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PostPosted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 6:40 pm


[Literacy Trial Example: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=9853129 ]
[If it needs to be longer, do tell me!]

Character Name: Daniel Sherrington
Sex: Male. A bubbling pool of testosterone, honestly!
Date of Birth: March 12, 1984
Age: 23
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 142 pounds
Build: Kind of athletic. Maybe if he worked out more he'd be great at sports.
Hair: Brown, a bit past shoulder length and slightly wavy. Some girls would kill to have it, amazingly.
Eyes: Blue
Place of Birth: Pensacola, Florida
Occupation: Retail work at one store or another while hoping for a terrific opportunity.
Hits: Relaxing times wedged in between a book and a computer; good food; silly conspiracy theories.
Misses: People you can't escape from; crowds; boring places with nothing to watch or read.

Personality: Danny is usually rather easy-going and jovial to those who don't know him. While he's as prone to frustration and anger as anyone else working a retail job, he's pretty good at keeping that bottled up until he can talk about it behind the offending person's back. Somewhat of a rumor-monger at times, he loves picking apart popular conspiracy theories while presenting new ones of his own. A bit shy at times, especially when someone gets closer than just being a customer or distant aquaintance, he tries to be a pretty boy without really having the personality to back it up - for this reason, he's still single.

History: The second of two sons, Danny was never really as successful as his elder. The son of a retail store manager (different company than he worked at until recently), he was reasonably well taken care of as he went through primary schooling, coasting with a C average. In college, always two years after his brother who went into business, he decided on an alternate route and delved into the sciences, finally settling on two-year degrees in physics and industrial chemistry. Again, he graduated with a 2.2 GPA, just a C average, due to being easily distracted sketching robots and ships in his notebooks.
While his father never did like Danny's choice of major, his mom was at least supportive and brother uninterested. His father did, however, take kinder to Dan's move into retail as a starting career out of college, due to the shortage of jobs in his field close to where he lived. Retail, however, was not really his thing - He soon started to feel his knowledge was going to waste selling shoes and kitchen appliances.

Present Life: Rapidly growing tired of his employment, Daniel is also putting up with still being not only single, but single without a single date in his life. While he's considered that he may be gay or bi, Danny has ruled that out because he's just not interested in the male figure at all. Due to all of this, he' at what he feels is a dead end in life, and is checking classifieds and 'help wanted' ads of all kinds in a hope to freshen his life up a bit.

Reason for becoming a Taurian: Daniel is rather open-minded and fascinated by things such as werewolf movies and ancient myths and legends. After the initial shock, awkwardness, and general being upset, he'll likely come to enjoy the unique new form. In addition, aside from his family, he'd hardly be missed by anyone - and even they'd not mind so much if he left a note.

Species preference:
1) Gemsbok, female
2) Donkey, female
3) Ostrich, female
4) Caribou, female

Mythical species preference!

1) Unicorn, female (Arabian Horse with the lower legs and tail of an Arabian Oryx, young narwhal horn would likely be grafted to the head)
2) Eastern Dragon (Likely a blend of crocodile, snake for the extra length and flexibility, and some form of canid for longer legs, fur and a more mammalish face), female
3) Kirin (still deciding what exact species would have to be mixed for this), female
4) Griffon, female (Some kind of eagle and a lioness bolted together)
No matter which, his upper body will eventually mold to match the sex of his lower. In fact, after the initial horror about becoming a girl, she'll probably enjoy it. Being a bit on the shy side will seem to fit more, and she'll get to wear cuter clothes without being worried about how people see her.

Current funding: ~19,200g
Funding status: Not Begging. Yet.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 8:10 pm


Well then! While I was reading through this character sheet, I noticed something: it seems like Daniel is kind of a mishmash of desirable traits, to make his character "work" for Taurica Nesos. Many of these elements work, such as the bioscience angle, and the retail (although it seems a bit out of place - we don't really need to be selling anything on Taurica Nesos, everything is supplied (communist style! XD)). However, the most prominent feature in here is how Daniel's been unable to get into a romantic relationship because he's a "girly boy" - yet, a shy one. Not the best combo, in dating terms. You want the species he's spliced with to be female - this is actually a great angle to play upon, and make the most defined in his bio. Think about it: his whole life he'd be completely awkward, but after splicing, yaaay he's a girl and it all works. XD But THEN there's the whole "accck, I'm a girl now, but all this time I've been trying to pick up girls MYSELF. WhatdoIdo?!" aspect. It really sounds like you could make a fun and humorous character off of this, and I like. XD

Following this tangent, I have a bit of a question: Concerning what we were talking about earlier, would you want the human torso to mutate into a female figure, or stay male? I'd assume the former, but it was never really made clear to me.

Sooo, if you want, expound upon that male/female role aspect- just try to keep him from being as "muddled" as he seems now, in all the directions he's going. It's not a bad thing, but in RP terms, a character with direction is more solid. 3nodding

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 3:09 pm


Okayapproved! XD It all pretty much works, and it seems like you'll play more into the whole "oh noes I'm a girl" thing once the RP actually starts up, which works too. :3

[edit] oh, as for lit approval~ I actually want you to RP with someone, just just show a snippet of RP... Yet... Nobody's role playing. sweatdrop Give it some time, and I'll get back to you on that. I may have to rally the troops for some action, here. ;;
PostPosted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 3:22 pm


Yeah. I was kind of surprised last time I looked, that -still- nobody else had posted a danged thing either on their own or not. o.o

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