Alright, well since I've tried to offer some constructive criticism on other people's work, it's only fair that I submit something of my own for the same. I'm still working on this song, not sure if I have it where I want it yet.
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Deep Inside
Verse 1
I’ve been hiding / the way I feel inside /
Behind these tears I don’t cry //
I can’t deny it / no I don’t feel alright /
Despite the image on the outside //
Chorus
There’s a war / going on deep inside /
And I don’t know / how long I can stand to fight //
Could you help me please / ‘cause I’m scared but don’t know why /
Can you help me find who I am /
Deep Inside //
Verse 2
My mind is racing / oh God I’m so confused /
Oh I wish that I could hear you //
I’m tired of walking / in someone else’s shoes /
And I feel like I should tell you //
chorus 2
(that) There’s a war / going on deep inside /
And I don’t know / how long I can stand to fight //
Could you help me please / ‘cause I’m scared but don’t know why /
Can you help me find who I am //
bridge
I keep trying to be something / other than me /
I hide my true face from the light //
I just want to be the way / that you have made me /
‘Cause I know you made me just right /
You made me just right //
It's written on an acoustic guitar, mellow, cut-time feel to it.
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Deep Inside
Verse 1
I’ve been hiding / the way I feel inside /
Behind these tears I don’t cry //
I can’t deny it / no I don’t feel alright /
Despite the image on the outside //
Chorus
There’s a war / going on deep inside /
And I don’t know / how long I can stand to fight //
Could you help me please / ‘cause I’m scared but don’t know why /
Can you help me find who I am /
Deep Inside //
Verse 2
My mind is racing / oh God I’m so confused /
Oh I wish that I could hear you //
I’m tired of walking / in someone else’s shoes /
And I feel like I should tell you //
chorus 2
(that) There’s a war / going on deep inside /
And I don’t know / how long I can stand to fight //
Could you help me please / ‘cause I’m scared but don’t know why /
Can you help me find who I am //
bridge
I keep trying to be something / other than me /
I hide my true face from the light //
I just want to be the way / that you have made me /
‘Cause I know you made me just right /
You made me just right //
It's written on an acoustic guitar, mellow, cut-time feel to it.
