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Craigor

PostPosted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 9:43 am


Alright, well since I've tried to offer some constructive criticism on other people's work, it's only fair that I submit something of my own for the same. I'm still working on this song, not sure if I have it where I want it yet.
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Deep Inside

Verse 1
I’ve been hiding / the way I feel inside /
Behind these tears I don’t cry //
I can’t deny it / no I don’t feel alright /
Despite the image on the outside //

Chorus
There’s a war / going on deep inside /
And I don’t know / how long I can stand to fight //
Could you help me please / ‘cause I’m scared but don’t know why /
Can you help me find who I am /
Deep Inside //

Verse 2
My mind is racing / oh God I’m so confused /
Oh I wish that I could hear you //
I’m tired of walking / in someone else’s shoes /
And I feel like I should tell you //

chorus 2
(that) There’s a war / going on deep inside /
And I don’t know / how long I can stand to fight //
Could you help me please / ‘cause I’m scared but don’t know why /
Can you help me find who I am //

bridge
I keep trying to be something / other than me /
I hide my true face from the light //
I just want to be the way / that you have made me /
‘Cause I know you made me just right /
You made me just right //


It's written on an acoustic guitar, mellow, cut-time feel to it.  
PostPosted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 6:32 pm


Great lyrics, now you just need to think of some music to go wit it.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 4:33 pm


These lyrics are awesome! biggrin biggrin mrgreen
PostPosted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 10:40 am


Dude, these lyrics, they speak to me. This song is so much like how I once was (maybe still am a little).

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 11:09 am


If this turns into an actual song, I would listen to it a lot.
PostPosted: Fri May 14, 2010 7:30 pm


I LOVE IT!!!! The lyrics are amazing and I would definitely listen to it all of the time if it were put to music. heart heart Plz look at my song and add lots of comments to help me out on it. I wrote it two different nights of just what I was feeling. It's under Songwriters, like this one, and the name of the thread is My Song. Plz comment.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 1:51 pm


if that song was famious it wood definetly b in my top 10 mabey even 5 i luv it heart
PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 3:57 am


OMGosh! OMGosh! OMGosh! OMGosh! OMGosh! OMGosh! AAAAHHHH!!! I love it sooooooo much!! heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 8:04 am


I'm ashamed to admit I only read this now... sweatdrop you can tell it's really coming from the heart... awsmazing... great song! blaugh
PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 5:50 pm


So I'm new and I just read your lyrics, but I had to comment I think they are awesome!! I don't know what your melody is for the song but I would love to try and put one to it... biggrin lol I'm only dreaming, I'm not really going to do that, unless you say I can. wink

Sar_Sarita


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PostPosted: Wed Jun 22, 2011 2:39 pm


"Oh I wish that I could hear you //
I’m tired of walking / in someone else’s shoes"
I really like that part of the song. biggrin Good job.
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