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Morvegil
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 4:16 pm


A long time ago, in a Galaxy far away... the Black Imperium had risen under a grand new Sith Lord. Darth Malkavii, was what they whispered in the shadows. He had an apparently limitless supply of battle droids, as he had conquered the planet Mustafar, and was using it's wealth of metal-resource to build his armies. As if this wasn't bad enough on its own, there was a host of dark jedi at his command. Few were his apprentices, but many called him master. Jedi he'd never met were falling to corruption, and the dark side of the Force. He was renouned only for his mastery of the Force, although his saber skills were never truely well tought, and he remains a poor combatant.

But on the planet Lok, in the Tatooine system, there is a remote jedi enclave with the intent of training those who are in some way naturally strong with the Force, to battle against this new Imperialistic dark jedi threat. There are other enclaves throughout the Galaxy, since the Empire under Darth Sidious was defeated, the jedi have had no threat, and could once again train in their sacred art. Few masters of old remained, in fact most of them had since died. But so long as Luke Skywalker has things under control, we have nothing to worry about.

There are rumours also, of something darker behind the dark jedi... the rumours speak of sith teachings, and Lords. Could they really still be? Is there no end to the dark side of the Force? The fate of the Galaxy rests in the strengths of either side. Which will you fight for?


In this roleplay, for now, there will be no real combat. Just training new students in the ways of the Force, and lightsaber combat. You may however choose the role of a Master, if you feel up to it. Your profile should be set like this.

Name :
Race :
Age : (Young jedi, from the ages o 6-15 will be considered padawan, and not fully brought into the Order.)
Lightsaber Colour : Basically choose from any of the colours in the 'colour' tab.
Lightsaber Style : You may choose one of these as your style - Single hilt x1, single hilt x2, or staff.
Appearance/story :
Reasons for joining the Order :

When you use your lightsaber, you must make the word lightsaber, your lightsaber colour, for instance : Obi Wan slashes his lightsaber towards Darth Vader, in an attempt to disarm and defeat his old apprentice.

Darth Vader blocked Obi Wan's attack, and done an upward slash, his lightsaber slicing the old jedi's hand off instantly.

It's basically a bit of fun, if you don't use the word lightsaber, or indeed a lightsaber at all, you may choose to avoid the colour variants. This also doesn't need to apply to your foe's lightsabers, but that could also be fun. ((I am open to suggestion.))

I hope someone makes a dark jedi, or Sith RP soon so that we can play both sides.


How to join - You can turn up to the enclaive directly, just buzz the door droid as he's probably expecting you, he's programmed to ask for your name (as ID and voice ID). Also you can land at the small Lok star-port and make your own way accross the rugged wastes. So long as you make a decent start, it should be ok.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 4:28 pm


As the metal shutters of the garage open at the rear of the enclave, the noise of an engine can be heard starting up. The shutters are barely half way open and Rinatu slides under them on his swoop, he recovers the bike and accelerates to full speed, on his way to the enclave's private moisture dealer's homestead. Since fresh water is rare without moisture vaporators in the Tatooine system, and especially on Lok where the rivers run as sulphuric acid, it was wise of him to seek out a farmer as soon as he was positioned on the planet.

The moisture farm wasn't a long way away, especially not on Rinatu's swoop bike. He arived within the hour, and collected the regular three day supply of drinking water. The enclave had it's own vaporators, but the water produced was not of drinking quality, so it was used for bathing and for the animals, it was also ok to cook with. He paid the man a few credits, and was quickly on his way back to the enclave to greet his newer students, and to discuss matters of importance with his peers.

The garage door was left open, Rinatu thought to himself : "That droid, it should close the shutters as soon as I'm out of the garage... it's a good thing Lok is relatively remote, or we could have some trouble." : he was no sooner in finishing his thought when the speederbike halted, in it's correct parking position. He looked at the droid, then hit the shutter 'close' foot pedal, in a commanding manner. The droid's head turned round and it made a few internal blipping noises. Rinatu felt compelled to say ; "Don't take that tone with me, or I shall sell you to the Jawa traders on Tatooine, it's not so far away, you know!" : with that, the droid trundled quickly off and busied it's self with the main enclave mainfraim.. or whatever droids do around here.

Rinatu walked slowly through the quiet hallways, the cool stone walls keeping a moderate temperature, on an otherwise warm planet. He stood in the main combat dojo arena, in the enclave, ready to greet the new arrivals.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 4:55 pm


"Hey Rinatu! Stop scaring that poor droid!" a voiced filled whil laughter came from behind a docked Z-95, an old craft from before the Clone Wars.

"Save your energy for scaring the students that will come here." he said smiling back at his fellow master, his name was Kalo Bremel. He had been a Jedi for several years now, he had been recruited by Luke Skywalker on one of the first classes of the Praexum on Yavin IV, he had met Master Skywalker several years before that on his Homeworld planet on the Outer Rim while they both still fought for the Rebel Alliance against the now defunct Galactic Empire.

((Hey, I will leave a more detailed description on the Sub-Forum for character's bios, ok?))
PostPosted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 2:30 am


Rinatu grinned broadly beneath his mask, although the energy he was giving off probably gave it away ; "You fly-boys still sneaking around this place? I doubt there's anything more than the odd Hutt smuggler." he said this with a questioning tone, as if the words he said ment nothing - and he was expecting some news. He turned around and gave a light bow to Kalo, expressing his gladness at the jedi's safe return.
"I haven't met any new students yet, actually. I thought they'd have gotten here by the time I'd finished the 'milk run'. I was just about to go and check and see what we got. " he said,and then turned back to connect several canistars to a large, and rather shoddy shaft (probably full of pipes and whatnot).


((That's fair enough, it's whats expected - thanks for joining!!))

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 7:45 am




"Ye stupid b*****d, let me in!" The enraged Togorian groaned rather loudly, sitting down in the sand as she stared up at the droid. Her dense fur was matted with sand from her travels, though it still regained its light cream color. Her eyes were bright and intelligent, claws long and serrated, and her mouth that held amazingly sharp teeth was able to speak most languages quite well, her Basic flawless.

"I don't have an ID, do you understand? NO ID!"
PostPosted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 11:51 am


After walking the short distance from the landing platform and being escorted to the doors of the enclave by 2 members of the Coruscant security force officers, Corran Dersk noticed, a young Torgorian girl hitting a sand beaten plasi-steel door, he said in a rather cheerful manner, " hey there lil girl, you throw you frisbee in there or something?" with a single motion his plasma cuffs and anklets were released and one of the guards gave him a dunt as the other opened the door with a secure number he could not quite make out. "Seems we're going to the same place girly. Hope theres some more mature ladies for me to work this hokey pokey force stuff on" he winked as he was trudged into the main hall of the enclave, he awaited his new fate at the hands of the jedi. He saw 2 figures behind a plasi-steel window and now wonder which fate would of been worse... his current or ...prison.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 2:43 pm


"Well take a look at that Rinatu, two new faces have just arrived... and judging from that departing ship of the Coruscanti SecForces one of them must be this Dersk fellow we were told to reform..." he started walking towards the new arrivals.

"Hello and welcome to the Jedi Academy of Lok, my name is Master Kalo Bremel and with me is Master Rinatu Wanbar. We are here to teach you the ways of the Jedi." he stepped forward towards the man first, and offered him his hand. "You are Corran, right? Pleased to meet you."

After shaking hands with him, he moved over to the Torgorian teenager. "And you must be M'landru Hope. Nice to meet you as well." and he offered her his hand as well.
PostPosted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 5:20 pm


Upon shaking the mans hand, Corran wipes his hands on his trousers just incase this man had been carrying some disease from this lowly planet. "Yeah uh whos the masked mynock there? You ugly or something buddy?" He said in his usual sarcastic tones. Realising he looked drastically out of place in SecForce prisoner uniform he decided he should shut up incase they sent him back whence he came. Sitting down he ignored further offers of handshakes, and patiently watched and waited to find out his fate at the hands of these "Jedi".

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 6:46 pm


Rinatu looks the new arrivals over briefly, sizing up the young Torgorian with some interest, his attention then turning to the human in the prisoner overalls who had been rude to master Bremel - he nodded a swift bow and spoke in a manner associated to the jedi ; "Welcome to our humble enclaive, it is a simple complex - probably not as elaborate as the world that you are used to." he eyed the Torgorian "Confusion..." and then the human "Equal confusion, and somewhat fear." he stood gazing as if between the two, pondering, and then spoke some words of comfort. He stepped back and allowed the older master into the spotlight, respectively. He stood somewhat at ease, his hands loosely held behind his back as he oversaw the instructions.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 7:56 am


((Sorry about any confusion, but I changed Mel from a Twi'lek to a Torgorian...I was finally able to find a good picture, thanks to some help.))

M'landru merely lifted a furry eyebrow at this newcomer, and growled in reply. Her father was wise, he told her to never be angry, especially if you planned to become a Jedi. Anger was bad...but then again, her temper wasn't full of anger, but more...frustration. "Mature ladies? Please...I've got maturity than you probably have." She stood, rather tall for her age, and followed this strange man through the doors, rather pleased with herself that she wouldn't have to yell at some stupid door.

The claws on her feet clicked softly on the gritty floor, somewhat surprised of its emptiness. Tawny eyes stared straight at the two Jedi now in front of her, one masked, the other not. The Togorian took his hand and shook it rather firmly, careful not to let her nails accidentally curl in as they usually did. "Aye, I am M'landru. I'm sure you and your friend must know my father, Captain Hope. He's the one that's been helping..." She coughed, rather sarcastically, "well, contributing some supplies."

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 2:44 pm


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((Sorry about any confusion, but I changed Mel from a Twi'lek to a Torgorian...I was finally able to find a good picture, thanks to some help.))


((Way to kill the RP, after all of us saying Twi'lek you change it.... stare ))
PostPosted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 12:34 pm


"He sure has." Kalo answered to togorian youth. "Your father has proved a worthy ally over the years."

He stopped for a moment, and began to reflect. With one hand he stroke the beard on his chin.

"Very well, this is going to be the deal. Corran you will be apprenticed to Master Rinatu and you M'landru will become my apprentice."

He awaited the response of the others.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 1:04 pm


"Oh this just gets better, I get this masked Jedi as master? So now I know I am not here for punishment they must of heard about me using my abilities on the paazaak tables.", Corran thought. Standing up again he moved toward the masked man "So Mr Jeedie? You're gonna be my master huh? Hope you're up for a challenge my man, I trained in various martial arts from around the galaxy and I am skilled with a Vb" he said smugly trying to impress the others around him.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 1:18 pm


Rinatu rubbed his eye idly while his new apprentice was chatting, he asked mockingly "Did you say something?" he then bowed slightly saying "welcome to the Order - both of you."

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 11:41 am


A slight breeze ruffled through her feathers as Hawkana approached the droid at the door. She had been desperately been awaiting for the day when she would meet another jedi but secretly dreaded it too. What if she was rejected because she had not had formal training? A curse slipped out of her mouth when a native insect bit one of her highly sensitive wings. Without thinking she reached out with the force and squished the little pest. Then with all the care and precision of a surgeon she reached through her feathers and re-smoothed her feathers. She hated bugs. Focusing her attention back on the droid she approached with her confidence leaking out of her rapidly.
"My name is Hawkana," she voiced emotionlessly. "I believe I have been summoned here?"
The droid nodded and opened the door, its own voice as emotionless as her own.
"Through here please."
She walked boldly through the door, her eyes immediately adjusting to the dark. The one good thing about living on that accursed planet was the upgrades it had given to her body. Unsure of where to go, she looked left and right for a moment then continued to stroll forward. She was sure to run across someone soon.

[[Here's where I posted Hawkana's profile Hawkana's profile and a random picture of her- Hawkana battle attire ]]
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