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 Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:13 am
It's just a story i made up and i want to know if any one thinks i should go on! Don't get mad about what happens thought!!! I wanted to see if anyone out of my friends and family think that this is a good story. If you want you can post after, but please don't continue the story!
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:13 am
A cloud of darkness drifted slowly by in the sky. A girl stared up looking into it, in a field of grass. Wild flowers blowing in the wind, with her long black hair above her head as she lies there in the middle field. The wind was howling in her hair going which ever way the wind took it, she then hears a call over the wind.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:14 am
“Sakuya Kyon!” a voice she knew from any where came from a distance. “Sakuya!” She sat up looked around the field, everywhere she turned her hair was blew into her face. She looked behind her and saw a shadow that matched the direction of the voice. “I know that voice! Could it be? Is it really you?” she got to her knees and straighten her back; she felt a drop hit her cheek. She wasn’t crying, ‘Rain?’ she thought, and she looked up to the dark cloud, water poured down from the sky. Her head shot back down to the shadow. “Kakashi? Please tell me are you really back from Japan”
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:15 am
The shadow shook it’s head ‘no’ said the young brave voice that now echoed. ‘No Sakuya, I’m not! I’m so sorry.’ The shadow turned and started to disappear into the storm that was starting; she stood up and ran to the shadow. “No! No don’t leave me alone! Not again!” she thought out loud, her long hair blowing behind her as she ran. ‘Sakuya you will wait for me! Right?’ the shadow reached out a hand, when she was close enough to reach it.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:17 am
She tried to grasp it, but the shadow disappeared. She fell to her knees crying, tears hit her face, like a steam of water rushing to the water fall at the end. “KAKASHI! Don’t leave me here with out you!” she shouted out. ‘Just remember that I-‘ Then the voice started to disappear with the shadow, instead this sound came to her. ‘BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!’ Her alarm clock was going off. Sakuya stirred in her bed, she thrashed back and forth. “Kakashi!” She kept calling, she woke up, and slowly opening her eyes she sat up in her bed looking at the Hidden leaf Head band that sat on her night-stand.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:18 am
“That you what??” she asked. She got out of bed and got ready for her day. “Mom I’m heading out!” She called; she was almost out the door when she stepped back. “Oh I almost forgot!” She walked back to her night stand, picked up the head band and put it around her neck. She pulled her hair from under it and let it fall back down. “Kakashi I will never from now on ever take this off!” From that being said she left the room on her way to work.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:19 am
.: |~Mean while in Japan a man stood up against the window edge and stared into the sky, he looked like he was in a dazed. What he was really doing was spacing out about his girl at home and how he wouldn’t see her for another week or so. “Sakuya my girl I will be home to you soon.” His face glowed in the sunlight he wore a mask over his mouth that lied on the top of his nose, he wore a head band that covered his left eye. It was the same as the head band he gave to Sakuya. “Just remember that I am a Fallen Angel without you near me.”~| :.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:20 am
A week later, Sakuya looked around as she headed to her job, she opened her eyes wide remembering what he would always call him self when she wasn’t near him. “I remember! At least I think do? ‘Just remember that I am your Fallen Angel!’ So that is what you were trying to tell me!” Sakuya looked to the sky her eyes gleaming in the blue sky. “I will! You just remember that I am nothing with out you! Come home soon!”
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:21 am
As she looked for her guy in the sky she was still walking the whole time she was thinking and she took one step off the curb, not noticing she did, she walked right in front of an oncoming car. ‘Honk-Honk’
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:22 am
The car kept honking at her, finally the last honk woke her up, but it was too late she couldn’t get out of the way. “SAKUYA!!!” she couldn’t move, "SAKUYA RUN GET OUT OF THE WAY!!" someone came up behind her and wrapped their arms around her. They disappeared out of site and onto the sidewalk. Also out of the way of the oncoming car. They both sat on the ground on the other side of the street, the car skid to a stop.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:23 am
The driver ran out of the car yelling. "What were you doing are you crazy running into the street like that!" The driver went back into his car and left in a hurry. "S-Sorry!" Sakuya said looking at the back end of the car as it left. "Are you okay Sakuya!?!" there was a hand that was extended out to her, to help her up from the ground. "Yeah I gues-" She paused "Wait!! How do you know my name?"
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:24 am
The sun was blocking her view of the man trying to help her up. "Hmmmmm Let's think about that!" The voice said leaning into her face and laid a hand on her headband that laid around her neck. "I gave you this and laid it around your neck before I left!" she looked up at the face was next to hers. "Kakashi??" She questioned she saw his face, she lunged her arms around his neck. "It IS you!!! Kakashi you’re back!!" Sakuya stepped back from Kakashi and looking him up and down, “Are you back?? Are you back for good or just for now??” When she said ‘For now’ she looked down as she was scared of what he might say.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:25 am
“Sakuya I came back to see you and I am sorry but I have to go back in a month.” Kakashi said in disappointment, he put a hand under her chin and lifted her head up. “But we have a month!” He smiled; well Sakuya could tell that he was smiling by just looking into his uncovered eye. He covers half of his face because of his Sharingan in his left eye; he had another headband over that eye and a mask over his mouth that laid on the top of his nose. “So Sakuya what were you thinking when you walked straight into the street? You could have been killed!” Kakashi started to lead the way back to her house, Sakuya walked beside him.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:27 am
He laid his arm around on her opposite shoulder, she then put her arm around his side. “Oh I was thinking about how you use to call your self a Fallen Angel when I wasn’t around you. I just wasn’t watching where I was going. I was just thinking that I wanted you to come home soon!” Sakuya said, as they walked up to her house, Kakashi opened the door for her and let her in first.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:28 am
“Mom I m going to skip work today I have a visitor here for a month!!” Her mother popped her head out of the kitchen and looked around to the door way. “Oh hello Kakashi you’re back! Would you like me to get you something??” She said as she took a step out to the two standing in the door way. Kakashi bowed shook his head no “No thank you! Not right now!” Sakuya grabbed his hand and dragged him to her bed room.
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