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 Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2005 12:16 pm
This is my newest poem... about my best friend who died on march 7 2004.
Measuring The Tears.
A tear a week is not all I cry,
A tear every day will pass me by.
Not a day will past you don't cross my mind,
And I look up to heaven and start to cry.
I know that you are alright now,
But I still wonder why you left.
So happy you made me and you'd help me through,
Nothing seemed hard because you convinced me I could.
Well now that you're gone I dont know how to cope.
Without you I've lost all hope.
Everybody tries to make me believe,
That someday Ill see you again,
And my pain will be relieved.
I try to believe them and keep a smile on,
But times like now I just crash down.
I Try and try to think the best of it,
But this time I cant,
I've just gotta slit.
I try to resist,
But the blade insists.
So what happens now?
Do I Just Break Down?
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 1:12 pm
that sounds like a great poem and i think writing is a great way to get your feelings out. its better than keeping them inside. if you ever need someone to talk to ill listen. and i know i dont kow you but it always helps to have someone to talk to.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 7:25 pm
"Not a day will past you don't cross my mind"... will past should be 'will pass that', just so you know. Otherwise, it's a good poem.
-Lumi
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 9:04 pm
Depressed
I sit here alone listening to the rain,
trying to believe the words everyone says.
"youre Pretty" "I love you" are phrases I often hear,
but who really means it?
and who is sincere?
I doubt you would even tell me the truth,
so youll tell me what will make me feel better,
but if it isnt the truth,
then why should I care?
Eventually in the end,
Ill probably get hurt,
That always seems to happen,
I get treated like dirt.
So next time you want to tell me you care,
Make sure you mean it,
And that its sincere.
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 9:12 pm
Empty
The halls aren't the same without you here.
I'm waiting for you to come stand over here.
You used to sit in this spot here beside me,
and now the spot is just vacant and empty.
Soon I'll see you and fill this void,
Unless something keeps me,
But that I will avoid.
The time is drawing near,
to end my time here,
I know I should think of all the others,
But I don't care and they wouldn't either.
It would only be a short week till the forgot,
In their hearts I dont have a spot.
My spot is up in heaving with you,
Not on earth with nothing to do.
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 9:14 pm
Died For Love
I sit in the park where I dwell
For this boy I love so well
He took my heart away from me
Now he wants to set me free
I see a girl on his lap
He says things to her he never said to me
I ran home to cry on my bed
Not a word to mother was said
Father came home late that night
He looked at me from left to right
He saw me hanging from a rope
He took his knife to cut me down
And on my dress a note was found:
Dig my grave Dig it deep
Dig my grave From head to feet
And on the top place a dove
And remember this, I died for love.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 12:54 pm
You're a little inconsistant with the inter-sentence capitalization, but other than that I like your poems, they are very deep...and sad. You write a good deal too, keep it up, you have talent.
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 8:31 pm
Oterys You're a little inconsistant with the inter-sentence capitalization, but other than that I like your poems, they are very deep...and sad. You write a good deal too, keep it up, you have talent. Thank you biggrin My poems are basically all my feelings so yeah... but my random capitals are just my randomness.... i dont notice i do it... but I tend to so ya know... its kinda crazy but anywho.. thanks!!!
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 8:35 pm
Another Night in Hell
Living here without you,
Is the hardest thing for me to do,
I want to kiss you and hold you so tight,
But instead I have to wait another night,
Another night without you here,
Another night you wont be near,
I want you to know how much I care,
And that everyday I tried to be there,
I tried to help you but I guess I failed,
So this is my punishment to live in this hell.
So Let me sleep forever,
so I can have you here again.
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 8:40 pm
Take It Away
You left me here just a few weeks ago,
Now I don't know, I just feel so low...
You were the other half to complete me,
You were the one who always trusted me.
I always knew you would be my best friend,
The one who I could always confide in.
I wish your were right here with me,
So you could see the pain here inside of me.
You didn't think what you'd leave behind,
and now you're gone and I can't even decide.
I can't decide what's right or whats wrong.
That was what you would help me with for so long.
You made sure I always made the right decision,
But why couldn't you take your own advice from within?
You made sure I didn't hurt myself,
Then you turned around and did it yourself.
I want to know why you did this and left us behind,
Why you thought we were so blind.
I knew you we'rent happy,
I knew you were in pain.
But I wish that I could've just taken it all away.
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Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 9:29 pm
Nesce "Not a day will past you don't cross my mind"... will past should be 'will pass that', just so you know. Otherwise, it's a good poem.
-Lumi I agree, although the original version does add to the sadness that went into the writing...
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Posted: Sat Sep 24, 2005 10:13 am
Oterys Nesce "Not a day will past you don't cross my mind"... will past should be 'will pass that', just so you know. Otherwise, it's a good poem.
-Lumi I agree, although the original version does add to the sadness that went into the writing...
It's not that it's taking away anything from the writing, it's fixing a grammatical error. You can't have will past. You can have will pass, or has passed, but not will past. Past is a time frame, not a verb. =
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Posted: Sun Nov 06, 2005 12:31 pm
I say grammical shmammical!!!!
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Posted: Sun Nov 06, 2005 12:33 pm
Sorry about the lack of Poetry in here, I do have alot more, I have just been really busy with work and whatnot, and the whole applying to college thing. So Im working on getting more in here... dont you worry!! I havent died or anything!!
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