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OverlordMMM

PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 11:06 pm


....its about 2/3 done....but oh well......just tell me what you think....(mind the corniness of the second part..)




My Confession

This is a confession which I must make.
There have been promises I made just to break,
but that doesn't mean I have been fake.
There were some things I just could not forsake.
When I said those woords they felt so untrue
that I knew my thoughts would show through.
All I know is that my broken words shall hurt you
and there is nothing else I can do.....
......except confess....

If I had the chance to alter time
I'd do it in a second before I change my mind
If given the chance, I'd take it in a minute
I want to take the hand and begin to spin it
If you gave me the chance to change the hour
This day, this week, I'd use the power
To push back time a month or two
But since I can't change the year, there is nothing to do
......except confess....
PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 10:00 am


very powerful words sad i ike it smile

my_sweet_baby


OverlordMMM

PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 8:50 pm


....thank you...
PostPosted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 12:41 am


np i like short poem too case i write them i like long ones but they mae my brain fell bigger than my skull stressed

my_sweet_baby


deathslittleyinyang

PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 5:48 pm


I like it too.^__^
PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 12:15 am


i no its awsome

my_sweet_baby


OverlordMMM

PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 3:13 pm


...eh....it needs some work......(...but first it needs an ending.....)...oh well....I'll post the rest in 20 years biggrin .....
PostPosted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 8:36 pm


crying that long dang

my_sweet_baby


DJ Database

PostPosted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 3:20 pm


That seems very sad, but i like it

Edit: and the second part is very corny at all
PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 4:53 am


OverlordMMM
....its about 2/3 done....but oh well......just tell me what you think....(mind the corniness of the second part..)




My Confession

This is a confession which I must make.
There have been promises I made just to break,
but that doesn't mean I have been fake.
There were some things I just could not forsake.
When I said those woords they felt so untrue
that I knew my thoughts would show through.
All I know is that my broken words shall hurt you
and there is nothing else I can do.....
......except confess....

If I had the chance to alter time
I'd do it in a second before I change my mind
If given the chance, I'd take it in a minute
I want to take the hand and begin to spin it
If you gave me the chance to change the hour
This day, this week, I'd use the power
To push back time a month or two
But since I can't change the year, there is nothing to do
......except confess....


Its so good I love it I would give it a A or known as 10/10

Young_Legolas

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