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Dyllea

 
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 11:18 pm


I drew this a while ago. I've been staring at it and now it looks like something's not right. Help me? <:]
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 11:37 pm


You know, at first I was thinking, "What is she thinking?!?!? it looks great!" . . .. but then after a little staring, I think the head may be a little misbalanced with the business/lack of negative space around the wings. Maybe a small frill on the back of the neck similar to the wings would help, if not that then maybe bring a treebranch out behind him in the same place.

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Dyllea

 
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 3:02 pm


So just a bit of decorating here and there?
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