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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 8:02 pm
Useful Information Name: Dr. Isaac Conner Age: 27 Gender: Male Birthday: October 10th Location of residence: Baltimore MD Career: Mental counselor. Appearance: Race/nationality: Caucasian, American. Height: Approximately 6 feet and 3 inches tall. Weight: 173lbs. Hair color: Brown. Hair type: Moderately curly. Hair style/length: In the front his hair comes down about halfway covering the eyes. In the back and sides of his head the hair comes down just about halfway down the neck yet making room for his ears to be visible. Eye Color: Tree bark brown. Skin Color: Due to a recent trip to the closest beach he has a slightly darker skin tone from his tan. Body type: A slim build with some muscles showing however not quite a six pack, although due to Isaac's lack of confidence he believes he could look much better. Notable external features: A scar across his lower back from a surgery to be defined later below. Usual Clothing: Isaac usually clothes himself in a forest green polo-style golf shirt for he believes no occasion could be too causal for one. He always wears the same blackened pair of jeans which are a charcoal shade. For shoes you could usually catch him wearing white short socks with a brown leather pair of sandals. Although when it comes to handling his meetings with clients he will be found in his black custom tailored suit. Jewelry/accessories: Around his neck he wears a white gold locket necklace with his sisters picture in it. Besides that there is his silver watch. Personality Isaac used to be quite the cheerful doctor until he lost his resolve following a hefty lawsuit. If put to the test Isaac has the ability to do what is necessary though and tends to pursue some things into too much detail. During a therapy session at a prison it was also revealed that he is willing to protect himself. Isaac feels very responsible for the death of his little sister due to a fatal disease. These two incidents have struck a big blow sending Isaac into a depression large enough that he could qualify to be one of his own patients. Background After birth Isaac lived in a small Baltimore town-house with his mom and his little sister named Amy. When he was 18 and his sister 13 their mother died of a terminal illness in the kidneys. This caused much fear deep in Isaac's mind about his sister who looked at Isaac for the paternal guidance she was never able to receive. At 23 and studying at college for his PhD in Psychiatry he received news from his aunt that his fears had come true when his sister was diagnosed with the same fatal kidney illness and needed a transplant. Isaac's will to protect her came to be and he quickly flew home for the transplant. After going under the knife and leaving him permanently scarred he found out a shocking truth: Amy had died 4 hours after the operation and before Isaac could be out enough from the anesthetic to say goodbye. In her will she left Isaac the apartment back home as well as her pet fennec fox. Today: After living for 4 years hiding the burden Isaac could not take it anymore and began to slide in the workplace. Isaac's life turned even more dismal after a fateful day at prison talking with some of the disturbed in-mates, for Isaac was a state hired psychiatrist. When one of the in-mates turned violent Isaac did not hesitate to beat the living daylights out of them to protect himself. 2 months later Isaac had a potentially career ending lawsuit staring him down the face with jaws wide open. In the final outcome Isaac stayed away from prison, the place he once tried to help, at a price. Due to him being hired by the state to talk to the prisoners at first he only had experience conducting his practice for large companies. The prisoner truly got his revenge when Isaac could no longer be hired for no one wanted him. Opening up a small self owned office Isaac began again, however mundane his existence may have been he managed to scrape by just enough to live; just enough soon become an emotional wreck taking advice from his own patients. The only one who could ever really understand him was the fennec fox his sister used to keep as a pet, every night Isaac would sit and tell the fennec about life: he would listen. He would sketch and doodle in his spare time things the fox would do even to the point of thinking he was a Furry. When he sat with the fox Isaac felt slightly at peace, but still though the world would wear and tear at Isaac. Then the escape came in the form of a ticket, Weather it was intended to come to him or not the ticket had all he needed now: an escape. To him an escape from humanity is the most welcome escape he could be closer to nature, closer to the species that seemed to understand him in his time of need, not humanity but the fennec representative of the animal kingdom. Isaac the Taurian His wish: Isaac would want himself to be fused into Amy's favorite animal: The Fennec Fox, a species of fox known for its abnormally large ears and slightly smaller stature than most foxes posses. As a Taurian morph Isaac sees himself about 2 feet shorter even with his new lower quarters and covered with the Fennec's signature golden brown fur, like the fennec his ears are very large and on the top of his head, making up almost 1 foot gone from his usual height. His hands are more like the paws of the fennec with only 4 "fingers" possessing padded bottoms now. His hair color is no longer curly and has shifted to the golden brown hue of his fur while the scrawny body of the fennec has grown to match his slightly larger physique. The only remaining article of what he wore as a human is the locket with the picture of his sister still inside. Preferred Species list 1. Fennec Fox 2. Some breed of fox. 3. Something Canid in general.
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Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 11:56 am
Okay. All in all, this is pretty good~ There are a few inconsistencies though, and some things that generally wouldn't work with the plot. The first is the prison thing. How the heck did he get into prison? XD Also, if it was a short-term gig, why would he be in with obviously dangerous inmates, to the point of him having to defend himself for his life?
Another thing: the lawsuit. The way you made it out, it seems like Isaac would come to the island prior to the lawsuit, to escape having to go through it. In all honesty, I don't think the Kubri would choose a subject with so many social expectations. They try to avoid at-risk individuals, or those that are involved in heavy legal issues, because it would only place the island at risk of the individual's problems following them there. It would work, however, to have him arrive of Taurica Nesos directly following the lawsuit. Perhaps at that point, he's lost a lot - which WOULD call for someone needing an escape, yes?
The story of Isaac's relationship with his sister is pretty dramatic, and I don't think it would conflict with the RP plot too much at all. However, your angle of the transformation being his "escape" from not only the lawsuit but her death as well is far-fetched. If anything, the transformation would only bring him more problems, because it is not only an incredibly painful procedure, but a mentally disastrous one as well. Using a fennec as a species can work - just not the way you proposed it to, per se. It could be unknown to the Kubri that the fennec was Isaac's sister's favorite animal. I believe this fact wouldn't initially comfort Isaac, but rather place him in deeper despair, since every time he looks at himself, he sees a creature his sister once loved - and she's never going to be able to see him to appreciate it.
So! That's that. <3 Mull those over, edit your background a bit, and I'd say you're good to go. I'll check back on this once you're ready for evaluation again.
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Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 3:16 pm
Sorry about that I will do my best to fix those few kinks up, I actually wrote him in as a Counselor TO prison in-mates, that is my bad there for forgetting the sentence linking him to that. The way I saw it was one of the inmates gets violent during a therapy session and tries to attack Isaac. As for the fennec thing, expect the connection to be changed because you picked up a big point right there thanks.
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Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 3:42 pm
I made the changes that you suggested I make, I hope this is better if there is still any problems PLEASE do not hesitate to tell me, I want to make this character top of the line!
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 7:22 pm
Okay! The fennec pet is a little far-fetched, but eh... I guess it takes all types on this crazy world. XD I think it's a very good angle, you've done well with the edits you've done... 3nodding I suppose for this, I'll say approved! I do have a proposition for you, though: to up the drama, how would you feel if Isaac was actually fused with the pet? THAT would certainly be extreme, it's intense to even fathom the emotions that would cause in Isaac. It would make sense, too, from the canon point of view; the Kubri find out about a struggling semi-ex-psychiatrist, with a rare breed of fox as a pet. It would save them the trouble of acquiring the species, and they get a subject that doesn't have too many ties.
If you don't want to do that, though, that's perfectly fine. It would also make sense for the Kubri to do an experiment concerning interspecies taur/feral relations between morphed Isaac and his pet. ninja Whichever angle you want to go towards, just let me know and put it in your profile so I'll remember later~ XD
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 7:24 pm
Wonderful, absolutly wonderful. Is it okay if i go with the Kubri fusing Isaac to his pet? I love the idea you came up with.
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 8:50 pm
Yeah, sounds awesome. heart I'm glad you picked that choice, it's INTENSE. XD
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