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bluewhale9
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 6:58 pm


This is the prequal to the first story in A Fading Dream

Story 1

When Maria and Saiyuri are children
Saiyuri: Maria nee-san look at the flowers I picked when I was out in the field
Maria smiles
Mother: I told you not to bring those filthy flowers in and look at you you’re covered in dirt.
Mother slaps Saiyuri
Maria hugs Saiyuri
Maria: Saiyuri-chan you always look cute in my eyes don’t pay attention to mother
At piano room
Teacher: You need to study more and pay attention when I’m talking to you Saiyuri
Teacher sighs
Maria: I finished playing now
Teacher: Maria-sama that was beautiful now if only Saiyuri were as good as you
Maid: look what you did Saiyuri you tracked mud in to the house
Saiyuri: sorry I’ll clean it up
Saiyuri grabs the towel under the vase
Vase falls
Maid slaps Saiyuri
Maid: you are such a klutz Saiyuri why can’t you be your sister
When they are 13 years old
Archery class
Knight: Wow you got a bull’s eye Maria-sama your so good at archery
Maria: no I’m not good at all I’m just average
Knight: Maria-sama you are too humble and modest
Saiyuri break arrow
Saiyuri< Why is it Maria this and Maria that. Does no one care for me?>
In garden
Boy: I love you Maria-san
Maria: thank you but I think you should date my sister instead
Boy: no Saiyuri is nothing like you. She’s so dull and boring.
Maria slaps him
Maria: don’t ever talk that way about my sister
Maria: cough** cough**
Maria faints
In Maria’s room
Father: How is she doctor
Doctor: The disease is starting to worsen
Father: If only Saiyuri were born with the disease instead of Maria
Doctor nods head
Saiyuri in hall listening in
Saiyuri
16 years old
Father: Maria how are you feeling
Maria: fine father but where is Saiyuri
Mother: Oh who cares right now we are worried about you dear.
Father: Oh I must be going Saiyuri is meeting her fiancé
Mother: Saiyuri come greet your sister NOW
Parents walk out of room
Maria: I am so happy for you Saiyuri
Saiyuri: SHUT THE HELL UP. Why do you treat me so different so warmly you act so cold towards everyone else. I’m tired of hearing you say my name everyone loves you. You should just go die.
Saiyuri runs out of room
In den
Father: I would like you to meet your fiancé Bari
Saiyuri: It’s a pleasure to meet you I hope this marriage goes well
Bari: Nice to meet you Maria
Saiyuri: MY NAME IS NOT MARIA IT’S SAIYURI. I WON’T BE A REPLACEMENT FOR MY SISTER!
Saiyuri runs out of room
4 months later
Mother: Just marry him today
Saiyuri: NO
Father: you live in our house now obey our rules
Saiyuri: No I refuse to marry someone I that does not love me
Bari walks in
Bari hugs her
Bari: I do love you S A I Y U R I
Saiyuri< Why has this man melted my hate towards my sister? Why do I love him so much? I am happy that I get to marry him instead of my sister and that he loves me and only me>
Saiyuri begins to cry
Saiyuri: Very well then I’ll marry you
they kiss in wedding clothes
The month after Saiyuri and Maria’s 17th birthday
Saiyuri about to go in to hospital room but stops to hear her husband speaking to her sister
Maria: Please make Saiyuri happy
Bari: I was told I would marry you in the beginning
Maria: Please do not talk of such things
Bari: I love you Maria. I do not have any feelings for Saiyuri
Maria: I do not love you nor can I except your feelings
Maria: Please go NOW
Bari holds her in a deep embrace
Maria: let go of me
Bari kisses her
Maria slap him
Bari: I love you Maria. No one else but you, I wanted to marry you not Saiyuri.
Bari: I love only you
Maria: Please never visit me again and treat my sister well or I shall never forgive you
Maria glares at him with icily
Saiyuri walks in crying
Saiyuri< How could he say this in the same place where we live and met? The same place I fell in love with him. After telling me he loved me and even marrying him. I hate her.>
Saiyuri: I hate you Maria You took everything away from me.
Saiyuri grabs a knife on table
Maria: If you want me to truly die then kill me. I have no purpose if I can’t help make you happy or protect you.
Saiyuri: SHUT THE HELL UP
Saiyuri: You took everyone I loved away from me.
Saiyuri stabs Maria with the knife
Maria’s last words
Maria: Saiyuri I love you and thank you for ending this nightmare.
Maria dies
Saiyuri glares at Bari
Bari tries to defend himself as Saiyuri nears him
Bari SCREAMS as he lays dying after being stabbed-
Parents walk in
Saiyuri stabs them to death in the stomach
Later
Saiyuri< let this hell die with me in flames along with those who betrayed me>
Saiyuri lights house on fire
Maria: Why are you hurting yourself like this
Saiyuri: I killed you
Maria: correct
Saiyuri: Get away from me ghost
Saiyuri last words: I hate you Maria
Saiyuri runs into burning house
Saiyuri dies in fire
A year later
Maria< I’m dead but yet I’m living. I hope Saiyuri you died peacefully. I’ll love you always my dear little sister.>
PostPosted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 7:01 pm


Story 2

In the forest
Yuka: don’t hurt me Taigami-sama
Taigami: Your dead you stupid b***h
Yuka: So you knew
Taigami: Yuka a young princess of the Yoriha clan was killed ten years ago
Yuka: You can’t hurt me you have no spiritual powers
Blue flames cover his daggers
Yuka: You can’t be him
Taigami: Yep the legendary half-breed
Taigami uses daggers and slashes Yuka in half
Yuka starts bleeding and her body starts turning into silver dust
Yuka’s last words: The cursed one
Yuka fades
Rizu: Taigami when will you except that you are a shinigami
Taigami: I am neither human nor am I a shinigami
Taigami walks away
Taigami< I was born with a curse the power of shinigamis but that is also what makes me hated by humanity. As well as the fact that I am the child of princess who was scorned for falling in love with a shinigami.>
Taigami walks into town
Woman: its him get away from here
Man: He probably kidnapped the prince’s fiancé
Taigami: damn it
Taigami runs into an alley
Taigami: almost got in trouble
Yumi: excuse me
Taigami: what do you want?
Yumi: could you please help me get out of the city
Taigami: you don’t want to be near me
Yumi: Please what if I told you about the story my mother told me about the ice princess who died for a the king of shinigami Ryoumi
Taigami< Dad and mom>
Taigami: fine
Wind surrounds them and then they disappear
At lake
Yumi: where are we?
Taigami: now tell me the story
Yumi: well many years ago a beautiful princess was to marry an evil king who was going to destroy her kingdom, but she had fallen in love with a handsome shinigami he had eyes that were silver almost clear blue and light green hair. He had saved her life when she tried to escape after being captured by the evil king. She tried to jump out one of the tallest towers in the castle. Ryoumi saved her and used his beautiful white wings to takes her far away to a lake where not one evil soul could ever reach.
Taigami: and then what happened
Yumi: Well you’ll have to wait till tomorrow
Next day
Yumi: They confessed their love for each other and exchanged vows. A year later she gave birth to a beautiful boy that looked just like the spirit king. Many years later though the princess found out her country was on the verge of being destroyed and ran to save her people. However the people scorned her for running off with a shinigami so she ran to the evil king and begged for her people to be spared. He then told her she would have to be sacrificed for her betrayal of both her people and him. She was burned at stake and with her last words she said I shall never love you nor did I betray you. I loved the one who saved me and has given me the greatest gifts of my family and my own happiness.
Yumi: it’s such a romantic story
Taigami: you really like this story don’t you
Yumi: It’s my favorite story I love it
Next day at lake at night
Yumi: the spirit king was outraged after find this out and took his soul. He buried her beside the lake where they had vowed there eternal love for each other. And then gave up his own life so that her people the ones she loved could be happy and so she could rest in peace he gave his child the remaining fragments of his powers and both their bodies faded into silver dust.
Yumi: that is the story hey you have really beautiful eyes
Taigami: They are nothing but a curse
Yumi: No don’t say that I think they are great
Yumi stand up and walks towards lake then looks at Taigami and smiles
Yumi: You shouldn’t ever think of anything about yourself as a curse
Taigami: Now tell me why did you want to escape if I’m correct you are the missing fiancé to the king
Yumi: yes but I needed to escape I don’t want to marry someone I do not love.
Taigami: the same words mother said to me
Flash back
Mother: never marry someone you do not love
End flash back
Taigami: You said the exact same thing my mother would have said
Yumi: when anyone ever talks about the Spirit queen they talk as if she died because of Ryoumi but she died for her people and she chose to die in way where no one would be hurt. I believe if I were given to live a happy life with out knowing love or dying early because of my love I would choose death. I would rather know what love feels like then live with out it wouldn’t you?
Taigami: Yeah I guess close your eyes for a second
Taigami kisses her
Yumi: what was that for?
Taigami: I don’t really know I’ve never really felt these feelings before
Yumi: Me too I feel really warm inside
Taigami: You know I’m not human
Yumi: I know I could tell the day I met you. My mother had told me about the king Ryoumi and you look exactly like she explained it
Taigami: I am my father’s son
Kangamu sitting in tree
Kangamu: Well what a nice sight my soon to be wife seducing some monster
Yumi hides behind Taigami
Taigami: You could marry any girl you wanted why marry someone who is afraid of you
Kangamu: Hahahah
Kangamu: Don’t tell me you didn’t tell him Yumi
Yumi: Stop don’t say it
Kangamu: Yumi’s mother helped my father’s fiancée escape and then she married a shinigami who she wound up dying with
Kangamu: Oh and guess what Yumi isn’t a normal everyday girl she is the princess of a nation that I destroyed
Yumi stars crying
Yumi: Stop it
Taigami: Damn that is pathetic that some guy like you wants revenge for there old man on a woman and can’t even get the girl to fall for him
Kangamu: I’ll kill you. You b*****d
Kangamu tries to attack him with a sword
Taigami uses the wind to push back the sword
Kangamu: takes sword and throws it at Yumi
Taigami: No Yumi
Taigami quickly runs towards Yumi
The sword goes straight into Taigami’s gut
Yumi: Why did you have to get hit by the sword?
Yumi: It should have been me
Taigami: Yumi stop crying I want to see you smile but I still have some un finished business
Taigami pulls sword out of him bloods starts dripping out of his wound
Taigami make flame and wind surround the sword
Kangamu: Still not dead yet
Kangamu reaches for gun
Kangamu tries to shoot Taigami but Yumi get in front of Taigami and instead the bullet hits Yumi
Swirling blue aura surrounds Taigami
Taigami: Damn you
Kangamu: mommy
Taigami pushes the sword through Kangamu’s chest
Kangamu dies
They crawl towards a tree
Taigami: Yumi are you okay
Yumi: yeah I’m just glad you didn’t die before me
Taigami hold Yumi in his arms and grasps her hands
Taigami and Yumi: I love you
Taigami and Yumi kiss
Yumi starts crying
Yumi: Thank you for saving me
Taigami: I wish I had met you sooner
Taigami and Yumi die in each others arms
Rizu: It appears they have finally found peace together through death near Mana
Right Yuka
Yuka: Yes Rizu-sama
Rizu: come we must take this tree sapling
Yuka: Why I thought this tree was Mana
Rizu: yes but Mana is dying and this is Yggdrassil a tree that will bring the new era

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