows bigger
! There are no male fairies, fairies just multiply they never mate
! Only queen dragons can mate, queen dragons are larger than other dragons, and are golden when fully grown, other dragons are males
! Because adventurers' dragons have no feet, they are constantly flying even when sleeping
! Adventurer dragons are never ridden; no one has been able to stay on them
! Quest dragons only come into a battle; adventure dragons always follow their master
! If a dragon runs out of health, it is turned back to an egg
! If a fairy runs out of heath then it returns to level 1
!If an adventurer run out of health they cannot battle again until they return to an inn
!Same for a questist
!The Chaos Emeralds are -Air -Water -Earth -Fire -Strength -Defense -Lightning The Seven Powers Strength (the power),Defense (the guard), Fire (the burn), Water (the pressure), Earth (the base), Air (the breath), and Thunder (the energy).
!The Places of Killate
-Nymph Silo-The gathering tower of nymphs
Blue Star large Island
Climate-Beach Climate and red-blue climate 'execpt the month when the ocean coolers cool the entire planet' +Economy-Prostitution
Study-Lesser goddesses- powers of goddesses, but not fully
Leader-Rouge -Kinko-The Yellow star continent
Cold, deserted, dry
Homeland and labratories for water and cold studiers
-Amazon-The Blue star continent
Race-Amazons
Climate-Jungle climate year round ' ' +Economy-Animal tradesskin, meat, domestic
Study-heat and lightning
Leader-Fergie
-Panaama-The Red star island
Race-Humans (mostly Alchemists) +Climate-Tropical Cliamte year round ' ' +Economy-Galgazits +Study-Varied +Leader-Lilo (Moon worshipper Crystal)
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 5:06 pm
You can read this if you want to know what each star of the universe does
Stars can tell almost everything in the Jade Universe. They tell what time of day, the date, and the directions. They are visible throughout the whole day, but are brighter at night. Kivine can even study magic given off by the stars and the Sun, the moon, and the clouds.
Green Star-'The Eye of the Goddesses' When the Goddesses visit the planets, they check on what has happened, and what can happen, any Kivane actions. While they are on a certian planet, the star is not moving, but on any other planet it would still move.
Red Star-'The Passing Star' The Red star can only move in the red section. The sky is seperated into four sections, red, blue, green, and yellow or north, south, east, and west. Where in this section tells what month into the year it is. The moon tells what day of the month it is by the phase its in, the moon is also considered a star. If the red star is in the very north part of the Red section, then it is the first month of the year, and down until the most southern part. When the star reaches the south, it seems to be pulled back to the north again, because it travels around the universe back to the visible north of all the planets. It doesn't travel in a straight line, it has the whole Red Section to travel. As the year passes it changes position, it will move right or left due to the magic taken from it by studiers using it's power of fire (as with the other stars, green is earth, blue is water, and yellow is air and lightning, the moon is dark, and the sun is light). It will move to the right as the more magic is taken, then move to the left as more of the magic is used from that study, which gives it's power back.
Blue Star-'The Lost Star' The blue Temple is where the souls are collected after death. If you are lost, the best way to follow is to the blue star, it has always brought Kivine out of the lost. In this temple, the good souls are taken to Tiheeva, then are used to magic of the Goddesses to protect the planets. The bad souls are taken to Tiheel, then are used to magic of Dante to continually birth Darks and dark magic resources. Also and more importanly, this star moves from east to west, it moves much faster than the other stars, every time it is metranomed back and forth, it is a new week, the month is told by the red star. It also moves north and south due to the amount of magic drawn from it and used.
Yellow Star-'The Second Sun' The yellow star and all the stars all lead in the direction of its temple ex yellow star to the yellow temple. It is known as the Second Sun because it is how the Goddesses protect the planets. It it larger than the other stars, but not larger than the goddess star. To protect the planets , it first collects the souls, then uses the magic to recycle within the planets, which means that if there is a decrease in good souls, the magic within the generations will start to wither, which means that Kivanes will gradually turn to normal human like on our Earth, which would then mean that the world will turn to greed, laziness, and carelessness of the planets.
Goddess Star-"With the power of the gods" This quote means that the people belive that the star is a Kivine with the power of a god, but does not want to be living or dying. This star lies right beside the moon at all times. Which leads to the telling of hours. There is only one moon in the Jade Universe and one Sun. They are on opposite sides of the universe. The planets move in an oval movement in the center of the two giant stars. The moon is always visable because the sun rays are blocked in the middle of the oval by a magic created by the Dante field. When a planet passes this feild towards the moon, it it night, and vise versa.
Elemental Stars-"The births of children" This quote means that the births of children with magical power, are powered at birth by the magic given by the elemental stars in order to use the powers. The Elemental stars are solid dences of air, earth, fire, and water. The gravity of space keeps them in orbit, they move in a very skinny oval orbit back and forth from the sun and moon between the planets. When two pass, a many of rare chances can occur: The Red and Blue cross A vapor magic Kivane can born, the Red and Yellow pass A lightning magic Kivane can born, when the Red and Green pass A Vampire can born Vampires are just as we think, they can bite and multiply, when the Blue and Yellow pass A mermaid can born or merman, they are unable to bred, when Blue and Green pass A earth whisperer can born which is a Kivane that can talk to ghost, pixies, and any element, and when Yellow and Green pass A death dancer is born which is almost like a waker, except, it dances for the elements is called a death dancer because when they dance, it is a curse.
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 5:08 pm
This is a little history of the goddesses and such
At one time, a very long time ago, the goddesses, the Seven Powers, Dante, and Ansem, were the only beings in the universe. They chose to be mortal on a lone planet, they all lived separately on that planet at that time. The six goddesses were nymphs, they were never together, they were always 'mating' with the men, soon, they created the first Kivines. The Seven Powers were all wakers, they seemed to be the leaders of the others. Dante was still a Dark then, he was like the 'bad' kid, the goddesses were always fond of him, that is how Tiheel is so populated from the beginning, his children took his beliefs in and they and Dante created the second planet, which was actually a flat circular land, almost literally at the bottom of the universe. The Seven Powers built the Carpenterion, and their seven children, born as the dwarfs, controlled it. The six goddesses created eight different planets, with the children born that they kept, they divided them to each of the planets.
At one time, a very long time ago, the goddesses, the Seven Powers, Dante, and Ansem, were the only beings in the universe. The goddesses were the mothers of all, the 'mistresses of the entire', the Seven Powers forged the seven chaos emeralds and together forged the Master emerald to neutralize the powers of the emeralds, Dante created Tiheel and started the Dark religion. On their planet, the nineteen Kivine lived as normal beings. The goddesses whored around, the Seven Powers lead with their strengths, Dante strolled in his darkness, and Ansem stayed in his own part of land, studying and training himself. On this planet, Dante saw Ansem as a threat to him and his 'dark plans'. Ansem saw that Dante was going to become something powerful, and kept a distance. Through the ages, after the planets were created Ansem ran and hid until his powers and strength grew, then when Sora was born, he stole her from her mother, but lost her in the beast's field (the animals are more powerful than any Kivine, even Iris), on the same day, Sara and Sori were born, Sara's mother managed to keep her for a while, but stole her from Iris, and he took Sori from her mother as soon as she was born. After the two children grew he collected the last of them, Sora. Now with his children he is able to create the heartless again. His son ran away from him after the planet was destroyed, now to come back, Ansem was to collect the girls, which he was to bore with powerful mothers, then collect the dead gods, or dolls, then these dolls will help paint the "Mural of Resurrection", or the painting to recreate the heartless. Ansem’s other desire is to take Dante's place in Tiheel. Dante and his religion rely on the element of dark, which the heartless use to create, live, and multiply, so once the heartless start to show, this power will belong to their creator.
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