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Ostracized Evolution

PostPosted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 2:45 am


Raging Blossoms: Prologue
The small girl giggled as she looked in the mirror and turned around. "Hello, my name is Haruno Sakura. How may I serve you?" She asked the reflection. I can't believe Mommy is gonna let me work with her! Sakura smiled. She hummed the happy birthday song as she ran downstairs eagerly.
"Mommy!" Sakura called, running to her mother to give her a hug.
"Ah, there you are. As of today, you're lucky number seven! Happy birthday, Sakura-chan!" Sakura's mother said hugging her daughter back.
"Hey, Mommy! Ino was real nice tome today! She gave me this!" Sakura pointed to the linen ribbon in her hair.
"Wow, sweetie that's beautiful!" Her mother smiled. "Hey pumpkin, wanna see if little Ino-chan would like to join us for dinner?"
"Yay! Mommy you're the best!" Sakura hugged her mother once more, then ran outside to go retrieve her buddy.
Sakura skipped and hummed with a large grin on her face.
"Oof!" Sakura had bumped into a large bouncy surface, which soon turned out to be a belly.
"Hey there little mousy. Out so late? Where's yer mommy?" The large figure bent over so it's face was eye-level with Sakura's.
Sakura whimpered a bit, then said,"I'm sorry for bumping into you mister." She bowed. "I have to go now. Have a good evening!" Sakura started to walk further down the street when suddenly the figure grabbed her by the back of the shirt collar.
"Answer my question ya brat! Where's yer mannas?" The man said with a wicked grin. "Hey boys, I caught us a live one!" Then man called to two muscular men behind him.
"Well, boss it's just a little mousy, but she'll do." Said one of the men.
Sakura whimpered.
"Let me go, please." She said, shaking.
"No can do, mousy. yer comin' with us!" The large, fat man tucked her under his arm like a toddler with a teddy bear. Tears streamed down Sakura's face. She was frozen with fear. "Oof!" "Aggggh!" The two men behind her were on the ground. A swift kick was made to the fat man's face. Sakura was swiftly removed from the man's arms and into someone else's.
"Are you O.K.?" The child who saved Sakura asked nervously.
"Sa..Sasuke-k...kun? You saved me?" Sakura looked up at her classmate.
Sasuke nodded. I MUST BE DREAMING! SASUKE TALKS TO NO ONE!
Sakura was in a daze.
"Sakura-chan? You alright?" The Uchiha child was still small, but he had a heart even an adult's chest could not hold, even though his whole family was gone. He was also a very skilled student.
"Yes, thank you, Sasuke-san..."
"Sa....san? Am I really worthy of being called that?" Sasuke blushed.
Sakura nodded and blushed.
"I gotta go now, arigato, Sasuke-san!" She waved good-bye to him.
"You can call me Sasuke-kun, I don't mind..." He said.
"Okay, bye-bye! Thanks again.....Sasuke-kun!"

"Haruno Sakura!" Iruka called out.
"Over here!" Sakura waved sliding the door open swiftly and dashing inside.
"You're late Miss Haruno!"
"I am sorry Iruka-sensei!"
"Geez, you're already 12, you should be more responsible!." Iruka scolded.
Awwww, crap late again! Sasuke-kun might think I'm a total loser now Sakura thought to herself and sighed.

((That is the prologue! Tell me if it's a good start!))
PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 3:57 pm


Seems interesting. Is this going to be an AU? So far, it seems like something that actually could have happened...I am curious to know what the larger plot is going to be. Wait...I just looked back at what I wrote, and it looks confusing.

kotamekiyo


00RockLee00

PostPosted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 8:20 pm


I agree with kotamekiyo, it does seem like it could've happened. I would deffinately like to see the whole story.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 7:17 pm


good start...but i have the same proble u have, putting detail in the story

Mizu-O Yaru Okami

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