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 Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 3:28 pm
I whisper from the shadows, and caress you in the night.
Pass from your walls and windows; come look for me by starlight.
Come away into the night where fear and passion rein.
Turn from cruel unfeeling light where all is lies and pain.
Look for me 'neath silver stairs that descend from up above.
Follow my voice upon the air my pure lost little dove.
I wait beneath the moon's eye bathed in her silver might.
Go by the path the raven fly I wait beneath clear starlight.
Come so I may embrace you and taste your blood red lips.
Drink full shall we from lust anew not mortal's tentative sips.
No bonds can hold you from me, nor pass you from my eyes.
Come into my arms and we shall take into the skies.
So come for me by starlight where beauty and shadows be.
With souls entwined, revealed and silent, till sun parts you from me.
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 5:54 am
AH! I think I'm becoming a fan of your poems!!! 4laugh
I love this as much as the other one. Your choice of vocabulary enhances the poem by far and the visualisation it creates is powerful, as is the emotion it creates too.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 8:16 pm
I ADORE THIS POEM!! I absolutely love it! It's so descrpitive, and it portrays
a beauteous picture. I love it. Keep writing!! heart
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